I am planning to write someting longer once i finish the woman side. but so far from the man side.
- scenes are not too long. counted around 5-7 voice lines top I do not include text ones because I am a fast reader. the point is that scenes are written with just the right ammount of text to do what they need to do.
- the couple are proactive. the husband has sex with his wife, the wife wants to have sex trough out the story. wich is something that never happens in other cuck PoV. the wife being extroverted here really lets her show her personality and how it changes instead of the usual reactive passive wife.
- every scene, includes a change, you notice how the wife has a singular change in each scene as she progressively becomes something else. and the changes are more natural, nothing like suddenly being tanned and blonde haired. you end up looking foward for what change will happen in the next scene. you can go for example on one sex scene they orgasm at the same time to another one where she kinda hesitates and says "yeah sure i came" same with regular stuf as she leads you around and starts misleading you in conversations.
- the story divergence is tied to a secondary woman wich makes the story choices change based on what the husban does more logical the story literally changes according to what the husband does at X moment with the other girl. this makes the husband side more interesting
- the reveals are ANIMATED. giving them that extra punch at the end of the branches
- and even though the husband scenes are not animaded as i previously mentioned they make it up with text even if the scene looks the same the husband points out details as the way his sex with her wife changes in ways that were not expressed before.
literally first cuck PoV where I am not skipping text just because it is short and each line is made of gold.
Hey, I was literally playing this game rn too, it's the same ANIM game with the father stealing your wife right? I was wondering, is it possible to AVOID the coworker girl from making advances, like she gives a bj to MC eventually, but can you just not have that happen and have the husband be completely innocent? Would make it hit harder imo if he didn't really do anything wrong at all.
But yeah, the writing is great and the betrayal signs hit hard. The other ANIM game which really got me was basically the first Japanese VN I played which was NTR Homestay, especially because that had one of my favorite storylines, oyakodon where both your wife and daughter are stolen by the arrogant guy. The "reveal" scene in that game is glorious and hot on the oyakodon route.