VN - Ren'Py - Not Georgia [v0.4a] [Shinita]

It's off with a great start. Georgia is gorgeous, and the other girls aren't bad either. The renders are great in quality and I'm glad the developer didn't opt for titzillas on his models like 99% of everyone else seem to do. There are no animations.

The music is nice and fit the scenes perfectly.

The dialogue is okay for the most part. Some wording and grammar errors, but not enough to make you stop playing it.

The story so far is lighthearted, we don't know much how it's going to develop as the game is pretty short.

No animations, and some language issues is why I removed one star. Otherwise, this is a pretty solid game and you should definitely try it.

Best of luck to @Shinita with your game.

hI,
Thank you for this great work !
Excellent scenario, excellent work !
Adding insta gallery is a great idea, I especialy like georgia sudio wet and holiday postcards.
Still have a few bugs, but not important, and probably du to Koga mod.
Thanks again. Keep going.

Very nice game, looking forward to further versions. I like it so much that I decided to do a German translation. However, this will take some time.
Back to the game: Beautifully designed awesome girls with natural proportions, no ugly cow udders and horse asses to be seen. Just right for gourmets, for lovers of beautiful women.
Looking for some more hardcore sex and more tags like Threesomes (MFF and FMM), and (maybe avoidable) NTR.
Thank you very much for this beautifully designed game.

Really good looking girls, and better writing than I expected. I mean, we’re not talking Shakespeare here, but the story is coherent, the characters behave consistently, and it is even a bit plausible.

There’s some pretty interesting lesbian tension, which some dudes are scared by but if you’re into that it adds a lot of good flavor.

Great artwork and good story pacing. There is obviously something building here but the story isn’t forced and feels like it’s developing organically. I really hope this one continues because I’m already invested.

Off to a great start. Sometimes facial expressions don't match the dialogue, but some of that may be hidden thoughts of the characters. It is really refreshing to see realistic breasts on the female models!

Really, really good. Pacing is perhaps a bit too fast, but that's a minor quibble. Art is terrific and the cast of characters is great. Even the MC is very likeable! This is top-notch work. Cheers to the Dev!

Good lord all the girls in this game are effing perfect. Georgia most of all...... Honestly it's been a long while since I've seen a game look this good everything is amazing. So far there has been quality writing and a few very hot situations. Jus goddamn georgia *Chefs Kiss* is a work of art (pun intended).

I rarely give 5 star reviews, but I'm going to for this game. It's not some amazing epic with deep worldbuilding, or a brilliantly written drama. It's just... a good porn game. But it knows exactly what it is doing and executes flawlessly, and given what it is there is just nothing to subtract.

The renders are gorgeous, the MC is much less annoying than most, the pacing is brisk but not absurd,
the dialogue is believable. As of this version (0.2) there is not a lot of direct sex, but there are plenty of beautiful images and ample teasing. (In particular, the sexual tension whenever Kaylee and Georgia are both on the screen is fantastic. There are a lot of girls I can't wait to see Georgia have lesbian scenes with, but Kaylee is top of the list.)

"Well done!" to the dev, and hope this keeps going for a long time. I'd support the substar/patreon if there was one.

Great renders! So far, this is a good story that could improve with time. The best parts of this game to me are the quality of renders, the gallery and the female partner. The quality of renders are up there with the best I have seen. Truly great work. I also love the photographs and the associated gallery. Most galleries are just screenshots of the game or scene recaps. Here they are part of the story with bonus non-canon bonuses. Great work and can't wait for the next update.

I think there's something wholesome about exhibitionism! I mean, if you're watching/playing porn, there's a good chance you're a bit of a perv.

So if the girls are all exhibitionist, everyone benefits. The girls get off by you watching them and you get off by ... watching them!

So that's the premise, but how well does Not Georgia deliver on that?

In terms of plot, it's not especially original, but there are actually far fewer of the standard tropes than in many other successful games. And again, the exhibitionism makes the game seem a lot fresher, as other plot elements become less important. There are also some intriguing mysteries that have good potential for development.

The models run from cute to stunning, and the only thing undermining the realism is just how many of them tend towards the stunning end. Well that, and the fact that all of them seem to enjoy being perved at.

Regarding the 'loli' issue, IRL, I've known women well into their 20s that look as fresh-faced and lean as Georgia. More importantly, she's presented as an adult. This contrasts with so many games where the girls may have well developed bodies, but are still at high school!

Anyway, I'm happy to rate Not Georgia with 5 stars. It's fun, sexy and, playing as the MC, I don't feel like a creep or a selfish arsehole.

It's short so far but very fun. Having everyone be exhibitionistic is a good theme. I love the renders and choice of body types, and how each character is different. As far as the writing goes, Georgia and Kaylee are the most interesting of course, while the others are more like cardboard cutouts at this point, but I expect them to get more complicated soon. I think the writer understands that a complete harem with everyone is unrealistic, and tough decisions will have to be made. I'm fine with that.

A promising start!

Very promising start. Love the models. Cool to see a nonbinary character, hopefully that character gets a full-fledged personality that isn't just their identity.

Because of that, however, I'm dinging it two stars for the plot, which has started off as cookie-cutter as possible. Our titular character, Georgia, is the billionth female LI to get involved in photography and is showering our MC with nudes right off the bat. One day in and the MC becomes the latest in a long list of AVN MCs to head off to that specific clothes store and get into some shenanigans. Would like to see something more creative here.

An excellent intro to a game that looks like it will be very enticing. I love the primary female character Georgia. She is very cute, outgoing, and extremely sexy. Her uninhibited, sexually adventurous nature is very appealing. It is kind of hard to comment on how good the story will be thus far but I do not have any complaints currently (besides it maybe being a bit generic.. but I don't think that is necessarily a bad thing). I will be looking forward to the next update with anticipation!

It is a good start. I like the renders and the models, the gallery for insta pics is also a great idea. Can't comment yet on the story because it is so short at the moment but what is there i enjoyed.

You do say that you will not do NTR in this game but for people just playing this game without reading the Def notes, i can see that they can get the idea that NTR will be included because of the car modelling part. Personally i am glad it is not planned because 9/10 times i don't enjoy it and turns me off from the game.

Great v.01. As stated, the ladies here are a good break from the big breasted games. The characters introduced are done quite well. I'd personally like a bit more of a bg story on the ladies to give them more depth as the story goes on. But ultimately since this is v.01 a solid 4 stars. I'll give the last star if this game gets completed properly.

I am writing this with the utmost respect for the developer as I am not a terribly creative person and I am in awe when I see creativity manifested, specifically the visual aspect.
I loved the renders, the female characters look divers but still high up on the prettiness chart.
The story is nothing we have not seen before in one form or another but the re-connecting with an old friend after a long time apart gave a nice touch to it and clearly the childhood friends have developed in directions that were not anticipated by the other. I liked that.
I have a few points of criticism that are intended to be constructive, see above re respect.

Please keep going because I like the first look and feel, well especially look, and I can't wait to see more of the girls. They are gorgeous.

I did enjoy this game (played v0.1, looking forward to next update).
it is short, but very good so far, in my opinion

The girls are super cute, most of them looking young but not like children

I do understand, that the creator of this game, tells they all are 18 or older, even though they don't look it. I suggest just ignoring that text in start of the game , instead of giving the game a bad rating for it, as many sites doesn't allow content there might be tagged 'loli'

The game is great! I can't believe how those two people can rate it with 1 and 2 stars - some hate going on here. I don't think that if some of the characters don't look 35 hurts anyone. And if you guys are in such pain, why coming here and write 20-minute "reviews"? Doesn't make much sense, but anyway..

Game is short at this point, but it has absolutely enough content for a first release. Story is not bad either - finally a girl character that is 100% comfortable with her sexuality and cuts the bs. One very strong point to me is that the game does not waste your time with unnecessary lame scenes. Some renders are grainy but I think this was done in purpose, because they are still good.

One suggestion: It seems that there are crossroads in the game and some content may get skipped - it would be nice to implement a way to go though it without loading a saved game and doing the alternative, I think.

Waiting for next update!

cons:
many choices feel pointless.
renders are often grainy
some scenes an the mc's choices make zero sense(the garage scene with Edwards and the scene with Riona(I don't wanna see that))
the mc mentally comments on way to many things, an it is almost always thinking with his dick(I don't want 10+ remainders that he is into that girl, during the photoshoot alone. I know that already)

pros:
writing is okay
the girls are not overly curvy like usually
somewhat interesting cast of girls

conclusion:
game has potential, but right now I will not recommend it to anybody.
choices need to matter.
the mc should not be so dumb, pathetic an overly horny all the time.
if these thing got fixed, then this could be a great game