VN - Ren'Py - Not Georgia [v0.3] [Shinita]

This game has overwhelmingly positive reviews but I think they are all propped up by strong renders and good li choices (at least most of them)

If you're actually being critical there's a lot of downsides to this game.

Firstly MC is pathetic,the game gives you choices but then the mc is too afraid to follow through and the writing just chastises you lazily. He also looks like a mormon missionary. Non-choices are such an awful mechanic.


Majority of content is in dream scenes and imagination scenes that everyone hates and you have absolutely no choice over, somehow you can see everyone naked in every situation

The UI is pretty basic and there should be nothing to complain about, except that it constantly has audio popups like it's trying to be an advertiser.

The writing isnt terrible, there's some thought into explaining hwy characters behave certain ways, but there's no real build up or tension to make it interesting. Also it feels like every 3rd line is to choose yet another name, hundreds of them.

The worst part overall is that absolutely every girl is empty headed and throws themselves at mc the moment they meet.

Pretty typical harem game. Like the different scenarios and looking forward to more content. The girls are all great and I especially love the love triangle with Georgia and her friend, really hope that story gets more playtime when/if an update ever comes.

It's a good game which seems to struggle with the usual tropes one would expect to hit when playing a game.

The visuals are pleasing to look at, all the characters are done well but really the game's... what? version 0.3 and already the cast list is just too damn high. And it'll only get worse. I appreciate this is a common issue in games but the increasing cast will act like a cancer on this game. Don't get me wrong, there are those who like this style of game. Bury the player in characters and hope to please everyone by offering them something they like. But really, you can do more with less, expanding on a small character base will give a game long term viability much better than a game of 100 characters who you struggle to remember once their scene is over.

The plot's ok if a bit disjointed in places. The MC suffers from magical dick syndrome where everyone wants a piece but that's so common in these games it feels a bit rough to draw attention to it. Everyone seems willing to share nude pics with the MC, even if they've just met him and don't get me wrong, the pics in the game are very nice, but it's kinda jarring to see them immediately. I appreciate you need to leave common sense at the door for games but it's weird at times.

As mentioned, photography seems to be an interesting element in this game. A big point is made giving everyone you meet a social media account and there's a great deal of photo sharing between you and whoever you meet. The titular character even dabbles in photography but.... it feels like a sideshow. The MC is a Dev by trade so that's what he does, but why not make him a budding photographer as that would better align with the mechanics the game has introduced?

All in all it's a nice game but for a game with one of girls named in the title, the focus sure seems to be on a whole list of other characters

I have read novels with a very good and developed plot that later either become boring or have disappointed me, then there are others that, without a very complex story, brighten your day and you don't get tired of advancing in the plot, this is one of them . I like the characters and how each of them, in a very intelligent and orderly way, accompany the protagonist towards possible relationships or not. And Georgia, her sweet and faithful friend, stands out. My congratulations to the developer.

A light and fluffy porn game with (so far) very little actual sex. (Reviewed version 0.3)

The most important thing to know about this game is that every female character, within five minutes of meeting the MC, will either strip in front of him, text him her nudes, or both. There's no attempt to make this believable or even plot-relevant, it's just how the game works.

The second most important thing is that so far there's very little actual sex. A couple of hand jobs here and there, and a lot of girls posing in various stages of undress, but beyond that it's one of those games that leaves you suspecting the creator hasn't worked out how to pose sex scenes yet.

If you like to fool yourself into thinking that porn games have believable plots, avoid this one because it doesn't offer any excuses. If you want a branching narrative and consequential decisions to make, also avoid it. If you just want to click through inconsequential dialogue and perv on pretty CG girls, I recommend it.

Pretty generic harem-esq visual novel. Bunch of girls want the beta MC, stereotypical women, each with their own thing. What sets this apart from every other vn though is that for some reason, all the women are fucking nuts. They're either all whores flashing their tits, asses, and showing nudes to their landlords, masturbating in public places, getting undressed infront of other people or they're absolutely psychotic. Bitchy, hostile, or just annoying to listen to. They also look samey except for the hair styles. They're all the same height, they all have the same boob size and they all wear the same types of clothes. Also, there are definitely NTR vibes going on here because Georgia, the main forced love interest shows her nudes to her landlord and you don't get any type of option or choice in the matter. I'm not interested in getting with these turbo whore girls who are going to show their nudes to other dudes while they are with me so this game immediately falls flat. Overall, a pretty underwhelming and problem filled game, it only gets two stars because there are definitely worse games on here in this style, but this one is still pretty bad.

+ renders
+ nice music (especially club song)
+ Viktoria's hair

- Main girl Georgia shows no interest in mc, for now it looks like she is into her friend - Kaylee, game hints she is a lesbian who is already in love with her. Good for them, but unfortunately we can't avoid both girls
- forced LI
- avn give NTR vibe (because of Kaylee)
- Stacey, what is wrong with her? typical bitchy attitude
- mc is boring passive wimp and behave like horny teenager

Strange avn with unlikeable mc. Maybe something change in the future but for now 2 stars from me

Seemed to have a very good vibe at the beginning meeting up with a friend and the MC realizing that he sees her in a new light. This along with the Harem tag gave me hope. Unfortunately that's where the problems start. Aside from those the MC one of those MCs who is there to provide a dick to the true Harem master aka the main girl. This MC is so submissive that even though there is no femdom it certainly can feel like it at this point. The game is also a tease in that it lets you get close to fucking some of the girls, but again stops just short of that.

Story 2/5
Mc moves to a town and meet up with hes childhood friend which hes going to live with, the friend is apprently working as a nude model which i personaly arent the biggest fan of but it is what it is, just wish you could atleast turn her down.....i would have liked to say no to hes friend instend of constantly helping her taking nude photos, shes apprently also a lesbian/bi which dosent do much for me either, it does annoy me a bit that MC dosent ask any kind of questions to hes friend about nude modeling or lesbian stuff, but MC is really just a submissive idiot that just follow along with anything.

And you got absolutly no controle over anything, the childhood friend who MC dident really want to be with is for some weird unknown reasons forced on you, no matter what choices you have picked up to that point, i tried to say no to watch her photos, said no to pose for her and so on and still shes forced on you, my issue is shes acting like a whore more then anything else and with MC not questioning any of it, i would liked to have the option to say no thanks to her, even more so due to her coming on to girls right in front of MC.

Its kinda idiotic since you can turn down some LIs or atleast i think you can? but not all and the one forced on you isent even faithfull she keeps coming on to other girls right in-front of MC so again acting like a whore which i really dont like.

And i expect Kaylee will be yet another girl forced on you since MC acceepts her being with him and hes childhood friend if they are fucking? even though Kaylee is a lesbian....and i sure dont want her there at all doing sexual things, i found the hole scene of fingering hes friend while shes holding Kaylees hand completely idiotic and wish you had an option to speak up and ask wtf is going on, to make it even more stupid MCs friend tells MC shes not a lesbian and then 2 seconds after she starts making out with her female friend...it just dosent make sense, clearly shes lieing to MC about not being a lesbian seeing as she comes on to girls all the time, like Kaylee or the pregnant girl.

Same for Stacy i shut the door not allowing her into the dressing room and for some reason later in game MC ends up fingering her? why? hes just had a shitty drive with Stacy and acts all tuff and shit and MC dosent even like Stacy, but then 2 seconds later and since she has a pussy hes in lala land and follows orders blindly following her into a store and ends up with making out with her? fingering her? the lack of controle over MC is starting to feel very very much like a kinetic story, and it really makes absolutly no sense for MC to do that shit with someone he dosent even like, he even starts thinking that hes childhood friend is a mistake and he should go for Stacy? i mean really? how would that make any sense to anyone....and why does MC have to be so extremly brainless and have the mindset of a 12 year old.

MC feels extremly submissive and its like he has a dog collar and a chain being pulled around following and accepting whatever, it barely feels likes hes the MC.

Not sure if game will have NTR but it sure has the vibe of it becomig just that, hope im worng but it shows alot of hints for it, like forcing a girl on you that keeps flirting with other people or the landlord looking a nude pictures of your friend.

Girls 5/5
Love the models, if you like smol this one will be perfect and theres still a pretty good diversity in builds for other peoples taste.

Animations 0/5
Well there are none which is also why i cant give this 5 stars, really wish it would get animations to make it one of those rare gems, but proberly wont happen.

Music 5/5
Pretty good music, and it changes alot so it dosent become boring.

Choices 1/5
Never been a fan of forced LIs and this seems to have just that, not sure if you can turn anyone down since everyone seems to be forced so far, and it also feels like it will have forced NTR at some point atleast theres heavy hints of it already even though theres no tag...yet....just like kinetic tag isent there which it proberly should have given no choices seems to matter so far.

The potential is there to become a good game, but it needs to give the player alot more controle over MC and not force LIs on you or any other kind of fetish, it needs to be a choice and if its not then use the kinetic novel tag to warn about having no controle.

I will keep an eye out on this one and try it once it gets alot more content but for now i cant justify more then 2 stars due to MC being brainless coming on to everyone even people he dosent like just because they got a pussy, he feels to much like a slave, and due to all the other stuff i talked about.

Excellent game for what it is: a complete fantasy. MC is slightly above-average in looks, not particularly cut, but does have charisma and is actually written as having some self-confidence and ability to stand up for himself. It's really nice.

The girls are all immediately interested in MC, which can be a little distracting. But, again, this is a fantasy, and it's fun to just roll with it when the tenth woman in two days expresses obvious sexual interest.

Some varied love interests, though I'd like to see at least one or two who are minorities. The cast here is as white as rice. Regardless, they're all really cute and feel well-written. Looking forward to more of this.

Very nice looking girls. Cute in a natural way. Georgia herself is perfect in my opinion. The story is not the best. A little here and a little there.
It is also kind of slowburn around Georgia and the MC. But anyhow, this can still be a really really good one.

I liked the game and the characters, but what I liked the most was the choice of soundtrack, very good and catchy.
But the time it takes to update makes me afraid to invest my time, you say that this will change so I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Good luck

It's off with a great start. Georgia is gorgeous, and the other girls aren't bad either. The renders are great in quality and I'm glad the developer didn't opt for titzillas on his models like 99% of everyone else seem to do. There are no animations.

The music is nice and fit the scenes perfectly.

The dialogue is okay for the most part. Some wording and grammar errors, but not enough to make you stop playing it.

The story so far is lighthearted, we don't know much how it's going to develop as the game is pretty short.

No animations, and some language issues is why I removed one star. Otherwise, this is a pretty solid game and you should definitely try it.

Best of luck to @Shinita with your game.

hI,
Thank you for this great work !
Excellent scenario, excellent work !
Adding insta gallery is a great idea, I especialy like georgia sudio wet and holiday postcards.
Still have a few bugs, but not important, and probably du to Koga mod.
Thanks again. Keep going.

Very nice game, looking forward to further versions. I like it so much that I decided to do a German translation. However, this will take some time.
Back to the game: Beautifully designed awesome girls with natural proportions, no ugly cow udders and horse asses to be seen. Just right for gourmets, for lovers of beautiful women.
Looking for some more hardcore sex and more tags like Threesomes (MFF and FMM), and (maybe avoidable) NTR.
Thank you very much for this beautifully designed game.

Really good looking girls, and better writing than I expected. I mean, we’re not talking Shakespeare here, but the story is coherent, the characters behave consistently, and it is even a bit plausible.

There’s some pretty interesting lesbian tension, which some dudes are scared by but if you’re into that it adds a lot of good flavor.

Great artwork and good story pacing. There is obviously something building here but the story isn’t forced and feels like it’s developing organically. I really hope this one continues because I’m already invested.

Off to a great start. Sometimes facial expressions don't match the dialogue, but some of that may be hidden thoughts of the characters. It is really refreshing to see realistic breasts on the female models!

Really, really good. Pacing is perhaps a bit too fast, but that's a minor quibble. Art is terrific and the cast of characters is great. Even the MC is very likeable! This is top-notch work. Cheers to the Dev!

Good lord all the girls in this game are effing perfect. Georgia most of all...... Honestly it's been a long while since I've seen a game look this good everything is amazing. So far there has been quality writing and a few very hot situations. Jus goddamn georgia *Chefs Kiss* is a work of art (pun intended).