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desmosome

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I can't spoil how the plot will progress.
#spoiler -but it will start from soft wholesome NTR to hard....
Can you elaborate on what do you mean by soft wholesome NTR? The husband being happy with sharing her and stuff, but it escalates into things he don't want?

Or you mean like slow burn NTR where it starts with the girl being a loving wife/gf and slowly gets corrupted behind the scenes?
 
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Pagoramix

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yeah lack a bit of story building. Am not for painfull slow burn, but i could use a bit of context about
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Well in any case, lack a bit of story building.

Well, if you want my take on this, you could have simply made a dialog between those two characters where Rachel is actually the one asking John for more work, wheelchair-san refuse, for the chores left aren't the kind that are stricly legal or whatever, and GF ask for it anyway. Simple, but yet context enough for merry old me.
I mean, am not telling you what to write or anything, my point is, just explain why the fuck she does what she does, doesn't need to be even plausible or realistic, just give us something :unsure:
 

NTRCaptain

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can you give me a link to this game (My Vampire Gf) I couldn't find it..((
Hey, it is not released yet, my vampire GF will release on 8th feb for Patreon members first and later I will post the game here. (I clearly mentioned release dates)

  • 8TH February: Netorase : My Vampire Gf { Chapter -1}
  • 15TH February: Our Chat Group {Chapter -3}
  • 22nd February: NTR Chat Group {Chapter -3}
 
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NTRCaptain

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yeah lack a bit of story building. Am not for painfull slow burn, but i could use a bit of context about
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Well in any case, lack a bit of story building.

Well, if you want my take on this, you could have simply made a dialog between those two characters where Rachel is actually the one asking John for more work, wheelchair-san refuse, for the chores left aren't the kind that are stricly legal or whatever, and GF ask for it anyway. Simple, but yet context enough for merry old me.
I mean, am not telling you what to write or anything, my point is, just explain why the fuck she does what she does, doesn't need to be even plausible or realistic, just give us something :unsure:
Thanks for feedback man means a lot; I will try to improve plot and script with next chapter release. <3
 
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NTRCaptain

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Can you elaborate on what do you mean by soft wholesome NTR? The husband being happy with sharing her and stuff, but it escalates into things he don't want?

Or you mean like slow burn NTR where it starts with the girl being a loving wife/gf and slowly gets corrupted behind the scenes?
"you mean like slow burn NTR where it starts with the girl being a loving wife/gf and slowly gets corrupted behind the scenes?"- this one.
 
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moozoo

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It won't be rushed; I will also add more plot and rewrite a bit of this chapter, so it won't feel rushed and release it with next chapter this month. Thanks for feedback. <3
Sure, good luck with the project.
Btw, when MC's love interest is taken by somebody in a worse shape, I feel pity for that woman and interest kind of fades away, don't see much NTR there.. but maybe that's just me, won't press on that.
 
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Evilko

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Not bad, not bad, but... imho plot advances too fast, girl only started to help John and already happy massages. Missed the best part - corruption. Or the girl is just a slut from the beginning?
 

ratdotoking

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Obviously someone else has already mentioned this but, some of the enormous smiles are really creepy, like extremely creepy. I'd even go so far as to say that even horror games often times fail to scare people as much because they rely on jump scares.

Any chance the generation algorithm could be changed a bit to not include such creepy smiles?
Nothing wrong with smiles in any of the other AI-generated images by others making similar games with AI-generated content from what I've seen.

In fact, I've even played some horror-themed adult games, yet none of them managed to (as the Chinese like to call it) wilt 'my little brother' faster than those smiles.

And this may seem somewhat excessive, but I would go so far as to say that maybe re-generating these images may be better for the game and how people view it. Apologies if it seems like I am overreaching by asking for this, as ultimately all game devs are entitled to their own creative vision and what they aim to have in a game.

Not every game is for everyone, for example if I were to be saying, don't make an NTR game, go for vanilla, then it would clearly be me trying to push my preferences onto you the creator. But given that you didn't really seem to have intended to have this game be a grisly murder mystery or horror themed game, I hope it doesn't feel like I am overreaching by suggesting that some of the fear-inducing images be reworked.

In today's day and age of instant gratification, with people's brains hooked on mobile phones, shorts, etc first/initial impacts can play a huge role on how a possible future supporter views your product. Hence why many creators often times rework their initial chapters (another aspect would also be that they've learned more).

However, if you did like the images a lot as they were, then completely disregard my opinions. These small-scale projects by indie devs are almost always passion projects, with very few of them aimed at simply generating revenue. I hope that you won't feel pressured to cater to the random masses, make changes based upon them, and simply lose all passion for future game dev endeavors, because you no longer enjoy your own work. I'd say you should always prioritize your own preferences first, and then if you have some extra space in there for the masses then 'maybe' include what they ask for.

I tried to have this be in the form of constructive criticism as much as possible, but ultimately as a human being I have my own biases, maybe a lot of people didn't feel that the images were creepy and it was just a small vocal minority of us that felt that way, and your average Joe just enjoyed the game as is.

Apart from that, kudos on all the hard work, and good luck with all your future endeavors, will definitely be keeping an eye on your future works. Cheers!
 

NTRCaptain

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Obviously someone else has already mentioned this but, some of the enormous smiles are really creepy, like extremely creepy. I'd even go so far as to say that even horror games often times fail to scare people as much because they rely on jump scares.

Any chance the generation algorithm could be changed a bit to not include such creepy smiles?
Nothing wrong with smiles in any of the other AI-generated images by others making similar games with AI-generated content from what I've seen.

In fact, I've even played some horror-themed adult games, yet none of them managed to (as the Chinese like to call it) wilt 'my little brother' faster than those smiles.

And this may seem somewhat excessive, but I would go so far as to say that maybe re-generating these images may be better for the game and how people view it. Apologies if it seems like I am overreaching by asking for this, as ultimately all game devs are entitled to their own creative vision and what they aim to have in a game.

Not every game is for everyone, for example if I were to be saying, don't make an NTR game, go for vanilla, then it would clearly be me trying to push my preferences onto you the creator. But given that you didn't really seem to have intended to have this game be a grisly murder mystery or horror themed game, I hope it doesn't feel like I am overreaching by suggesting that some of the fear-inducing images be reworked.

In today's day and age of instant gratification, with people's brains hooked on mobile phones, shorts, etc first/initial impacts can play a huge role on how a possible future supporter views your product. Hence why many creators often times rework their initial chapters (another aspect would also be that they've learned more).

However, if you did like the images a lot as they were, then completely disregard my opinions. These small-scale projects by indie devs are almost always passion projects, with very few of them aimed at simply generating revenue. I hope that you won't feel pressured to cater to the random masses, make changes based upon them, and simply lose all passion for future game dev endeavors, because you no longer enjoy your own work. I'd say you should always prioritize your own preferences first, and then if you have some extra space in there for the masses then 'maybe' include what they ask for.

I tried to have this be in the form of constructive criticism as much as possible, but ultimately as a human being I have my own biases, maybe a lot of people didn't feel that the images were creepy and it was just a small vocal minority of us that felt that way, and your average Joe just enjoyed the game as is.

Apart from that, kudos on all the hard work, and good luck with all your future endeavors, will definitely be keeping an eye on your future works. Cheers!
Hey buddy, I already remade all renders for chapter one based on feedback, no more creepy smiles and inconsistent models have been fixed. Please try the new version now. <3
 

TofuCircle

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Images are nice. Rachel asks what being a caretaker would involve, John never answers, and she just accepts it? Doesn't really feel like slow burn corruption of a loving wife. Unless the edits haven't been made yet. Washes the guy's back twice (second time in a swimsuit due to leaky pipe), helps in gardens, and suddenly she's in her lingerie and giving handjobs.

Edit: Also, can't click images to zoom in, which is an issue.
 
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deviousstorm

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Instead of developing 3 games at the same time, wouldn't it make more sense to focus on just one game and move on to the other games once it's finished?
Or you package it into one giant game package and have them be different characters / settings for you to play in. Thus you can switch to different stories. With it lightly loosely connected to each other.
 

Mrbanjo

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How much content is there? I don't want to download it to find each chapter is only 15/30 minutes long
 

ratdotoking

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Hey buddy, I already remade all renders for chapter one based on feedback, no more creepy smiles and inconsistent models have been fixed. Please try the new version now. <3
Most certainly much better, and I was comparing some of the AI generated images I'd liked quite a bit as opposed to the ones I found creepy, and I still couldn't say exactly why.

For example rachel0.png and rachel3.png (images/r/c1)

Like your typical internet autist, I therefore embarked on a new venture of learning as to how facial expressions result in how we perceive emotions of those we see/face.

So typically when people smile, two grooves form at the side of your face, and the cheeks at the sides of your face are displaced upwards, which is why when people laugh very hard they tend to close their eyes when laughing very loud.

Now here, though the person is smiling, the smile groove indentation is not that big, the cheeks aren't displaced upwards, but the teeth are in full display, while the eyes are wide open (partly due to the anime style), and as such it's like a sort of predatory vibe as if they've got their eyes wide open staring at you as if you were an animal of prey, showing off the teeth they're going to use to bite chunks off your flesh.

I'd say it would kind of be like seeing a person on the street that you think is just a normal human being in front of you have their head rotate 180 degrees with their neck completely stationary, and you'd be like, FUCK, that is not how humans move.

Obviously the above stuff is just the concepts behind it, in the image itself it was more subtle, hence people just felt there was 'something off' but couldn't tell exactly what.

Also, ultimately I've got to say my complaints are kind of like I just had a spoonful of the dish you spent dozens if not hundreds of hours to make and instantly complained, "Chef, the food's not good, I don't like it." Easy to say it doesn't taste/feel good, hard to say how to improve it. Nevertheless I tried to be as constructive as possible once again.
 
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Dopplyn

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Hard NTR doesn't imply humiliation. If the story is well written and it develops MC's love interest properly, even light NTR situation might trigger hard emotions and depression. Hard NTR might be accompanied with joy and camaraderie at the surface, but corroding your soul from inside.
I know, but I prefer the wholesome part, so I just avoid games where the hard NTR is the focus, I'm more leaned into NEtorase/NTR (Wholesome, with option for the MC enjoy, participate and etc.)
 
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