I think you did a really good job with the writing . This was the perfect balance for me between being eighter too submissive or horny . I find your writing to have a very good balance with the portrayal of the stepmother having many moments when she keeps snapping back to reality or tries to resist the protagonist . I also absolutely loved the side character . Keep doing what you are doing and please don't make the stepmom into a complete mindless sex slave like 99% of all the other games . 9/10 writing and 7.5/10 renders