Summary of Feedback:
The user is providing a passionate and highly critical review of a game, particularly focusing on its story and character progression—especially in relation to themes like
netorase (NTR) and relationship dynamics.
Main Points:
- Loss of Meaningful Dynamics: The original dynamic between the main character (MC) and his girlfriend has devolved. What started as a consensual netorase scenario has now turned into blatant cheating with little emotional weight or player involvement.
- Character Critique: Laura, once an engaging character, is now portrayed as excessively promiscuous without meaningful development or consequences. Her actions feel more like betrayal than part of a kink-based relationship.
- Story Progression Issues:
- The plot has become stale and repetitive.
- The player feels increasingly sidelined in favor of other characters (like Mike or Oliver).
- Missed opportunities for plot development (e.g., creative rule-breaking, emotional payoff).
- Gameplay and Updates:
- Quality-of-life improvements (like replay menus) are appreciated.
- Update length has decreased, leading to dissatisfaction.
- The developer is praised for sticking to an update schedule and showing clear effort, but there's concern about burnout or complacency now that the game has a steady following.
- Suggestions:
- Use the netorase theme more creatively.
- Make character actions feel earned or consequential.
- Balance erotic content with emotional storytelling.
- Avoid contradictions like "talk of creampies" that result in condom scenes—it breaks immersion.
- Tone: Frustrated but loyal. The writer clearly cares about the game and has stuck with it for over a year. They want the project to succeed and evolve in a meaningful way but feel the current path is unsatisfying.
Globally, I have a hard time taking seriously any feedback that says updates have become smaller. Factually, it's the exact opposite, and an opinion that spouts things like that, just because "2 chapters < 3 chapters", independently of their actual length, never seems serious to me.
PS: roleplaying a creampie with condoms still work. That's why it's roleplaying.