VN - Ren'Py - New Antioch [R0.4 Public] [TheRedMyst]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    D4rkK1ng

    i just played the game and i loved it , its simply a masterpiece
    very good story with post apocalyptic / greco roman influence/diablo / theme which i loved it..
    moreover beautiful li , and TRUE Male MC (not a kid not immature man child, no weakling) which is almost rare these days.
    Overall i believe its one of the best VN i have ever played.... i hope it continue like this.
  2. 3.00 star(s)

    korisnik2007a

    Version Played : R0.3 Public

    The visuals are great and distinct. The worldbuilding is somewhat unique for these kinds of games, and has potential but is also somewhat lackluster in it's execution (Chapter 2+).

    My main gripe is with the plot though. You start as a capable seemingly intelligent warrior, and through extremely convoluted writing your character becomes a useless weakling. Trying not to spoil much, but the way Ch2 was written (or the start of it to be more precise) is just so silly and requires insane suspension of disbelief. If it were just made more natural, believable, this game would leave a much better taste on my palate.

    As it seems to be a more story/plot-driven game, it matters a lot more compared to porn-driven games.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    Jaango

    Love games with this kind of settings. Love to see war arena and fights in its. Nice visual and nice story. Love to see more political wars and blood in future updates. Nice LI's , enjoyed the humour in it. The boar is the best fighting partner MC got, hoping to see him in future updates too.

    Overall I enjoyed the game . Keep up the good work dev looking forward to next updates
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    LewdLife

    Story : in porn games, story is not the first focus, but in this game, story itself is quite Original, not like those COMMON INCEST MOTHERFKER SISFKER games based upon college themes.
    Being in post modern retro mediaeval style provides quite a new environment for post apocalyptic world styles, where everything goes hand in hand, modern world tech + mediaeval era living style.

    Renders : top notch, nothing else to say, they're quite the top notch

    Regular updates have good content size as well as the frequency of updates is also good.


    Overall, the game is a bang, this game deserves to be in the top sections of f95 collection of good games, should also be getting more funding for what the dev is doing.
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    Éama

    This game was an extremely pleasant surprise for so many reasons. So I'll just get the mediocre stuff out of the way first.

    The change between modern fashion and antiquity fashion was a bit glaring. I know that this is not really a free choice, as all developers rely on the availability of assets. But I still want to mention that it's unlikely that there would be two fashion types at the time, without at least mixing up. It's also quite strange to get escorted by a golden knight to meet a woman in an office dress. Or have a presumably badass war veteran wear a roman uniform in one scene and a sweater in the next.

    As a VN player who pays a lot of attention to detail in VN scenes these differences were sometimes so glaring and unexplained, that they bordered on immersion breaking. An explanatory sentence here and there might have helped.

    Now that we have this nuisance out of the way. Let me just state how positively impressed I am with the quality of the writing, both regarding dialogue and the plot as a whole. I've seen Netflix shows recently with worse execution. And while some twists are very predictable and only thinly veiled, they still come across as intended and planned.

    I absolutely loved that the LIs were introduced slowly and not dropped with parachutes as is so usual for many AVNs. During chapter one it really takes a lot of time to even meet them. For some it took until chapter 2 to make an appearance. And this is exactly how it should be.

    The renders are very decent, definitely better than average, but there is still room for improvement. The audio design on the other hand is convincing. The berserker scream in the Arena caught me off-guard and was very intimidating, but there are many little sound effects like the laughter of the senators that I found helpful to make the scenes feel more dynamic and alive.

    The amount of content per update (it's published in chapters) is just right. It's meaty enough but doesn't take forever.

    I enjoy that there are interesting male characters in this novel. Too often AVN means that it's basically a one-man, many-women show. Not so in New Antioch. Despite the lore reasons that explain some role reversals in this Universe, there are still amazing male protagonists. Often in the role of Arena fighters with their own stories and redemption arcs, how short lived they might be.

    The MC is good looking and likable. He is a bit of a brute, but also a brooder, I like that he has doubts himself and is questioning things. He is a Chad, but not a Superchad. His weaknesses are clear. I hope they get explored more in the future. Nothing would be more of a waste than to see him rise to Superman-Status from here on out. But that's not really a fear, just a careful reminder. A strong man is allowed to have weak spots and I do think this MC has plenty of them and it makes him much more relatable and interesting.

    As you can see, I have lots to say. I could add more, but I don't want to overstay my welcome. We will see where the journey goes and I will support the project.
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    Meloned

    I wish real good luck to this game, it's amazing and beautiful. Such a treasure, the cooks are amazing. More games should be like this, very inspirational and lovely. I hope to see more games like these, such a scenery and memorable images. These games really inspiring me to make one myself. It keeps me going, I can't believe im saying this but these experiences is just something not to be missed on. I wish I can support these creators more. Thank you and I hope the game receives it's deserved success.
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    Szpirit-

    This game is the living proof that it is not necessary to put several sexual scenes one after another to make you interested, don't get me wrong, the game has sexual scenes (3 that I know of at the moment) but they are totally worth it because both in quality of animation, story, protagonist, choices, everything is spectacular.

    Honestly when I opened the game I didn't feel like playing it, I didn't expect much because games like this have to have a very good developer or everything goes to shit and loses meaning, but the developer of this game has won my support and I look forward to the next chapter, for these types of games is worth continuing to support new game creators.

    10/10 Male Domination: (The mc can be very dominant if you want and I love that)

    10/10 Renders: (Despite not seeing other games from this developer which is supposed to be his first game, it's a great game with very good renders, even better than some of the top rated games on the forum.)

    8/10 Sex Scenes: There are few, which is not bad because the game does not need it, but it is something personal that I would like to have more as the story progresses if decisions are made to have scenes of this style. On the other hand, the ones there are are very good and are very well animated.

    9/10 Story: Because I am not a native English speaker it was difficult for me to focus fully on the story at the beginning because of the dialogues, but when I did I even managed to feel similar feelings to the characters, such as sadness, anger, resentment or desire for revenge.
  8. 3.00 star(s)

    talion777

    Meh. That describes almost every aspect of this game for me so far (up to version 3). The story line has a good premise but a somewhat silly execution. The dialogue is ok. The art is actually pretty good, but the lewd content is low, which would be fine if the story was a bit stronger, but it's not. The pretexts for meeting the women are shallow and dumb. The "fight" scenes anti-climactic because it's turn based rather than time-based so the instant you learn the moves, which is very quickly, the whole process becomes boring. Still, there are some good bones here, and it is early in the game, with the scene just really being set for the main body. It has lots of room and time to improve, and it may, but for now it's just a time killer. Worth a future look to see which direction it goes but definitely not a top tier game so far.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    hysepReC

    You ever play an adult game or VN and think "Damn, the story is so good that I'd still play this even if it had no porn."? That's how I felt playing this VN.

    It's a bit of a slow starter so if it doesn't hook you immediately, just keep playing and give it a fair chance. It gets better, I promise. For me, it started to pick up towards the end of the first chapter when the MC meets Aquila (one of the love interests). They play a D&D inspired game together which I found pretty fun and it did a good job of making Aquila likable despite the fact that the real reason she was there was to steal a relic and kill the MC (though she ultimately decides not to go through with the latter when she gets the chance).

    After that encounter, the MC has to leave his home for reasons I won't spoil. He ends up imprisoned and has to, literally, fight for his freedom, first in the pits, then in gladiator style arena fights. There are a few fighting minigames here but they are fairly simple and straightforward and you can easily scroll back if you make a mistake.

    The setting is clearly heavily inspired by the roman empire, but there's also a dose of fantasy (at least one of the characters can do magic) and advanced technology so it feels quite unique. At least to me. I don't think I've ever seen another VN with a setting like this.

    Visually, it looks quite nice. Maybe it's not absolute top tier in this department, but it's definitely above average and I find all the potential love interests attractive. I especially like the way Aquila looks. She's pretty but also has facial scars (as does the MC). Just from looking at her you can tell that she's probably been through some shit, her appearance really fits the dystopian setting of this VN.

    In terms of sexual content, there isn't much yet (some nudity, one of the LIs masturbating while watching the MC fight and a couple of blowjobs). But as mentioned at the start of this review, the story so good that I don't mind. That said, what little sexual content there is, I found hot so that bodes well for the future. It seems like big dick worship is going to be a major part of the sexual content in this VN. There's a widespread disease that causes nearly all men to have small dicks, but our MC is conveniently immune to the effects of said disease and has a huge dick, lol. Also, he secretes pheromones that makes women more attracted to him and he cums like a horse. Oh, and let's not forget that one of the love interests is a self admitted size queen. All of this, combined with the fact that the MC is a handsome guy and an elite level fighter makes him more than a little bit overpowered so if you like good old power fantasy porn, this VN will almost certainly deliver that in the future.

    If you're looking for something with a good story and the low amount of sexual content (as of 0.3) isn't a dealbreaker for you, then you should definitely try this.
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    Kaasje404

    Review for R0.3 Public
    This game is set in a fantasy world. The storyline is very well thought out and very interesting. I especially like the attention to detail. Just think of Hammond the hog, just a random side charachter which is just nicely worked out and adds some humour.

    The characters are well developed in general and all have unique characteristics. Very few characters have been introduced without any relevance which is a big plus.

    Furthermore, this game uses animations which is always valuable and the graphics are decent. All in all, I cant give it any lower than five stars. I thoroughly enjoyed playing this game. I really recommend it!
  11. 4.00 star(s)

    Katzepro

    The game had a bit of a rough start with an MC that looks so much like Adam Driver it is distracting and writing that was honestly just boring and unfunny and even made me skip things (like the silly DnD scene). However, by the end of the game I was fully invested and was very curious where the story would go from here. The MC's new haircut also helped.

    The story, and romance, are very much a slow-burn which is not for everyone. But once you do make it past the rough start and the world/story opens up it becomes clear that this is a story full of political intrigue, mysterious lore, and interesting characters with different goals and politics. It gives me some Game of Thrones vibes. Not something you'd usually see in a porn game but I like it.

    When it comes to the porn itself there isn't too much yet. There are some scenes that show sexy girls in hot poses and there's one blowjob scene. So if you're just here for a quick wank then this isn't the game for you. The one blowjob scene is really hot though. It has some great cock worship and dirty talk. If future scenes are anything like that we're in for a treat.

    4/5 for now but can easily become a 5/5 with future updates.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    HornyJohnMarston

    Pretty early, but really really good game so far. The setting is fascinating and quite unique, the caracter designs are on point. The writing is really good too and the future possibilities seem almost endless at this point. Very little lewd scenes as of right now but the dev has already shown he understands the value of building it up rather than going straight for easy gratuitous sex scenes. Genuinely one of the best new games i've played in a while, can't wait to see how it's going to go !
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    Shuchetan

    awesome game. beautiful unique renders. wonderful unique models. awesome story. great gameplay.

    this has just jumped to being one of my most favourites. really looking forward to updates.

    5-stars is not easily given by me. you've earned it though. i urge anyone who can to help out the dev.

    also amazing mix of sci-fi and medieval and dystopian setting. however, to my liking as it is no NTR or sharing.
  14. 2.00 star(s)

    4kchbt8jzqyxxll5vtjn

    boring; there is meaningless text at the moment. I skipped almost everything.
    there is no male domination in this game at the moment (or I skipped it)
  15. 4.00 star(s)

    cumsumnida

    Visuals: Solid render and animations. Character models and backgrounds look good for the most part.

    Story: Male power fantasy with a hodge podge of tropes thrown in that's sometimes good with the lore and intrigue, but also sometimes contrived and get a little cringe at times.
    1. It's post apocalyptic and everyone uses phrases from the Roman empire and latin, but people also play dungeons and dragons.
    2. They use swords and arrows for this macho gladiator combat stuff and there's somehow magic, but there's also high tech computers and security cameras and video games. No guns though, because it'd make the sword and shield stuff redundant I guess.
    3. There's some disease that affected the fertility of the entire world, making every man's penis extra extra small. But the MC's a special individual and has a huge penis and super fertility!...And he's a DnD pro and has his own Dungeon Master screen!
    UI, music, presentation: Also solid.

    3.5/5 stars
  16. 4.00 star(s)

    braendt

    very enjoyable visual novel, from a ok, this makes as much sense as any other scientific theory in the world and it's written in an engaging and sometimes humorous manner perspective. there's plenty of political intrigue, and plenty of chance to prove yourself (the MC) as the dominant macho type you may well be... but for now...

    it needs sex scenes - that's my only real complaint. there's one BJ so far (oral "sex"), and that's as close to sexual interactions with other characters as the entire content gets thus far. calling it a slow burn implies it burns, which for now isn't true. it looks like it's on the way there... but so far I consider all but the last 10 to 15 minutes of play time more of a prologue, with chapter one of what I hope will be an amazing VN (with sex scenes) starting now.

    looking forward to more to see if that plays out.
  17. 4.00 star(s)

    Troz3

    Very impressed. Narrative and concept are both quite sophisticated. Sexual content, thus far, is mostly implied rather than immediate. 7/10 for graphics - good without being brilliant.

    Looking forward to the next update.
  18. 3.00 star(s)

    sabadongelov

    TLDR, review as of R0.3, a mixed bag with both good and bad.

    Pros
    • Male cast has diverse looks.

    • MC actually good looking. However, having his hair get cut was a mistake, he looks less Mad Max and more modern yuppy youth now.

    • MC taller than females and with a decent muscle tone, even has hair on his chest. A low bar many game cannot clear, especially Daz 3D games. That said, he could have been made even bigger, considering he's supposed to be a really strong and tough fighter.

    • Visually polished.

    • Diverse and mostly fitting musical score and sound effects.

    • Proper english.

    • Good dialogue.

    • Deep worldbuilding that isn't openly moronic for the most part (see cons below).

    • Choices that matter (but there's a big but, see below).

    • Variety of body types of LIs.

    • Variety of ages of LIs.

    • Perverted LI. One of the LIs is masturbating to a live show of semi-nude (male) prisoners fighting each other to death. Uncommon for LIs to be so evily perverted.

    • MC can kill a good looking woman in a gladitorial fight. In a world where the MC kills a lot of people, it's nice that not every (attractive) woman is spared the sword. Makes it more realistic.
    Cons
    • Ugly LIs. I guess this is kind of subjective, but of the five LIs, I only found one had a really attractive face (the solar seer). The empress/mother and the doctor have downright ugly faces in my opinion and I'm more and more coming down on sida that blonde daughter is also ugly. In general, they have too big mouth/lips, eyes and chin and too small/flat/pixie noses and the empress/mother looks like a homeless alcoholic in the face). That is not a common problem in porn games. Kind of ironic that many of the male characters look so much better, as it's usually the other way around. Maybe the dev is a woman...? :geek:

    • Silly national characteristics. Having the main powerfaction style themselves as Neo-romans, is ok, I can see that actually hapening. Having northerners look like a ridiculous hollywood version of Vikings with faux Scandinavian names to boot is not, and it doesn't get better when you realise that southerners are subsaharan Africans and easterners are Chinese/east asian. Does the Neo-roman empire span the entire Euroasian continent, as well as Africa, or how did they pull that off? Not that this matters hugely in your average porn game, but this game obviously want to take itself very seriously when it comes to background, story and lore, so it shouldn't contain such sillyness.

    • Silly plot points. Like when the MC inadvertently foils an assassination plot by inviting his would be assassin to a session of Dungeons and Dragons. As you do when you find yourself with what you think is a prostitute payed for by your adoptive brother (fucking said prostitute is of course out of the question for mister post apocalyptical boy scout). And of course, how could the would be assassin say no and how could she be anything other than absolutely wowed by playing Dungeons and Dragons? Not to mention, big deadly fighter in a post apocalyptical future where they don't even have electricity in the homes where he lives is playing role playing games... :geek:

      Or when a robber who just been aprehended mid-crime by a praetorian guard arrogantly starts mouthing off about his rights, only for the praetorian to kill him there and then. As if anyone living in a post apocalyptical roman empire would believe they had "rights" after having been caught red handed robbing someone at knife-point...

    • Low sex to time ratio. You have to play for an hour or two before you get to your first sex scene, kind off, and then it's just groping and a vision/dream on top off that, not really sex. And it doesn't get much better after that either.

    • Mind reading and frequent and long scenes where the MC isn't present (more than half of the game doesn't have the MC in it), whereby the player gets to know secret plot points the MC has no idea about and gets to know many characters intimately, including their real motives and secrets no one else knows about, though the MC never even met them. Fucks with first person immersion, drags out the game (see low sex to time ratio above) and will likely lead to the player making choices he/she maybe wouldn't do if they only had the same knowledge as the MC.

    • Stunted choices. While there certainly are choices, they are not that many and in a number of situations it feels as if there should be a choice, but there is none. Furthermore, if you pop open the hood of the game, you'll find that for most of the time, playing the boy scout is the right thing to do, at least in how to treat the ladies. But this is still early, so that might change.

    • Chaste MC. As mentioned above, there are a couple of situations where it feels like choices are missing, and a big part of that are scenes with LIs/potential LIs where the MC doesn't try to get into the panties of the LIs despite having an opening of sorts, instead the game forces the boy scout route. Particularly annoying if you're playing the MC as dominant. In that I also include a blow job scene where the player is not given the option to push the womans head down the MCs cock. However, towards the end we actually get a choice to push for a sex scene and a more assertive/dominant approach, so maybe it will change as the game progresses.

    • Facial expressions a bit to much. Sometimes goes into uncanny valley.

    • Stupid/evil men, compentent/good women. Almost all men except the MC are either stupid, pathethic and/or morally flawed, whereas the female LIs in comparrison are very compentent and generally more morally pure. It's especially annoying because some of the pathethic/deviant men are the boyfriends/brothers/sons to the LIs, which just makes the discrepancies more grating. Once more, however, it's quite early and at least one of the LIs shows signs of having a darker side, though she seems kind of repentant, and another might be devoloping it, so who knows what the future will bring?
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    etool

    This is a good one

    I like the premise of the 'ancient tech' in a world millennia away from when it was used (or whatever many years)

    the renders are good, and a major + for me is that the dev did not go 'cookie cutter' goddess type females

    Looking forward to see much more of this story
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    Gtdead

    This is for v0.3
    The game has been fairly consistent throughout it's releases but if something changes dramatically, I will update the review.

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    The setting:

    Years after a Great Collapse of civilization, humanity exists in a retropunk state, under medieval-inspired systems. Those higher in the hierachy have access to impressive technology even if they can't replicate it, reverse engineer it or use it to to it's fullest extend. The rest live in communities that depending on the location may seem inspired by Roman or early European standards. The big city looks like something you'd see in the Gladiator, while the villages something out of the Witcher or the Vikings TV Series.

    It also features underground vaults, remniscient of the Fallout franchise, where the bulk of technology is stored.

    While I didn't exactly understand the concept, it seems to exist 2 types of humans. Normal ones and mutants. Additionally the mutants seem to be manufactored in the vaults or through some other faction that I can't explain at this moment. Mutants are improved humans, to various degrees and they seem to be rare. Additionally there exist monsters called Dwellers, that look like ghouls/zombies and seem to be feral without the capacity for communication.

    Currently, a virus has infected the entire population, causing fertility in women and low testosterone in men, which creates a "coming apocalypse" scenario unless a solution is found. This solution exists in the form of the protagonist who is a mutant with expansive mutations, probably created as the solution to the problem by some secretive party. While infected, his body seems to be resistant to the virus, leaving open multiple scenarios for resolution, like becoming the ultimate breeder or giving his blood to scientists to synthesize a cure.

    The setting features magic, although it seems to be rare. One of the main girls is a sun seer, with an ability which sounds like absorbing the power of the sun to power spells like teleportation, visions and firebased attacks.

    I think the Fallout inspiration is very clear. From the setting to certain dialogue with one of the characters.

    The society:

    There exist different states with their ruling systems. The ruling classes are well off while the rest depend on their station. Currently there exist a lot of intrigue coming from the leaders of satellite societies and important village who try to gain power in expense of the current ruling class. In the relevant geographic location, the current leader is the Imperatrix, the wife of the former Imperator who died. The reasons for his death seem to be suspect, with a lot of people thinking that his wife poisoned him. He seemed like a harsh ruler, interested in progress in the expense of his people and the Imperatrix is seen as a weaker and sneakier ruler.

    Another prominent faction is Cerberus. It's not clear if it's a man or an organization, but they seem ruthless and willing to fan the flames of rebellion with the intent to gain power for themselves.
    Lastly we have the leaders of important locations, like the one the Protagonist was raised in. They exist in close proximity to places with high technological significance which gives them power.

    The Crown is weary of these factions and she seems to have taken steps to antagonize them, but we don't know the extend of these steps and the events happening in the start of the game are confusing and obfuscated with lies and intrigue.

    The rest of the people are remniscient of standard Medieval and Roman tropes. There exists slavery, Inns and a Colliseum. The commoners work as farmers, fishermen, miners, tailors, innkeepers, traveling merchants and mercenaries. The jobs which are specific to this setting are speculators and technologists. The former are scavengers of technology, while the latter try to make sense of the scavenged technology.

    Scientists seem to be rare and "faction" based although I could be wrong. However the protagonist's circumstances seem to point that way.
    There also seems to be a notion that "good and strong" men aren't that numerous. I'm not exactly how it looks in general, but there are a few scenes that make it look like the majority of them are small and weak, probably due to the lack of testosterone. You will hear a lot of whining about it and you will see men with unimpressive stature, but we will have to see more to get a clearer picture.

    The story and the protagonist:

    While his name and monicer are customizable, the story follows Mateo the "Dreadwolf", a speculator who seemingly lost his parents as a baby and doesn't have memories of them and is told that he inherited his moniker from his father, who was very similar in both stature and viciousness in combat. He was raised as the adopted son of the "Patrius" of Aqua Palma, a relatively small port town near what seems to have a significant geostrategic location, due to it's proximity to a mine. He is an impressively built man, an exceptional and cunning warrior with a stoic and dominant personality. He is a well liked person in the community, opinionated with an obvious regard for the common folk and while not very savvy, he seems to be of above average intelligence although that interpretation depends a bit on how you view the "tips" given in the minigames (more on that later).

    He seems to be in a very special predicament. It is revealed that he is a mutant with unusually extensive mutations, but he himself had no idea. The fact that he is a mutant makes it seem like he was lied to by the Patrius about his parents because mutants are created in a lab (the specifics elude me at this time). He is a known figure to the ruling class and his status as a renowned warrior makes them view him as a significant threat in case of a rebellion.

    The story starts with the Dreadwolf procuring a technological relic from a mine and delivering it to the Patrius' son, Dante, who is technologist. Some time after, an assassin sent by the Imperatrix tries to kill him and retrieve the relic, but due to his winning personality she rethinks her mission and lets him live. She proceeds to steal the relic and the coming day we also learn that the Patrius was assassinated, which prompts Dante to take the reigns of the village and send Dreadwolf to the capital in an undercover mission to destroy the ruling class (who he blames for his father's death) from within.

    The dev controls the pacing in a very interesting way, making the players think of the next action instead of taking a step back and thinking about what is happening. Even if the player spots that some things don't line up as they should, they quickly forget about it because the next encounter is right around the corner. The presentation follows multiple points of views, unrelated to the protagonist, and keep the reader up to date with what is happening, although it hides the "why" of things.

    The characters:

    Click the spoiler for a small description of the major characters. All mentioned females are potential LIs.

    Patrius: The leader of Aqua Palma who adopted the protagonist. He is a capable and ruthless leader and people around him think that he is at the edge of madness. He is assassinated early in the game.
    Dante: The son of Patrius who assumes leadership after his death. A mostly unsuccesful techonologist, he has a specific brand of humor and self confidence issues, having been raised under his father's shadow with huge expectations. He sends Dreadwolf to the capital although his reasoning is a bit suspect.
    Gaius: The leader of the Praetorian Guard. A level-headed and intelligent man who has some history with Dreadwolf.
    Enzo: The adopted son of the Imperatrix. A vicious and petty man who has a huge opinion of himself. He is quite a popular character.
    Cicero: A senator who seem to be more savvy and cunning than the others. It's obvious that he has some machinations and Enzo is part of his plans.
    Cerberus: Either a man or a shadow organization (unclear at this point), who is the enemy of the Imperatrix. (I wouldn't be surprised if Cicero and Cerberus are related, although there is no definitive proof at this point)
    Faustina: The Imperatrix and the wife of the late Imperator. Most think her a harsh woman although it's probable that it's her front, to project a strong image. There is a rumor that she poisoned her husband. She wants her own child.
    Luciana: Adopted daughter of the Imperatrix, she is assumed to be the best technologist in the world, has serious self confidence issues and tries hard to stay out of her mother's shadow. She is in a relationship with Milena's brother, who causes huge problems for her, but despite that she tries to support him claiming that it's her duty.
    Aquila: Recently adopted daughter of the Imperatrix. She seems like she was recently adopted, is kept a secret and she wants to prove herself to her mother. She is the assassin sent to kill Dreadwolf and steal the relic.
    Milena: A biomedical doctor who leads the efforts of the capital to combat the virus. An intelligent, sexually open but also frustrated woman who enjoys bloodsports and is a fairly good conversationalist. She spent a lot of time under the previous Imperator, attempting to find a cure through mostly unsavory practices.
    Safiya: A sorceress introduced in the beginning as a mercenary and is currently imprisoned in the capital. She is quick to anger and has bitch defenses but she is also sultry and attempts to help the protagonist win in the arena in exchange for him asking for a pardon in her behalf.

    Disclaimer: The adoption angle is a bit murky at this point because it seems that in this setting, it's possible to create humans completely artificially. We know that Luciana and Enzo do not share Faustina's DNA because we are told exactly that, but it's also possible that they were commisioned instead of being adopted through the system like in real life.


    Visuals and Audio:

    Not much to say about the visuals other than they are well made. High quality renders, I find the girls beautiful and unique, the combat scenes are impactful and the backgrounds have a lot of detail and good lighting. The animations are scarce but they have good detail, I didn't notice any clipping although there exists some jerky movement.

    I found the audio very uninspired. It's good that it has music but I don't feel it's appropriate for the scenes. Ambience is way too cheerful when the background is bleak and dark, the combat music is also cheerful and upbeat, it fails to create tension during dramatic moments. Still, better than nothing, but a missed opportunity nonetheless.

    Sexual Content:

    Currently it's scarce but it's fairly good. Safiya is guarded but the protagonist is too attractive and manages to break her walls, playing a game of dominance. Milena is shown to masturbate watching the protagonist fight in the arena, and later (if you have enough points with her), she is "forced" to blow him. Luciana also has a scene where she tries to relieve some frustration in the shower, and Aquila watches the protagonist taking a shower.

    It's obviously a slow burn but it's tasteful and considering who MC is, we can expect them to be unable to walk straight in the near future.

    Gameplay:

    I was pleasantly surprised by this one. I have a lot of peeves with gameplay in Visual Novels because a lot of them give you choices that are pretty much arbitrary. This VN gives you a very specific framework to guide your choices. It uses both a hint panel and dialogue based hints, expects you to pay attention and it's consistent.

    For example:
    Early in the game you have a debate with Dante. A panel exists that gives you some information about his character and the results of the choices are consistent. They are not obvious, and if you are not very proficient in english you may have more trouble than intented, but the design is really good.

    During the prison segment, you get to fight in a pit to have a chance at claiming your freedom. Again you have a panel with hints on each fight. Some hints are more obvious than the other, but the results are consistent with the expectations. Some confusion is natural, but eventually you will get the rythm of the game and make better choices.

    Later you fight as a Gladiator, and your "trainer" gives you specific tips that you have to follow. If you do things right you will have a lot of control over the result.


    Closing comments:

    A very well made game with clear direction. If you like the idea of retropunk setting, mystery/intrigue and a very dominant protagonist, you will be right at home with this one. This game certainly is worth your time and it's consistent enough so I can safely say that what you see during the first chapter, is also what you are going to get later. The dev is clear about the fetishes that will be featured down the line and you can read it in the developer notes.

    I also appreciated the Fallout and DnD5e references. Liking similar things with the creator is a good indicator that his work will also be to my tastes and I believe that this notion applies to everyone.

    Best of luck going forward.