I would give a higher review since the art, character aesthetics and over-all design is great, but the character interactions (especially the MC and GF) bring it down.
The story builds well at the start and is intriguing, but all the paths (so far) are the same beta-cuck paths with slightly different dialogue. Even the DOM MC route is just her doing all the DOM/ALPHA lines for you. 98 percent of the erotic lines between the GF and the MC are from her experience, or are her TELLING YOU what she wants to hear you say/do.
Just like heroin, after the first sex scene it's just repetitively trying to reach the same high, but never getting it. Some of the redundant themes and word choice doesn't help this: too much Nathan, lack of diversity in text (simple 5-word lines, etc), over-use of emoticons, "horny boy," or "yes, that's what I thought," "Is that right/correct," etc.
Angry complaint:
If your GF is spending the night with another dude against your wishes while you're at home; if she is calling him a bull and flirting with him CONSTANTLY within the first week she bangs him; if she is fucking him repeatedly and even potentially reserving exclusive sexual acts for him while denying you other women...it's not NETORASE PHONE, it's A CUCK'S PHONE, and that's not her bull, it's her new boyfriend. Welcome to polyandry.
Game could be 5 stars with a rework of the DOM route, focusing more on the MC for dialogue, especially in the erotic scenes/lines...more flirting with the other girls or even a group-share, swinging or open-relationship feel to it. Something different than just editing some words a different color but not actually changing the meaning or tone.