VN - Ren'Py - Not Georgia [v0.4a] [Shinita]

cons:
many choices feel pointless.
renders are often grainy
some scenes an the mc's choices make zero sense(the garage scene with Edwards and the scene with Riona(I don't wanna see that))
the mc mentally comments on way to many things, an it is almost always thinking with his dick(I don't want 10+ remainders that he is into that girl, during the photoshoot alone. I know that already)

pros:
writing is okay
the girls are not overly curvy like usually
somewhat interesting cast of girls

conclusion:
game has potential, but right now I will not recommend it to anybody.
choices need to matter.
the mc should not be so dumb, pathetic an overly horny all the time.
if these thing got fixed, then this could be a great game

I guess a played a different game for the others because what is this supposed to be? There's Loli like characters but they aren't Loli's? What? I wouldn't have a problem with the tag or anything it's just confusing to play a game where nearly everyone looks underaged... but the Dev is acting as if they're fully grown ups. The Main character riding a motorcycle at his height was unrealistic but I'll get more into that.

Story:

Well in this case the main character doesn't appear to be coming home after 7 long years in this game but he is arriving to live with his "best friend" after a breakup and finishing camp or whatever. He wants a fresh start and we see him reunite with Georgia a Loli like character that's apparently an adult and does nude posing for a living. We start with the same conflicted tropes, "should I peek on my friend or not?" just the same boring stuff. There's inconsistent behaviors in Georgia's character as well as in her dialogue. She tells the main character that she just doesn't go showing herself to anyone but randomly poses and shows herself to and stranger. Then there's the Boutique scene, she's upset at the Stacy character for "exposing" her but does the exact same thing to the Riona character, it was just bad all around.

Renders:
Bad, grainy, nothing special at all.

Dialogue:
It didn't match the characters at all.

Grammar:
Okay

Overall:

It's a pass for me. The Dev states he doesn't like models with unrealistic body proportions... yet Georgia exists. It just doesn't make sense, it's like they're scared of the Loli label but that's all this characters are to me minus a few.

Gotta say, for as short as it is, understandably at this point, the game grabbed my attention quickly. For me, that's of upmost importance. It looks good, though I expect it will be better as time goes on, and the story kept me going. Good job! Look forward to future updates.

Wow, very impressive for not only a .1, but someone doing a game here for the first time. I love the renders and the development of the characters. This one has me waiting for more, and especially sexy time with the hotties. Bravo Dev, and keep up the great work!

Review is for a 0.1 but for a first release decent 20 minutes worth of play that sets a good foundation.

Women are all beautiful with great proportions. wonderful renders.

Story is simple slice of life reuniting with old friend nothing groundbreaking but stories like this are all character driven anyways and so far the female characters at least all seem diverse enough in their personalities and interesting enough. The MC is a little meh. It's nice that he's normal handsome not handsome like a greek god that women trip over themselves to screw but personality wise he seems a little bland.

Definitely one to watch if the author sticks with in.

Really nothing out of ordinary. Render are good but other than that it's a very tired trope of a guy popping into existence, meeting beautiful girls starved for attention of this guy for no other reason than he's the main character. Dude only has to say a few words and they all jump him like a pack of starved hyenas.

For a first release it has a decent amount of render, we'll have to see how that will go for further releases. Overall i'm not impressed by the plot. We'll see if Dev is able to move it toward something that will stand out here but I wouldn't bet on it.

A very good start. An interesting play on the "new to the city" plot. Appreciating the awkwardness of reconnecting with a childhood friend. And the accompanying changes in the personal relationship. Due to growing older and having been separated. Looking forward to see how you grow this story. Kudos.

This is a honest work. The render as great but the storytelling need improvement.

No need big modification. Just not so word descriptive. The renders talk too.

In resume, If you like realist woman breast size. This game is for you.

The loli tag have no reason. Woman are young and petite. But this is young adult and not children.