VN Ren'Py Not Georgia [v0.3] [Shinita]

[KnightOwlSC]

Few issues..

1. While at the coffee shop when Georgia tries to get the MCs attention she says her name instead of the MCs.
2. Continuity problem -- MC goes with Georgia without coat/helmet but then is wearing it while going to the studio after going to the skate park. Then while going back 'home' with Georgia his helmet has mysteriously disappeared.

 

[KnightOwlSC]

Oh ok I get it, still I would never understand plots like that one maybe is because where I come from if some dude perv on the girls we like we puch their teeth out not keep feeding him more perv material.

I think the problem is that this is being related to NTR when the real problem is that it's another example of a thoughtless/beta MC who..

1. Completely ignores how upset his friend is when they go into the shop together
2. Has no problem with Edward seeing those private pictures of her

At the end of the day as nice as the models are I'm not happy with the MC so far... have to see what happens going forward but Tyler might be a better choice for Georgia if he has bigger balls then the MC.

 

[Shinita]

Oh ok I get it, still I would never understand plots like that one maybe is because where I come from if some dude perv on the girls we like we puch their teeth out not keep feeding him more perv material.

He isn't perving - he saw somebody all over his car and came to investigate then asked to send some pictures from the shoot - she told him they've been doing shoots she hasn't indicated to him they are private. The only thing he shouldn't have done is taken her phone to look.

The good thing about games is they are not real life so you can enjoy an adventure in a different set of shoes.

As to perv on girls you like... you do get the irony here right? The reason you can see any of these women is because somebody (I) am sharing them with you.

 

[Shinita]

I think the problem is that this is being related to NTR when the real problem is that it's another example of a thoughtless/beta MC who..

1. Completely ignores how upset his friend is when they go into the shop together
2. Has no problem with Edward seeing those private pictures of her

At the end of the day as nice as the models are I'm not happy with the MC so far... have to see what happens going forward but Tyler might be a better choice for Georgia if he has bigger balls then the MC.

Alpha/beta has been discredited by the original guy who termed it. If that's your jam there are countless games on here where you can live an "alpha" fantasy where everyone is either scared or just waiting for you to nail them.

1. He has literally zero context as to what is going on here, he hasn't seen Georgia in ages never met Stacey before. Whatever he tries to do here would make it worse. If Georgia needs your help she'll ask.

2. If Georgia really wanted the phone back she would have taken it. She's a bit of a budding exhibitionist. If that goes any further than what we've seen I don't know - just making up a story as I go along.

 

[ImperialD]

game is really really short but seems to be a good one ... awaiting to see more

 

[Shinita]

Girls look good but there is " Exhibitionism, Groping, Lesbian, Masturbation " before even having Creampie or Vaginal Sex. Hmm.

I mean it's a bit of a stretch saying the first three of those things and what you have on your list there will be in the next update.

 

[Shinita]

1. While at the coffee shop when Georgia tries to get the MCs attention she says her name instead of the MCs.
2. Continuity problem -- MC goes with Georgia without coat/helmet but then is wearing it while going to the studio after going to the skate park. Then while going back 'home' with Georgia his helmet has mysteriously disappeared.

1. Should be fixed in the 0.1b version
2. Yeah there are going to be consistency issues. The time it takes to fix them or keep track of things could - I think - be better spent on other things. FWIW you missed Georgia's shoes changing between her leaving home and getting on the bike.

 

[CamaroFan432]

Oh ok I get it, still I would never understand plots like that one maybe is because where I come from if some dude perv on the girls we like we puch their teeth out not keep feeding him more perv material.

OMG. Did you actually play and read the game? Edwards is the landlord of Georgia and MC. If MC would have punched Edwards, Georgia and MC would 100% be homeless in an instant. How they managed to get out of the situation was the only reasonable way. And as Shinita already wrote, we will get an option to send nothing to Edwards. I don't know where the fuss comes from now.

As for the pregnancy, Ríona got very unlucky with her ex. He wasn't ready to be father, but never said anything until it was too late. It's a shitty situation, but it shouldn't be a deal breaker for a LI, that made no real mistake. If this would be a deal breaker to people (especially harem+incest fans), then they shouldn't also avoid the landladies (mothers) of the MC in other games. It's basically the same situation, just a few years later. I don't intend to justify anything here but Ríona. I'm also normally all for harem and incest and so on, just to be clear.

 

[JohnF95zone]

For all those who are NTR-allergic, you should know this, the game contains NTR in its title, Not Georgia. So, would you please go away, we don't want to be responsible for your death, allergic is very life-threatening if not treated immediately or avoided altogether, you should know that by now .

Damn, how I love the Ignore feature on this site. Cheers.

 

[joryh]

Please don't do this, don't because a Power Vaccum 2.0 that's like the worst, who in his right mind would want to see the LI get fucked by a male other than the MC?. Plus yeah harem when the protagonist end up with all the girls will be pretty great. Still a lot of maybe in there, I think you should set in stone as fast as you can if your game will have any kind of NTRish content (as in other males having sex with the LIs) and if harem is possible (ending up with all the girls) because a lot of players (me included) don't want to get existed and spend hours playing for NTR to be adding (even if is non canon side stories) or having to pick a girl at the end kind of situation. Still this is a good start and I wish you luck, I will keep an eye in this one.

You have top be pretty sad to get your panties in a wad about an optional DLC that is non-canon, that you don't even have to download, much less watch.

 

[joryh]

I don't think people change much physically between like 16 and 25, I didn't back then, at least the face. I think tv shows do what you're saying partly because of that. Sure in average people their early 20s may look a little bit older but it's often hard to distinguish, so the showrunners think it's not a big deal. The other reason being, of course, that it's easier to find good actors this way.

They use ppl in their 20's and 30's to play teens in school cause they don't have to go through all the legal bullshit and accommodations they have to when they are employing minors. And yes. Ppl look a fuckload different from 16 to 25. Almost as if a decade of bone growth, never mind soft tissue growth, changes the way you look.

 

[joryh]

Small tits doesn't mean loli. Some of us like adult females with small breasts.

Only the brain damaged think small tits = loli. The same kind of brain damage that think tits the size of beachballs are anything but grotesque.

 

[ontach]

Great start. Absolutely love the models and rendering. The only minor gripe I have is that things have moved too fast with Georgia - I would have preferred a slower burn. But hey, it's your story - you tell it the way you want. Looking forward to the next version.

 

[maiku123]

tbh dev, the best thing to do is to keep it either vanilla harem or NTR, usually they dont work together even if your idea is make the ntr optional or non canon. Characters look good but I dont enjoy vanilla games that much anymore however I wish you the best of lucks with the game.

 

[joryh]

I never said only a pedophile would or could be attracted to them. I said those actively looking for women like that points to a deeper psychological issue. Look, I'm not taking a shot at anyone's tastes or fetishes (as long as nobody's actually being hurt/molested/etc.). But do the math, my guy. Just look at the title of the video you linked. "Sweet, little teen[...]". Why do you think women like Piper Perri, Gina Gerson, Elsa Jean, etc. are so popular? Because it's the best alternative to what they're after. Descriptors are a dead giveaway.

Flat, little, cutesy, pigtails, mousey, quiet, lithe, small, easily overpowered. Shift it however you want, but many men who actively search out smaller women with younger features are looking for an active, alive, and non-animated substitute for what they know they can't actually have - so they go for the closest thing (that doesn't include child/loli sex-dolls.). It's nothing more than borderline maladaptive coping. But hey, you do you.

Yeah. Cause if someone isn't into an amazon he must be a pedophile. Yup. If someone isn't at least 5'8" with a min of C's, you're a pedo if you prefer them to SheHulk. And not once, when I saw any of those porn actors did I think: That's a loli. Almost as if it's possible to be small as an adult. Just ask one of the Kardashians. Who is all of 5 foot fuck all. Guess the guy that knocked her short ass up is a pedo too.

 

[KnightOwlSC]

Alpha/beta has been discredited by the original guy who termed it. If that's your jam there are countless games on here where you can live an "alpha" fantasy where everyone is either scared or just waiting for you to nail them.

1. He has literally zero context as to what is going on here, he hasn't seen Georgia in ages never met Stacey before. Whatever he tries to do here would make it worse. If Georgia needs your help she'll ask.

2. If Georgia really wanted the phone back she would have taken it. She's a bit of a budding exhibitionist. If that goes any further than what we've seen I don't know - just making up a story as I go along.

Yeah.. beta is a crappy word but I couldn't think of a better one.

1. I can understand that but the way the story plays out makes it so that the MC is COMPLETELY ignoring the fact she's unhappy here. A single line of dialog where the MC takes note of her feelings but decides to stay out of it would have had a huge impact on how the player perceives the MC.

2. Again a single line of dialog here would have made a world of difference. You're a pretty shitty friend if you don't at least think to yourself "Whoa.. wtf.. should I step in here?" in this situation.

 

[Allan Trumbull]

Femdom & ntr planned? (I yes, i am out of here)

Harem planned ? (I hope yes)

 

[fremajl]

Looks good, nice to see some realistic proportions.

 

[JohnF95zone]

Yeah.. beta is a crappy word but I couldn't think of a better one.

1. I can understand that but the way the story plays out makes it so that the MC is COMPLETELY ignoring the fact she's unhappy here. A single line of dialog where the MC takes note of her feelings but decides to stay out of it would have had a huge impact on how the player perceives the MC.

2. Again a single line of dialog here would have made a world of difference. You're a pretty shitty friend if you don't at least think to yourself "Whoa.. wtf.. should I step in here?" in this situation.

Of course, there's a lot that can be done with with the monologue but then it would have been impossible to materialize them all. Just because there is no monologue or dialogue, does not automatically means the MC or NPCs was not thinking about it or something similar, sometimes it just materialize in the scene or facial expressions of the characters, or was implied implicitly. Just like in real life you can't hear what the other person is thinking, in games as well, you as the player don't have all the knowledge or information that the MC or NPCs have, only what was told to you, and perhaps some are purposely hidden (untold) or might have been an err on the author part.

Anyway, since you are deeply immerse into the MCs and all the NPCs, you might as well gives all the feedbacks regarding what the other monologues and dialogue should have or could have been (directly to the developer, no need to post here for everyone to read about) so that they will be as realistic as possible and make a world of difference to the player. The 2 that you mentioned were a good start but not comprehensive.

I just hope that the developer will find a good balance between a wall of text (of dialogues and monologues) and the scenes to keep players interest high and not put off by so much reading considering there aren't lewd scenes yet although the eyecandies are great.

I personally did not care much because I just learn a bit about the MC and NPCs on this first release, and I did not pass any judgement or perceived them as whatever based on this limited exposure. I also don't need to know the full details of the MC like what kind of person he is? A jerk? Pervert? Morally updstanding person? A Gentlemen? A Rabbi perhaps? An honest caring person? A Giga Chad? Or any of that stuff to play and enjoy a game. Same goes with the NPCs.

However, since most only want to play games with certain stereotype of MC and NPCs, then this should probably (better) be addressed one way or another (while some only cares about how they look and that should probably (better) be addressed as well). Kinda hard to be a game developer, the technical part is a monumental challenge in itself (that very small percentage able to do it) but the intagible part is the most demanding thing ever.

Cheers.

 

[DarwynEkoh]

Great renders, love that they're not your typical big boobs. Story might be progressing a bit too quick for me, but not too bothersome about that.

Would be nice to see the gallery in a phone app or something, where the galleries per girl would expand the further you would get into the game

Anyhow. Great start, hope to see way more where this came from