Le Stag, I played now both Dominant and Submissive as well my first time Balanced route, overall the VN is pretty well done if stick to the Balanced route, then every conversation is perfect, but as well on Dominant as Submissive path felt often off. Like in MC Dominant path, often Laura act on her own, like you let her go to a party, expecting her to come home, and she defy that by staying at Ashley's place to sleep, as Dom this require punishment for her, because she disobbeyed, which sadly doesn't happen, not even can command her to come home no matter she tired. While on MC Submissive, often Laura act submissive too asking you if you ok she does that, while if MC is submissive, his prefferences shouldn't actualy matter, she is the dom and her decisions are golden and should be respected. So overall the best path is Balanced as there she does listen to MC and keep it fun on both sides. For the other 2 paths, they really could use more strict content, Like MC Dominant, Laura has to obbey or punishment follows if she doesn't, while MC Submissive, should be always a kick in the balls for MC how good her bulls are and how pathetic he is, without asking if he okay. Anyway you did a great job on this VN, just on the extreme paths you been a bit to soft.