Ren'Py - Abandoned - New Eden [v0.02.2a] [UnluckySatan]

This game is one of extremes. Models are pretty nice, though it's kinda clear they haven't all gotten the same amount of effort put into them.

It's also a linear "sandbox" so far, which is really not enjoyable. Lots of time skipping and just checking a few places to find where the girl is so you can do the next scene. The navigation isn't the worst ever by a fair margin, but it's also not that great. It would be nice to see some location indications on the main UI. Also, I don't know where it's going, but so far it would be better off as a VN I think.

The animations are alright, but the sex scenes are kinda shit. It's just straight 0-60 with no build up or anything, and then the way the scenes are set up are kinda shitty and obviously low-effort. First scene you have a threesome - sounds great, right? Well you see the other chick in just handful of images, and the scene is blatantly laid out and the camera set up in such a way as to avoid showing the second girl as much as possible. This is because she's not even in the actual scene at times, as becomes obvious when their careful arrangement and camera view fails them, and actually shows where the invisible girl should be.

So, I don't know. Parts of this have obviously been worked on with great care, and then other parts have just been slapped together with no particular thought for anything. The storyline and writing in general unfortunately seems to tend more towards the later, then the former.

So, I dunno. It's just all over the place.

v0.02.1a
PROS:
· There are several animations, some of which are interactive. The quality is above average.
· The game is 3d but the creator is working hard to make the models fresh. Also, he respects the physics -motion feels natural.
· He just introduced a fairy-like character. I like that kind of shit.

CONS:
· I think the creator is focussing on animations and game engine for now so the story might have been tweaked to deliver porn easy and fast until the content allows a more gamelike experience.
· Game mechanics are weird, probably because #1CONS
· Interface is also a bit awkward. You should make icons bigger and return the content manager you had in the previous version.

~~~~ For now I think you are doing great by introducing new places and characters but in the future I think you should exploit how the elf is okay with nudity and making her a bit harder to allow dirtier stuff. My vision is her okay with showing and watching for the first 1-2 weeks ingame. Then she gets a bit bored of vanilla stuff and starts asking how to get around her morals. Maybe bring out some ignored-MC-selfpleasure-around-her/feet/clothing stuff. Then some handy-work/cum play, etc...

Starts too slow to actually care about progressing. Others may like it, but there are too many problems for me to even want to see how further updates make it better. The first 30 minutes proved that this is a sleeping and conversation game, not one that understands how to take a great premise and run with it.

First off It's a game that moves with a nice pace slightly different cut scene each time progression Each Room give you a choice of what to do with the Elf girl! She is Very Innocent but slowly learns new tactic's It is a new game so not much Content But it does have room to grow with future updates Great animations, Nice models! I'm eagerly waiting for the next instalment!