Neighbor? Son? Someone else
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Yui Bathing
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This is the "Yakuza Milf" I had teased before
I am re-thinking what I'll do with her since I like her design enough that she has her own "content" rather than be a side character.
If you have any ideas I am open to hearing them
Also a small preview of next set of images from Having Grace:
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Awkward dinner with Mrs. Fiore...
Son is perfect. As you've already hinted in your last Twitter post where she enters an onsen, naked, being alone with her son. However, their story could be slightly different. What if Yui were the first to develop feelings, while he initially struggled to fight off her suggestive approaches?View attachment 5170674
Yui Bathing
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This is the "Yakuza Milf" I had teased before
I am re-thinking what I'll do with her since I like her design enough that she has her own "content" rather than be a side character.
If you have any ideas I am open to hearing them
That's a great idea and I like the spin-off based off the render I did. I'll consider itSon is perfect. As you've already hinted in your last Twitter post where she enters an onsen, naked, being alone with her son. However, their story could be slightly different. What if Yui were the first to develop feelings, while he initially struggled to fight off her suggestive approaches?
This could start with Yui being casually comfortable around her son (just as in the onsen), leading her to notice his "involuntary reactions" despite his awkardness, which then spark her freaky feelings towards him. But Yui tires her best not to directly act on them, rather she indulges with those feelings personally in private. There would be visibile changes in her attitude and behavior towards her son. Eventually, she gives into her feelings completely, and ends up spying, sneaking, luring her son in various ways...and the rest is them happily bonding with each other.
Let me know if this sounds fitting
I'm glad you liked it. Is this going to be another short, fast-paced comic? If so, you could still add solo filler scenes or narrative flashbacks depicting how their relationship came to be.That's a great idea and I like the spin-off based off the render I did. I'll consider it
Yakuza idea is also great!I'm glad you liked it. Is this going to be another short, fast-paced comic? If so, you could still add solo filler scenes or narrative flashbacks depicting how their relationship came to be.
Also, I noticed in your Twitter post that the son had glasses, which gives him a more well-mannered, civilized look. This made me think of a deeper narrative backdrop: The son never liked the Yakuza lifestyle and always intended to escape his home to find a simple life. But this newfound relationship with Yui would eventually make him stay and become the Yakuza boss he never wanted to be, OR the two would abandon the Yakuza to live their new life far far away.
What do you think?
so many ideas, husband is always busy with yakuza stuff, and Yui spends all the time with her son...Yakuza idea is also great!
This one would probably be part of the "short-action focused comics"
In a traditional japanese family (such as a Yakuza's that might uphold the traditions strictly) the husband and wife wouldn't be so close, as the wife would take the submissive/care-taker role in the heirarchy of the family, which would give her plenty of room to get close to her son.
Thanks for all the suggestions! I do like the Yakuza angle for the story, also the idea the dad's is the boss and the son doesn't want to be part of it and wants his mom out of it
Sorry for this silly question but why is his name peter lol XD? Or could it be that he has an actual Japanese name but because he doesn't want to associate himself with the Yakuza, he goes by peter?Thanks for all the suggestions! I do like the Yakuza angle for the story, also the idea the dad's is the boss and the son doesn't want to be part of it and wants his mom out of it
I'll start with Shannon's story for the "mini-comic" and then will see if this or another one I pivot into
Oh sorry I meant to address that, first I had no clue where I was going with Yui.
The idea that Peter moves back to his home country is also great, which would make more sense why he dislikes the Yakuza and initially feels awkward about Yui's advances towards him. Also, don't change it now (unless you really want to), I think it would be inconsistent with the twitter post xD. Rather let him have two names, like how most Asians who immigrate to the west do haha.
.You are dropping one banger after another with really amazing ideas and concepts,View attachment 5160412
This is the mini-comic I'll be working on in-between Having Grace + Family/Kyle's Mission
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Concept:
Shannon lives with her husband, Gene, and her son, Tyler. Her husband likes traditional values and forces Shannon keep her position as a "stay-at-home mom" despite their ongoing financial issues. Shannon's current lifestyle causes her to resent her husband and be unhappy.
That is until, Shannon, finds an "alternative" way for her to support herself. Then, with the help of her son, she realizes this maybe the life she always wanted to live and that her husband isn't completely honest either with the life he wants to live...
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Like I have said in previous posts, this comic will have a faster pace, meaning, that there will be more sex scenes earlier since Shannon essentially becomes a pornstar with...her son
