Unity NTR Corp [Ch. 4 Full A] [NTR Corporation]

[cho'gall]

I will watch you career with great interest

 

[Lolibobo]

How was it?

in short... very short, well tbe for 0.01 release. The visuals are really cute, dialog needs work but i believe it has potential. will look out for future releases.

 

[Hellon okay-ness]

I don't care about the NTR but like, the artstyle, jesus is just....no.

 

[FlamesOfVengeance]

Can I play as anyone other than Ron, please?

 

[ntrcorp]

Can I play as anyone other than Ron, please?

I intend to do that in the future. But who do you want to play as?

 

[yuukit]

Finally another ntr game waiting more =)

 

[FlamesOfVengeance]

I intend to do that in the future. But who do you want to play as?

I didn't expect you to actually want to add more playable characters. I know that this is a NTR game so I guess playing as Ron would be fun for the cucks. I feel like making the wife playable would be great tho as it would keep the NTR intact but also offer a different experience for those who only want to see it all from the woman's perspective. Alternatively, the game could also offer a Netori perspective where you play as one of the dudes in the city and your objective is to steal Ron's wife (and maybe other girlfriends and wives as well). I think if all 3 of these options would be a thing, there would be something for everyone. Naturally tho, it would be a ton of work so I understand if you would prefer to focus on only Ron as a playable character.

 

[ntrcorp]

It's 2023: it's ok to embrace your inner femboi, no need to feel shame. Probably hiding a pert little ass behind the fanny-pack, ain't ya?



Yeah, this but not being ironic. Game needed at least another QA / tech pass or three and at least three more months of content / work before it went begging to Patreon. Like, it's a shame: if the Dev had asked for genuine feedback and presented it as a pure Alpha (non-monetized) build as a "pre-launch that needs advice", s/he could have easily ironed this all out in the next couple of months.

Instead, you've really pissed me off by shoving an undeserved Patreon request into an unskippable / unexitable scene of a single nudie splash screen (Alt-F4 being the only working exit) and bait / switched me into being irked.

In case the Dev ever reads this:

1) Fix the Text box wrap / resolution issues: Unity is native, setting widescreen resolutions is easy as piss
2) Fix the frame freeze (you've done something wrong on interrupt delay on mouse click) / fix the "hold mouse button down to move -- varible speed bug" issue you have, which again is an input delay error on your part
3) Fix your fucking Ingrish, or ask nicely for an editor; it's not sexy to declare that the Protag pissed himself on seeing the NTR if you're not going for some really specific kinks
4) Zoom the entire view out by 25-33% and then use Right click to Zoom in for close puzzle work
5) Don't bait n switch people who can view bestiality pr0n and offer advice on the tack used [infamously: the guy who did it, did it *correctly* which is kudos to him at least]; especially don't do it with a content slice anyone on the forum could write in the time they take to have a wank
6) Patreon is for when your product is *READY TO LAUNCH* at least for a beta / content Coming Soon[tm]; it's not there to pay you for your Unity License. And yes, if people got irked enough, you can have code pulled because you fail to meet even the lax Patreon standards that determine a "working product" here.
7) Patreon is there when you've "hooked" the punter into wanting more: this not only failed this, it made me switch to "fuck you, pay me" mode because of how rude it was about the entire thing.


Other than that, you're getting a reply because the actual idea / creative effort was good and deserved a lot more than what you did with it.

~

Oh, and pro-tip: if you're making maps, make sure the player can always determine the playable area and the back-drop easily: in a build this rough, putting paths that look identical but have invisible walls means you're a fucking muppet and no-one can tell if it's a bug or not, nothing more [this is specifically the shop / school paths, all your diagonal connections are boxed by invisible walls, yes I did notice]. 101, first things you learn when you do this for a living.

Thank you for all the feedbacks!
It sure have a lot of flaws.
I'll try fixing bugs you point out to improve the gaming experience

 

[ntrcorp]

good start, but there's things that need to be worked on.

-the navigation is hard, feels like your character collide with everything therefore moving is painfull.

-the view distance, the camera being so close to the character make it so you have no idea of what's in front of you or around.

-no fullscreen toggle?

-everytime i click somewhere to move, the game stutter for a few frames.

sync the "wet noise" from h scene to the speed of the animation, so the player doesnt hear "plap,plap,plap" if in the scene the characters are barely moving.

overall, nice idea of a game, i dig the isometric style and "free movement" but plenty to polish and i've yet to see what your writting is like, the only scene available barely had any(i've seen japanese title with more words in them than in the scene).

if you're aiming for a netorare, netorase game, put great attention and effort in your texts and dialogue, otherwise it's just a porn game with your wife being a whore.

godspeed,Dev-Kun.

Thank you for the feedbacks!

 

[sevendustkorn1008]

As an aside, the entire "Hot Wife" USA kink (which is where it came from as a spin off of cuckold / BBC fetishes) side has huge slices of racial guilt / fetishizing, heavily mixed into the BBC / Black Spade stuff, it's all a bit... icky. Or at the very least, is only a turn on for people from a culture where slavery was a thing until really recently, if you know what I'm saying.

Eh, I'm also from the US, and that's kind of a limited view of the "Hot Wife" kink. What you're describing sounds more like the "Beta Cuck"/BBC fetish, whereas Hot Wifing is more closely related to Stagging/Sharing. That's not to say that there can't be a racial element to Hot Wives. That can absolutely be a factor. If the husband/boyfriend looks at his wife's sexual partner as an object to satisfy her sexual urges, then that definitely has that strange racial undertone.

With that being said, I've seen plenty of examples of Hot Wives where all parties involved are of the same race. In those instances, which is very common, the mindset behind a Hot Wife is that he husband/boyfriend thinks his wife is so hot that it'd be selfish to keep her to himself. So, he lets others have sex with her so they can experience how hot she is. There's no racial element in that type of Hot Wife. So, to say the "entire" Hot Wife kink is full of racial undertones is a blanket statement that ignores a large chunk of the Hot Wife kink.

 

[DrakZier]

thx

 

[px305]

Looks promising but, I rather wait and give it a try when there's more content in it.

GL to the dev.

 

[Kotobiki]

So, does one sign up to NTR Corp or how does that work?

 

[ntrcorp]

Well shit, now I want to play THAT game.

Hey, Actually I have a project with that idea.
It's called "NTRVERSE"
The first demo also posted on my Patreon.
NTRVERSE is about a young guy with his Vespa that could travel through multi-verse and fuck hotwives in every universe
The first chapter is about Helen Parr, due to financial issue have to take a lingerie photoshoot part time job
I don't have so much feedback in that project so I put it on hold for now.
Do you guys like to try it? I'll open a thread here too.

 

[Spamwise]

Hey, Actually I have a project with that idea.
It's called "NTRVERSE"
The first demo also posted on my Patreon.
NTRVERSE is about a young guy with his Vespa that could travel through multi-verse and fuck hotwives in every universe
The first chapter is about Helen Parr, due to financial issue have to take a lingerie photoshoot part time job
I don't have so much feedback in that project so I put it on hold for now.
Do you guys like to try it? I'll open a thread here too.

I feel like the best way to approach that concept would be to generate a bank of body components and traits, and randomly generate waifus to seduce.

 

[quanbe]

why is there the genius multi task worker bald man from brazzers in this game the infamous dude who is a doctor /a firefighter / a cop/ a scientist/ a teacher/an astronaut and a lot more aka Johnny Sins ???

 

[Cavalo 23]

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[rainwh0]

Thank you for the feedbacks!

can you released on steam ? i can support you from there

 

[ntrcorp]

can you released on steam ? i can support you from there

I planned to, and will update with you

 

[Fate stay]

Will give this game a try