HTML - Abandoned - Not Bedtime Stories [v0.18] [Erudosan]

Pros:
The stories are well written and the gifs and videos are on point.
There is good amount of content.
Cons:
Lacks gameplay

Overall: The game has potential with the interactive stories(The dev said it will be)it will be much better.

A series of decent short stories, but no real game play. It's just chose what story you want to read and that's it.

Pros:
The video's add a lot to the story's
Stories are well written, and at least decent

Cons:
Zero gameplay

One of the best first releases from a Dev that I have seen on this site.

First of all, the writing is good, certainly not Dickens' level but good. The stories flow fairly naturally and there were no glaring errors in grammar or spelling that I caught (given I was skimming). Stories are linear and while that may not be everyone's cup of tea, the dev outlines it very clearly so I took no issue with that fact.

Porn selection is good and frequent. This is not just walls of text with the occasional porn Gif. The wait for lewd content is not too long in any of the stories and the pics/videos selected are all high quality and fit the narrative. (Warning: all videos start on full volume by default)

Lastly, I found no bugs or errors in my playthrough. This dev, even though a newbie, has a grasp on what they are doing. The linear nature of the stories probably simplified this compared to other HTML games on this site.

To summarize, this game is a very good first release, not perfect, but very good and a solid foundation on which I hope this dev builds on. The dev's writing is coherent and proficient (which is more than can be said for a lot of the devs on this site). The porn selection is good and all media is of a high quality plus the code is clean and (in my experience) bug free. I look forward to any more stories this dev releases and am hopeful for the interactive HTML game that is supposedly in the works.