The first time I played this, I thought it was one of the best maledom corruption games I'd ever played (since I'm someone who doesn't mind a long, tedious grind). The second time I played (years later), I found myself running out of steam a little over halfway through. After mulling it over for a while, I think the reason that happened is the placement of the Waitress event. The more I think about it, the more I feel like Waitress being so early is a massive structural problem with the game. When the dominant man takes his dick out but doesn't say anything, and the formerly dominant woman starts blowing him with no specific prompting, that's the moment she has definitively surrendered control to him and admitted defeat. Other than her leaving the room to get changed in Waitress, it makes way more sense to me that Waitress should be placed after Housewife. Those two events are similarly about her dressing in a slutty outfit and being his personal servant, and they both end with a blowjob. The difference is that in Housewife, he specifically orders her to do it (which is itself a progression of the Blowjob event on a different track, where ordering her to do that is the entire price she has to pay for the blackmail that time), while in Waitress she just accepts that this is what's expected of her without needing to be told. At that point, she's effectively lost the whole ballgame, and all the further scenes thereafter would just be about showing what kind of nasty degradation can be done to someone who has already been broken. That shouldn't be happening in row 6. A couple details might have to be changed, but I think the overall flow of the narrative would be a lot better if Housewife and Waitress switched places.