VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - New Hokage Servant: Naruto Parody Game [v0.2] [Rnot2000]

He listened which is good now i shall sub to da patron since it doesn't feel like I'm forced good game good luck with the project but u should work on the story writing and stuff not just porn i ain't complaining but story seems rushed at least with the girls

Well, after playing version 0.2 I can say that the game promises a lot, of all the parodies that I have played of Naruto, this along with Kunoichi Training have been the best.
I really like the artistic design, the drawing of the girls and the animation, perhaps the only 2 negative points that I see for now are: the menu and navigation that is very slow, outside of that the game looks too good, the H scenes They are very good, and I love Ino's design more than all of them, although they are all 10
I hope the game has more updates and maybe the interface will be improved

The art is decent enough but it is hampered by the game it comes with.
Bad english, bad gameplay.
The author keeps on making really questionable design decisions that bring this game down.

It falsely claims to be a free game but is in fact heavily paywalled. Author keeps insisting that it is not a paywall, it is just "a little extra something" for the paying customers. A little is not the word I would use for a majority of the content.

To clarify the confusion about NTR in this game:
There is no NTR route nor plans for one.
However on the main menu there is a "other gallery" where you can watch "bonus content not found in the game". This gallery is full of NTR scenes.

Looks like it has potential. The English isn't the greatest, unfortunately. It's too early to tell as of this review how long it's going to be, but from what's been shown in the peeks, there will be plenty of H scenes.

I understand Patreons should get extra content and such. But when half the gallery or more is Patreons exclusive, the game basically isn't worth playing for free users. There should be some other way for Patreons to get extra content or whatever.

Edit: Game is better now that the full gallery is accessible. English could use some work but it's not unreadable. The few downsides are: gallery is available right from the start so you don't even need to earn anything, every guy is basically a pervert, Anko is a sadistic lesbian, and the story. Otherwise, it's okay. The sex scenes are good though.

90% of the content is seemingly locked behind Patreon. The english is jank as fuck and the art fot the H Scenes are noticeably worse than the sprites. This game is exactly what I'd imagine if you took a 2005 New Grounds flash game and spun through a English To Russian back to English translator.

First thing I recommend is have some music for the front when you boot up the game. While the music choice will affect how much we the audience enjoy the game, not having anything makes the game feel empty. Like I am not being transported to a magical world filled with supernatural beings.

Did like the scrolls for the banner for the chapters. A very nice touch.

Also, work on the English text. Also, the part Tsunade said, ‘you helping me with all Hokage stuff’ just felt too generic. Spice it up with, ‘your job is to help organize paperwork, do errands, and if you prove yourself, secret missions.’ This can be great to show that Tsunade does treat this as a real job and can give a great tease for the future on what to expect.

Also, might want to work on the design of the MC. He looks like a cheaper version of Naruto. This is a completely new character in a magical setting. This is the chance to let the imagination really go wild. Maybe his jacket is green to show his loyalty to the leaf. Green can also represent that the character is bland/natural like the grass. Yet green also represents growth. A symbol of your character growing stronger and stronger.

You did a good job on the character Khano. His design is unique to be memorable but still fits right at home in Kohona.

Did enjoy how you gave Shizune an actual rack.

Am a bid disappointed Ebisu is a full blown pervert in this game. I enjoyed him more as a closet pervert where he would attack perverts but behind closed doors, he is just as perverted as everyone else. He could even be an interesting antagonist who gets in your way of doing naughty things. And after every engagement, you both blackmail the other into not spilling the beans on the other. Though this is not my game and assume you have a plan for Ebisu. Though, did enjoy when Kiba threw Ebisu at the women after they were caught screaming, ‘Ebisu, I choose you!’

Did not enjoy the talk with Hinata as they walked back to the Hyugga compound. She says that being a Hokage Servant is not a job everyone can do but we don’t really see anything to the contrary. No assassins, no super grueling tasks, etc.

Did feel like the game was rusing the relationships of the characters. It feels like every second, Tsunade wants to spend time with you when instead it should be the opposite. She is the Hokage surrounded constantly by village elders, clan heads, ninja missions, and who knows what else. You at the beginning are just a delivery boy.

Did like the transition where you can just click on the background to dismiss the characters on screen.

And despite what I said about the game feeling like it is rushing though the relationship, the sex scene with Tsunade was good.