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cloudstrife

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How far does the game go? I'm at chapter 28 and sadly still haven't seen Laura pop her anal cherry with Nathan
 

cloudstrife

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Not only that, he is written inconsistently.
Got to think how Laura.mentions he is a super nice guy in reality while he is calling him a cumslut behind her back with you immediately.

Not to mention all the other interactions where you have to put him in his place (when available, you are forced to take it in 2 occasions), every time is the same, like he doesn't learn.

It is like the author tried to draw him in some way, but then forgot or needed a foil for cucks that also like sucking dick.

If I am not looking for missing pictures, he is out instantly.
Nathan seems like a pretty nice guy, but Oliver basically treats the MC like crap pretty much from the start
 

DeviantFun

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Nathan seems like a pretty nice guy, but Oliver basically treats the MC like crap pretty much from the start
The fact that Laura is fine with it on any path (even as a sub cuck that shows how much she cares actually) is one of the worst thing in the game writing.

Nathan is fine, when he acts like an ass (no additinal pictures there) it is under Laura request which makes it more than fine.

Like how is she so against Nathan saying just minor things but then she is fine with Oliver shitting on you (and her) at every occasion?
 

cloudstrife

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And I'm having a conversation about it with Ashley and Tara, which is great because Tara is smoking hot and I'd love the MC to start doing stuff with her, so hopefully if I make the right choices that might happen sometime:)
 

JQuillon

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The fact that Laura is fine with it on any path (even as a sub cuck that shows how much she cares actually) is one of the worst thing in the game writing.
The thing with Oliver is, you can get rid of him for good. Don't like him? Tell Laura to never see him again and he's out, so he's a temporary inconvenience at worst (and yeah, some guys really are assholes, who would have thought?). ;)

Besides, I guess some people who play on the sub path actually like/love him and would like more of him, lol.
 

cloudstrife

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The thing with Oliver is, you can get rid of him for good. Don't like him? Tell Laura to never see him again and he's out, so he's a temporary inconvenience at worst (and yeah, some guys really are assholes, who would have thought?). ;)

Besides, I guess some people who play on the sub path actually like/love him and would like more of him, lol.
Well I'm on the Sub cuck path and I still think Oliver is an asshole lol
 

DeviantFun

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The thing with Oliver is, you can get rid of him for good. Don't like him? Tell Laura to never see him again and he's out, so he's a temporary inconvenience at worst (and yeah, some guys really are assholes, who would have thought?). ;)

Besides, I guess some people who play on the sub path actually like/love him and would like more of him, lol.
I know, the fact is you cannot know beforehand, at the beginning he acts like a normal human being which is a bit intoxicated and just got a BJ and apologizes profusely, then the dev forgets it and you need to go back and hope that you have a save.
Granted you just reminded me about another thing Laura does without permission, giving him her number.

Oliver is not discussed in that decision aside from "oh but he is very nice trust me", and looking at how apologetic he is you might be fooled. then he starts on acting like an ass, no way to stop it, the fact that Laura is more than ok with his behaviour is telling about how the "strong" relationship between her and MC is working out.

Even on the cuck path that wouldn't fly if she was written to care enough.
I mean she checks about ruined orgasms but not about other men humiliationg MC? seriously?
 

vaguely_canon

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This already happens in at least 2 specific occasions NOT considering the situations where MC cannot say anything aside from "I do"

Edit: I have to correct myself, she plans these things, it is not random people on the street, same concept tho
Ah, well guess I'm 100% out on this game then xD Definitely sounds like setting up at the very least an NTR route down the road.
 
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DeviantFun

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Ah, well guess I'm 100% out on this game then xD Definitely sounds like setting up at the very least an NTR route down the road.
Look heavy NTR is not planned, and it will not be afaik, sometimes there are some NTRish vibes but in general you can play dom/subslut if you close one eye over some "story driven" things.

That sounds hella like a setup for some hard NTR to me, tbh
It feels that way in that moment, but then the writing says that MC loved it, still leave a bad aftertaste but it is not written as NTR.

Try it a bit and then decide, ok?
 

cloudstrife

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Okay I'm confused about something, I'm just having the first madhouse conversation between Ashley, Tara and Laura and after Ashley posted a pic of her being fucked in the ass Laura said that she wants the MC to do it to her too, but I told Laura that I wanted Nathan to be the one to pop her anal cherry, so have I done something wrong or is the MC being the first for Laura's anal cherry unavoidable?
 

vaguely_canon

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I know, the fact is you cannot know beforehand, at the beginning he acts like a normal human being which is a bit intoxicated and just got a BJ and apologizes profusely, then the dev forgets it and you need to go back and hope that you have a save.
Granted you just reminded me about another thing Laura does without permission, giving him her number.

Oliver is not discussed in that decision aside from "oh but he is very nice trust me", and looking at how apologetic he is you might be fooled. then he starts on acting like an ass, no way to stop it, the fact that Laura is more than ok with his behaviour is telling about how the "strong" relationship between her and MC is working out.

Even on the cuck path that wouldn't fly if she was written to care enough.
I mean she checks about ruined orgasms but not about other men humiliationg MC? seriously?
Yeah, the more I hear about what goes down in this game, the more it sounds like it's inching closer and closer to NTR but the dev doesn't want to just admit it for whatever reason. Maybe I'm just too old fashioned, but I honestly don't see how the MCs can be said to have a strong relationship when femc seems like she's totally turning into an addicted cock slut.
 

DeviantFun

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Okay I'm confused about something, I'm just having the first madhouse conversation between Ashley, Tara and Laura and after Ashley posted a pic of her being fucked in the ass Laura said that she wants the MC to do it to her too, but I told Laura that I wanted Nathan to be the one to pop her anal cherry, so have I done something wrong or is the MC being the first for Laura's anal cherry unavoidable?
You can avoid it during the act iirc.

To be clear, if my memory serves me well she will offer you her ass, you can refuse, you can do the same with creampies later on.
On some paths you have the chance to do it later, on others you won't be able to anymore.

Respect youself and fuck that whore's ass. ;)
 
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vaguely_canon

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Look heavy NTR is not planned, and it will not be afaik, sometimes there are some NTRish vibes but in general you can play dom/subslut if you close one eye over some "story driven" things.



It feels that way in that moment, but then the writing says that MC loved it, still leave a bad aftertaste but it is not written as NTR.

Try it a bit and then decide, ok?
I'm probably just more sensitive to this kind of thing than most (been cheated on before, and it is a bitch to get over) so any kinda NTR vibes are a no go for me personally. Hopefully the dev sticks to their stated goal of no hard NTR, but since it seems like a VERY popular kink online, they'd honestly be crazy not to include it even if it's just as an 'option'.
 

cloudstrife

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You can avoid it during the act iirc
Well I remember when me, Laura and Nathan did the first group sex chat Nathan spoke about her ass and if she'd ever had anal sex before, I chose no so he said he wanted to fuck it at some point, then on a later day Laura showed me a pic of her with a butt plug and asked if I wanted to take her anal virginity, I said I wasn't interested and she said that if I didn't do it then Nathan would and I told her I was fine just having her pussy, so it seems odd that it's trying to push for her to do it with the MC again when I told her I wanted to see her do it with someone else
 

JQuillon

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Well I remember when me, Laura and Nathan did the first group sex chat Nathan spoke about her ass and if she'd ever had anal sex before, I chose no so he said he wanted to fuck it at some point, then on a later day Laura showed me a pic of her with a butt plug and asked if I wanted to take her anal virginity, I said I wasn't interested and she said that if I didn't do it then Nathan would and I told her I was fine just having her pussy, so it seems odd that it's trying to push for her to do it with the MC again when I told her I wanted to see her do it with someone else
Honestly, I think you're "safe" (can't vouch for that as I chose the other way :ROFLMAO:), and if you said no, Nathan will get her ass cherry.

Never fear, you'll get pictures of it and a stroke by stroke retelling of the occasion by Laura, though. ;)
 
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slightchance

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Yeah, the more I hear about what goes down in this game, the more it sounds like it's inching closer and closer to NTR but the dev doesn't want to just admit it for whatever reason. Maybe I'm just too old fashioned, but I honestly don't see how the MCs can be said to have a strong relationship when femc seems like she's totally turning into an addicted cock slut.
I mean her becoming a cock slut who enjoys any kind of dick is more hotwifing than doing all the steps of 'corruption' with less than a handful of guys over a time period of several months. That's how you can catch feelings.
The things we don't get to see is a slice of their every day life. Maybe they're vibing together like no one else in between escapades and it's nothing the best fuck is ever be able to challenge.
If she does something they didn't 110% agreed on - well there's always room for miscommunication. Every good story needs a little wiggle room though, to surprise the player. Their rules are a framework, not the completed house. The game already does a lot of backtracking to explain every minute detail of every encounter.
 

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I mean her becoming a cock slut who enjoys any kind of dick is more hotwifing than doing all the steps of 'corruption' with less than a handful of guys over a time period of several months. That's how you can catch feelings.
The things we don't get to see is a slice of their every day life. Maybe they're vibing together like no one else in between escapades and it's nothing the best fuck is ever be able to challenge.
If she does something they didn't 110% agreed on - well there's always room for miscommunication. Every good story needs a little wiggle room though, to surprise the player. Their rules are a framework, not the completed house. The game already does a lot of backtracking to explain every minute detail of every encounter.
People forget that Laura is a fantasy...
She's not bound by IRL emotions, feelings, etc.
She's perfectly capable of getting dicked down by multiple dudes without catching feelings...:LOL:

Which makes some of these comments even more hilarious, because that was her entire reasoning for adding Oliver...
So she could avoid considering Nathan a 2nd boyfriend, and just be the cock slut GF the MC wants her to be...:LOL:
She's not going to suddenly fall in love with Oliver and leave the MC.
She just likes Oliver's dick... :LOL:

The most difficult scenes/pics for me in this VN/game, are Laura 'lovingly' kissing Nathan...
Those are some very emotionally intimate moments she has with Nathan... But folks worried about Oliver NTR... :LOL:

In the last few updates, Laura has shifted to being Ashley's main competition for alpha slut...
And I think the whole point of adding Nathan's new GF is to clearly show Laura isn't 'jealous' or emotionally invested in Nathan as a 'romantic' partner/LI/BF...
 
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