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[solsuki]

Having Grace: Prologue
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Here is the beginning of the comic "Having Grace" that I am starting with.
It is about 70 pages. Keep in mind that there isn't really any sexual content yet in the comic. The purpose of this prologue was to lay the groundwork of the project.

I am going to continue the prologue for my other comic "Kyle's Mission" and then alternate between the two comics.
"Kyle's Mission" is much more straightforward and doesn't require that long of an intro. Will update everyone when I am closing to getting this done.

Please leave your feedback/comments. I want to make sure these both have a good foundation before I start building on them

Whoa...Talk about 'hot for the teacher'. You really do gorgeous stuff NA/xxx....all the characters are brilliant. Really looking forward to the continuation of this. Thankyou for sharing.

 

[iamBatmannotyou]

I found one writing mistake.

I believe in picture 11 when he says," I can´t believe them sometimes. They barely try to take to me about anything..." It should have been a talk, not a take.

(Use free version of Grammarly; it shows you if you misspell something, wrong word, and 3 times a day, it shows you better sentences )

Otherwise, dope beginning and nice comic, and beautiful renders.

 

[WilliamDickus]

Having Grace: Prologue
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Here is the beginning of the comic "Having Grace" that I am starting with.
It is about 70 pages. Keep in mind that there isn't really any sexual content yet in the comic. The purpose of this prologue was to lay the groundwork of the project.

I am going to continue the prologue for my other comic "Kyle's Mission" and then alternate between the two comics.
"Kyle's Mission" is much more straightforward and doesn't require that long of an intro. Will update everyone when I am closing to getting this done.

Please leave your feedback/comments. I want to make sure these both have a good foundation before I start building on them

Looking great! Her teacher outfit/style is hot. I think it would be a good idea if she wore uptight clothing in school and more casual/comfortable/revealing outfits at home.

There are a couple of typos:
page 9: for you TO stay with
page 11: TALK to me
page 12: wants

Just my personal taste, but for the future, maybe once we start seeing her in more revealing outfits, I think it's super hot when her erect nipples are poking through the shirt, or when part of the areola is not covered by the top/bra and we can see it.

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

I found one writing mistake.

I believe in picture 11 when he says," I can´t believe them sometimes. They barely try to take to me about anything..." It should have been a talk, not a take.

(Use free version of Grammarly; it shows you if you misspell something, wrong word, and 3 times a day, it shows you better sentences )

Otherwise, dope beginning and nice comic, and beautiful renders.

Thanks! I'll correct it
And good suggestion with Grammarly. I think I need to review it multiple times before releasing, I got a bit too excited to release it lol

Looking great! Her teacher outfit/style is hot. I think it would be a good idea if she wore uptight clothing in school and more casual/comfortable/revealing outfits at home.

There are a couple of typos:
page 9: for you TO stay with
page 11: TALK to me
page 12: wants

Just my personal taste, but for the future, maybe once we start seeing her in more revealing outfits, I think it's super hot when we her erect nipples are poking through the shirt, or when part of the areola is not covered by the top/bra and we can see it.

Thanks for pointing those out, I'll do an update and fix it

And I plan for her to be more "comfortable" with Mitch and start wearing naughtier clothing

 

[alfamgb]

Having Grace: Prologue
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Here is the beginning of the comic "Having Grace" that I am starting with.
It is about 70 pages. Keep in mind that there isn't really any sexual content yet in the comic. The purpose of this prologue was to lay the groundwork of the project.

I am going to continue the prologue for my other comic "Kyle's Mission" and then alternate between the two comics.
"Kyle's Mission" is much more straightforward and doesn't require that long of an intro. Will update everyone when I am closing to getting this done.

Please leave your feedback/comments. I want to make sure these both have a good foundation before I start building on them

Really good start, keep up the slow buildup and corruption,with teases,more bold outfits as time passes, slip ups, spying/peeks, the reward will be sweeter .
It has great potential

 

[Evilmaniac]

Its been a while since I felt this excited reading a prologue, no scenes yet, the story is building up and I can't wait for more. Good job brother.

 

[Maestro91]

This looks great, nice setup, tried and true story with the new kid in town and the characters look awesome

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

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I'm glad people are enjoying the beginning of "Having Grace"! It is really motivating me to push forward and make more lewd stories
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[alfamgb]

Also I noticed the clothes are squeezing the boobs, can you do the renders without the crease or its too time consuming

 

[WilliamDickus]

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I'm glad people are enjoying the beginning of "Having Grace"! It is really motivating me to push forward and make more lewd stories
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I am starting to make some socials if people are interested:

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

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Oedipus Complex Now that's a topic I'd be happy to learn about in school. Especially from Grace.

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Also I noticed the clothes are squeezing the boobs, can you do the renders without the crease or its too time consuming

Do you mean the render I just posted? The creases all over the shirt?

 

[Maestro91]

Do you mean the render I just posted? The creases all over the shirt?

Yea, I think he means how it conforms to the shape of the breasts, hugging the skin tightly in an unrealistic way underneath instead of being stretched around

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Yea, I think he means how it conforms to the shape of the breasts, hugging the skin tightly in an unrealistic way underneath instead of being stretched around

That makes sense, I can remove the creases and see if it is more realistic.

 

[alfamgb]

That makes sense, I can remove the creases and see if it is more realistic.

Yes, I meant something like this

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Yes, I meant something like this
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I tried that with it and it wasn't "smoothing" correctly
I can see if I can open it up and blender and manually do something. I agree, that does look better

 

[Mops61]

I tried that with it and it wasn't "smoothing" correctly
I can see if I can open it up and blender and manually do something. I agree, that does look better

Have you tried the method with timeline and dForce? frame 1: reduce the breast size. Frame 30: grow breast to final size. That works for me in most cases. you can add a smooth modifier to the blouse after the draping process and increase the value to about 90.

 

[NotAvailableXXX]

Have you tried the method with timeline and dForce? frame 1: reduce the breast size. Frame 30: grow breast to final size. That works for me in most cases. you can add a smooth modifier to the blouse after the draping process and increase the value to about 90.

I need to try that! I didn't consider it
The one issue is the shirt asset is actually "separate pieces", so with too much smoothing it completely separates. But I'll mess around with that idea especially other clothing items I consider

 

[rocketttt]

Hi friend, very aphigenic prologue, I also want to note that it's been a long time since I read prologue / comics with trepidation. You've got a pretty good script.

I don't know how to phrase it properly, but I'll give it a shot. I thought you said that we as fans have the opportunity to influence the course of action of the comic book or the outfits of the heroines, so I want to say that it can lead the comic book to an average scenario, or to the outfits of "like everyone else", because our comic book observation dictates to us what we have already seen. If you do everything the way you see it, the way you see it, you can get something very unusual and tasteful. Not standard you know...

But you're a big handsome guy

 

[Igias Hadesss]

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I'm glad people are enjoying the beginning of "Having Grace"! It is really motivating me to push forward and make more lewd stories
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I am starting to make some socials if people are interested:

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

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Great start NAXXX. Congrats for your work. Can't wait for next chapter and much more Keep up the good work.
P.S. Stockings are also nice, if it is possible of course.

 

[TheDarkRider]

Having Grace: Prologue
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Here is the beginning of the comic "Having Grace" that I am starting with.
It is about 70 pages. Keep in mind that there isn't really any sexual content yet in the comic. The purpose of this prologue was to lay the groundwork of the project.

I am going to continue the prologue for my other comic "Kyle's Mission" and then alternate between the two comics.
"Kyle's Mission" is much more straightforward and doesn't require that long of an intro. Will update everyone when I am closing to getting this done.

Please leave your feedback/comments. I want to make sure these both have a good foundation before I start building on them

I just read the prologue, it's truly amazing, There are a few grammatical mistakes! but they're easy to overlook given the overall quality BTW, are both Grace and Diana going to be pregnant with Mitch's child?