Comics NotAvailableXXX Comic Development

[Mops61]

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Hello!
My is NotAvailableXXX (N/A) and I make 3d art with Daz3d.
I mainly like making renders revolving around milfs, incest and fantasy themes.
I am planning on starting bigger creative projects in the form of COMICS.

I wanted to make this thread for those interested in discussing their ideas / thoughts for the projects I am going to make

A lot of these details are still WIP and may change as I develop the stories further.
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COMIC #1: The Family Mission (WIP Title)
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COMIC #2: FAMILY DATE (WIP Title)
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COMIC #3: FANTASY COMIC (No Title Yet)
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OTHER DETAILS​

Release Date
I plan on making the first "prologue" at the end of June/beginning of July.

Why comics instead of a visual novel?
I want to work with a lot of ideas and since visual novels are on the "longer side of things" when it comes to project length, I don't think it would be easy to explore those different ideas.

Animations accompanying comics
I want to start learning animation eventually to potentially do a "comic/video" hybrid similar to DobermanS but for the moment it will strictly be renders.

Support Sites
Depending on how development goes and how the prologue is received, I might make a Subscribestar in the future.
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DEVELOPMENT QUESTIONS
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1. How tall should Kyle be?

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2. What fonts would you recommend for "comics"?

3. Tattoos or No Tattoos for Yui?

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Will try to give an update at least once a week

Thanks for reading!!!

May I ask, what model do you use for the Ben character in your second comic?

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

May I ask, what model do you use for the Ben character in your second comic?

It just various Genesis 8 morphs basically. Not a preset character if that makes sense

 

[Mops61]

Thanks, it makes totally sense. It's the usual way to generate a character My respect - i've tryed to reproduce MrDots Alex and failed. Your character looks the same so i thought you can help me figure it out.

Two screen shots from Alex....

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Thanks, it makes totally sense. It's the usual way to generate a character My respect - i've tryed to reproduce MrDots Alex and failed. Your character looks the same so i thought you can help me figure it out.

Two screen shots from Alex....

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Dude that's funny because they do look similar even though I am not familiar with it
Try michael 8.1, it seems like it has a similar nose to the one you are trying to imitate

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

UPDATE
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"Having Grace" is currently 30+ images and probably will be near 40-50 pages. I am trying to get the hang of writing a comic and the story for his comic (around surrogancy pregancy) has been a little awkard to write. I am hoping as the comic goes in full swing and hearing feedback, I can make the idea work.

"Family Mission" is going to be after this but after a shorter prologue because it is pretty straightforward story-wise.
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Evelyn and Jack

I am sure you have been seeing these characters floating about and I am not sure what to do with them.

Part of me is thinking that the comic with these too could be more "sex scenarios" and not rely on story as much. I think it would fit as a bonus comic where it takes place during their "affair" and them indifferent sexual scenarios like a going on vacation for example.

Open to hear your thoughts on it
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Can't wait to start getting into the swing of making comics. Will start with the two prologues and then will make a supporters page (Subscriberstar, boosty, maybe patreon, etc...) for anyone that wants to give support my way.

 

[WilliamDickus]

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Evelyn and Jack
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I am sure you have been seeing these characters floating about and I am not sure what to do with them.

Part of me is thinking that the comic with these too could be more "sex scenarios" and not rely on story as much. I think it would fit as a bonus comic where it takes place during their "affair" and them indifferent sexual scenarios like a going on vacation for example.

Open to hear your thoughts on it
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Can't wait to start getting into the swing of making comics. Will start with the two prologues and then will make a supporters page (Subscriberstar, boosty, maybe patreon, etc...) for anyone that wants to give support my way.

I think what you propose sounds great. Ultimately what matters the most is that you should be comfortable with the story you write and it shouldn't feel forced.

Ps.: damn, isn't she a fine piece of Mommy...

 

[solsuki]

UPDATE
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"Having Grace" is currently 30+ images and probably will be near 40-50 pages. I am trying to get the hang of writing a comic and the story for his comic (around surrogancy pregancy) has been a little awkard to write. I am hoping as the comic goes in full swing and hearing feedback, I can make the idea work.

"Family Mission" is going to be after this but after a shorter prologue because it is pretty straightforward story-wise.
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Evelyn and Jack
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I am sure you have been seeing these characters floating about and I am not sure what to do with them.

Part of me is thinking that the comic with these too could be more "sex scenarios" and not rely on story as much. I think it would fit as a bonus comic where it takes place during their "affair" and them indifferent sexual scenarios like a going on vacation for example.

Open to hear your thoughts on it
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Can't wait to start getting into the swing of making comics. Will start with the two prologues and then will make a supporters page (Subscriberstar, boosty, maybe patreon, etc...) for anyone that wants to give support my way.

I've been seeing alot of your Evelyn/Jack holiday pieces on a few forums and the likes and reactions have been amazing. You are building a solid fan-base out there NA/xxx....you'll have no probs getting support for your patreon. As to the Evelyn/Jack side-story hey, whatever you cook is gold.

 

[Mops61]

It's not an easy decision, it depends on what you want. If you want to make money, you should follow the path of a 'bonus story'. I prefer stories in which sex is a bonus to the story, not the cause. But sex sells, and writing stories like that is a luxurious task because your audience is a very small group.

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

I think what you propose sounds great. Ultimately what matters the most is that you should be comfortable with the story you write and it shouldn't feel forced.

Ps.: damn, isn't she a fine piece of Mommy...

Thanks, I want to tell "this story" for Grace but I know some parts are awkward to write, so hopefully it comes across ok and if not I can fix it

I've been seeing alot of your Evelyn/Jack holiday pieces on a few forums and the likes and reactions have been amazing. You are building a solid fan-base out there NA/xxx....you'll have no probs getting support for your patreon. As to the Evelyn/Jack side-story hey, whatever you cook is gold.

Yeah she's been one of my favorites to work on so hoping to do a full-fledged thing with her soon! Thanks man

It's not an easy decision, it depends on what you want. If you want to make money, you should follow the path of a 'bonus story'. I prefer stories in which sex is a bonus to the story, not the cause. But sex sells, and writing stories like that is a luxurious task because your audience is a very small group.

I think Evelyn comes across more "straightforward with her horniness" so that's partially why I was thinking her story would be framed in a more sex heavy comic. Not sure yet though. I have two comics I am doing now and then will pivot to figure out what I am doing with her.

 

[Mops61]

I like the style you are thinking. Sometimes a character we developed takes her/his life in their own hands

 

[love381]

UPDATE
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"Having Grace" is currently 30+ images and probably will be near 40-50 pages. I am trying to get the hang of writing a comic and the story for his comic (around surrogancy pregancy) has been a little awkard to write. I am hoping as the comic goes in full swing and hearing feedback, I can make the idea work.

"Family Mission" is going to be after this but after a shorter prologue because it is pretty straightforward story-wise.
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Evelyn and Jack
View attachment 5037855
I am sure you have been seeing these characters floating about and I am not sure what to do with them.

Part of me is thinking that the comic with these too could be more "sex scenarios" and not rely on story as much. I think it would fit as a bonus comic where it takes place during their "affair" and them indifferent sexual scenarios like a going on vacation for example.

Open to hear your thoughts on it
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Can't wait to start getting into the swing of making comics. Will start with the two prologues and then will make a supporters page (Subscriberstar, boosty, maybe patreon, etc...) for anyone that wants to give support my way.

some of the best comic book characters that are here, basically everyone's are cardboard and not alive, but yours really looks decent, we are really looking forward to it

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

I like the style you are thinking. Sometimes a character we developed takes her/his life in their own hands

Yeah maybe that will be the angle, Evelyn plays the more "aggressive" role in her relationship with her son

some of the best comic book characters that are here, basically everyone's are cardboard and not alive, but yours really looks decent, we are really looking forward to it

Thank you! I hope you will like my future work

 

[TheDarkRider]

UPDATE
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"Having Grace" is currently 30+ images and probably will be near 40-50 pages. I am trying to get the hang of writing a comic and the story for his comic (around surrogancy pregancy) has been a little awkard to write. I am hoping as the comic goes in full swing and hearing feedback, I can make the idea work.

"Family Mission" is going to be after this but after a shorter prologue because it is pretty straightforward story-wise.
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Evelyn and Jack
View attachment 5037855
I am sure you have been seeing these characters floating about and I am not sure what to do with them.

Part of me is thinking that the comic with these too could be more "sex scenarios" and not rely on story as much. I think it would fit as a bonus comic where it takes place during their "affair" and them indifferent sexual scenarios like a going on vacation for example.

Open to hear your thoughts on it
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Can't wait to start getting into the swing of making comics. Will start with the two prologues and then will make a supporters page (Subscriberstar, boosty, maybe patreon, etc...) for anyone that wants to give support my way.

I don't understand clearly!

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Just a quick update:
The prologue for Having Grace will be out this Sunday

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Sorry, another update:
I have all the images rendered but need to finish placing the text and doing some postwork on PS,
so it might release early tomorrow/Monday

The prologue is now 64 pages.
It doesn't really have any sexual scenes but the idea is with Chapter 1 that is what is going to start.

My second prologue I am doing for "Family Mission" /"Kyle's Mission" will be done quicker and will have less pages because the story is much more straight forward.

Will update again soon

 

[Maestro91]

Good stuff, take all the time you need I say

 

[solsuki]

Sorry, another update:
I have all the images rendered but need to finish placing the text and doing some postwork on PS,
so it might release early tomorrow/Monday

The prologue is now 64 pages.
It doesn't really have any sexual scenes but the idea is with Chapter 1 that is what is going to start.

My second prologue I am doing for "Family Mission" /"Kyle's Mission" will be done quicker and will have less pages because the story is much more straight forward.

Will update again soon

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Looking amzing NA/xxx, and I can gladly wait for your quality work....take your time.

 

[WilliamDickus]

I can only agree with what's been said: quality is more important than quick updates. And judging from what we've seen, you will produce quality

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Having Grace: Prologue

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Here is the beginning of the comic "Having Grace" that I am starting with.
It is about 70 pages. Keep in mind that there isn't really any sexual content yet in the comic. The purpose of this prologue was to lay the groundwork of the project.

I am going to continue the prologue for my other comic "Kyle's Mission" and then alternate between the two comics.
"Kyle's Mission" is much more straightforward and doesn't require that long of an intro. Will update everyone when I am closing to getting this done.

Please leave your feedback/comments. I want to make sure these both have a good foundation before I start building on them

 

[love381]

Having Grace: Prologue
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Here is the beginning of the comic "Having Grace" that I am starting with.
It is about 70 pages. Keep in mind that there isn't really any sexual content yet in the game. The purpose of this prologue was to lay the groundwork of the project.

I am going to continue the prologue for my other comic "Kyle's Mission" and then alternate between the two comics.
"Kyle's Mission" is much more straightforward and doesn't require that long of an intro. Will update everyone when I am closing to getting this done.

Please leave your feedback/comments. I want to make sure these both have a good foundation before I start building on them

very beautiful and high quality models