This is a rushed finish if I ever saw one.
Advice for new players? Endings are limited. No big group harem. If you want scenes, follow the walkthroug. If you want to avoid leading on and hurting certain characters, then pick who you want, and play to her.
There is a single 4-way ending, but I won't say for who, bluntly. But for the most part, you end with a single girl (or pairs our of the 4 way).
Because I liked the game as much as I did, up to chapter 10, I can't and won't give this a lower score, but the ending really did disappoint. With the game being considered "complete" at version 0.11, and chapter 11 being just a few short minutes, it's hard to not be disappointed.
I can think of several things that would have improved the game.
1) Ending choices suck. Some girls you spend a large amount of time with, and some almost no time. Maybe if, say, Stephani got more story time, she might be a better ending choice, as one example. Where as Vanessa got a lot of screen time, so it makes more sense to go for her, as another example.
2) Harem ends. This is in spoilers, just in case. Stephani is the "sex goddess," but gets no harem ending? I mean, if Amie will let have a harem despite being required to turn down a threesome earlier because she needs people to be loyal, then why does Stephani not qualify for a harem? I think a large part of why is because, after the party and the day in the pool, most of the girls have no scenes together again. There could have been many chances to build intercharacter relationships, and they were just dropped.
And that's not the only character. Brandy and Nichole. I'm honestly shocked that their deep and close friendship plays no more part of the story. Moreso, I'm surprised you don't have the choice to pick the two of them, together. If anything, the most realistic harem endings would be with Sis and Vanessa, and with Brandy and Nichole. More realistic that Amie or Mom, let alone the 4 way ending
I think if the game gave some characters more time to shine, more time to connect with each other, etc, there would be options for more harem endings.
3) Hurting the girls. If you follow the walkthrough for scenes, you will end up needing to hurt all the girls except the ones whose endings you're after. That's cold.
The alternative is ending their paths earlier, which in some cases, still leaves them hurt.
I would have much rather some other options, like... never starting a path to begin with, or a pure friend path. This is strongest with Stephani because especially with the abortion, it's clear she needs a friend, and someone who actually cares about her. And, as the most promiscuous character, I wasn't crazy about being with her, but I kind of wanted to be her friend. And if you turn her down at the end, you just hurt her anyhow!
4) Either eliminating minor characters, making their scenes optional, or expanding them into main choices.
Amber... no ending. Daphne, no ending. Saeki's friends... never seen again. Whywhore, no ending.
I mean, when you have the eventual option to fuck Daphne, you are told this puts you on her path. And... there is never any path.
End game, I couldn't finish until I slept with Whywhore, no option not to. Amber really served no purpose...
These characters could either have been expanded on or dropped.
5) Resolution. I feel a lot of plot points are dropped. What happened to Vanessa's father? If Saeki was pregnant, what ever happened to the baby, and if she kept it, even though she doesn't want you to be the father, do you at least stay her friend and be the baby's "Uncle?" What ever happened to that poor Natalie girl?
I feel the plot was sort of just dropped.
This game was decent. The girls were beautiful, and I appreciate that, no, you can't always get them all.
But for the sake of a happy ending to a porn game? Especially when your character goes from being the dick he was at the start of the game to who he was at the end? And with him genuinely caring for each girl he persued?
There could have been a lot of work put in to him finding a way to fix things with the girls, or, as I've gone on about, expand some of the harem possibilities.
I just feel like the developer decided her wanted to be done with this project, shit out a "good enough" ending, and is ready to move on. Which is disappointing.