RPGM NTR Revenge [v0.2.3] [SAUCIER]

[Saucier]

Everyone has something in their life they cherish.

That is what the 'hero' in this story would take. If it's a position, then the 'hero' would take that position. If it's glory, or fame, then the hero would become better at it than the guy he's getting revenge on and take the glory and fame for himself.

Again, EVERYONE has something in life they don't want to lose, that's what a good revenge hero would target and take away.

Yup, agreed!
It's definitely something that will be added to the game!

 

[Saucier]

Daughters or sisters tho? Maybe a co worker they have a crush on? Or maybe their female boss that's constantly degrading them.
Plenty of targets to choose.

Lots of targets, and plenty of ways to reach them.

 

[Ozygator]

Hey, English is not my first language indeed!
I started correcting the punctuation mistakes and the omissions.
I can't guarantee perfect English, but I will do better next time!

Thank's a lot for the feedback!

I'd be happy to help proof-read if you want a volunteer. At least I'd get some positive use from all those college English/writing courses.

(I'm a native speaker I mean in case that wasn't apparent.)

 

[Inaaca]

If your wife is cheating on you and you wanted revenge, why on Earth would you target other dudes instead of your wife? Some pretty fucked up priorities, there. The dudes would probably even help you get revenge on your wife if they knew what was up. Bros before hoes.

 

[Saucier]

I'd be happy to help proof-read if you want a volunteer. At least I'd get some positive use from all those college English/writing courses.

(I'm a native speaker I mean in case that wasn't apparent.)

I'll keep that in mind, thanks!

 

[LUISIL]

Oh Dear Lord HOW MUCH I hate RPGM!
I always ending saying this, but then a Game like this appears with a Good premise, Nice Art and I say myself again:"Lets give it a Try, maybe it was just a bad experience last time, its just me"
and after just a few minutes...OH DEAR LORD HOW MUCH I HATE RPGM!!
Its just a Demo, Pleeeease good Sir, change to RenPy, Unity, Arcade even Atari but not RPGM, I'm begging You!

 

[Saucier]

If your wife is cheating on you and you wanted revenge, why on Earth would you target other dudes instead of your wife? Some pretty fucked up priorities, there. The dudes would probably even help you get revenge on your wife if they knew what was up. Bros before hoes.

I see the point, but the story will show why the MC want revenge over the dudes. And the wife won't be "unpunished"!

 

[Febui]

even Atari but not RPGM, I'm begging You!

Make it with homebrew tools for the Nintendo Wii.

 

[Saucier]

Oh Dear Lord HOW MUCH I hate RPGM!
I always ending saying this, but then a Game like this appears with a Good premise, Nice Art and I say myself again:"Lets give it a Try, maybe it was just a bad experience last time, its just me"
and after just a few minutes...OH DEAR LORD HOW MUCH I HATE RPGM!!
Its just a Demo, Pleeeease good Sir, change to RenPy, Unity, Arcade even Atari but not RPGM, I'm begging You!

Sad news for you, I'm staying on RPGM.

But why do you hate it?

 

[Enlight432]

Although I don't like the hate between the MC and FMC in NTR games (as an NTR fan, I prefer they don't hate each other), I have a good feeling about this game. I'll play/test it soon

 

[Ozygator]

If your wife is cheating on you and you wanted revenge, why on Earth would you target other dudes instead of your wife? Some pretty fucked up priorities, there. The dudes would probably even help you get revenge on your wife if they knew what was up. Bros before hoes.

Yeah, no. Other dudes wouldn't care, or could even gleefully cuck the MC if the MC had a wife that was hot and the dudes thought the MC was a wimp or inferior to them.

Some guys wouldn't care if the woman was married, in a relationship or anything else. Some would go after her BECAUSE she is in a relationship and supposedly off limits.

So why not go after the guys, if they knew she was married, and went for her anyway. Even if she invited them to do so and willingly cheated, the guys deserve what they may or may not get from the MC if they fucked her anyway knowing she was with some other dude. The guy who does that already broke the "bro's before hoes" idea because they put themselves before the MC, supposedly another 'bro, so deserve to be crushed.

 

[Ozygator]

Although I don't like the hate between the MC and FMC in NTR games (as an NTR fan, I prefer they don't hate each other), I have a good feeling about this game. I'll play/test it soon

I think you'd prefer a cuck, hotwife (another form of cuck) or sharing game if you want a MC who doesn't care if his wife fucks around. Most guys in a relationship would be furious at their wife/gf if they found she was cheating. Or they'd be happy to get rid of them when they find out and be done with her, usually after divorce where they take everything from her. Few would willingly stick around when she's fucking around, at least all the guys I have ever met in my life.

Hopefully this one won't go the cuck/sharing route as there are already dozens of those games on the site, and revenge games are extremely rare and we need more of them.

 

[Febui]

The guy who does that already broke the "bro's before hoes" idea because they put themselves before the MC, supposedly another 'bro, so deserve to be crushed.

I just keep thinking of some doujin where a guy found his wife sleeping with another man and then he declared that if a man fucks his wife then he will have to fuck his ass. The other man goes pale in the face and the wife swoons, thinking her husband is so manly for this. It was very amusing.

I think you'd prefer a cuck, hotwife (another form of cuck) or sharing game if you want a MC who doesn't care if his wife fucks around. Most guys in a relationship would be furious at their wife/gf if they found she was cheating

Hopefully this one won't go the cuck/sharing route as there are already dozens of those games on the site, and revenge games are extremely rare and we need more of them.

I interpretted their post as being about the toxicity of the relationship before the cheating. Because this is an awful relationship and I, too, prefer it when the relationship is good and loving but the cheating happens despite how good things are. It lands with better impact when you actually like them, otherwise it just feels like "good, whatever, I don't fucking like that character, I don't care"
Even worse when the protagonist is the cheater. WHERE is the fun of cheating on my significant other if I don't even like them? I need to have a good relationship for cheating to mean a thing to me.

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

Looks more like swinging than ntr. I mean, he fucks all girls of the men who fucked your wife, why dont he leave her then? -.- Would be pretty stressful for me fucking all the girls for a wife who isnt worth it.

But lets see how it evolves. So far I dont know any good ai generated game.

 

[Enlight432]

I think

From now on, instead of "I think," use "I guess" because you were wrong...
I'm referring to when the FMC is faultless. Complex life circumstances lead to betrayal, long-term corruption, or logical blackmail that, for example, could lead to a very long prison (Or execution) sentence for the MC (just an example)
In these stories, logically, the MC shouldn't hate the FMC because she had no choice (provided the story is logical)
Anyway, I don't mean to say this game is bad. I haven't played it yet and I have a good feeling about it. I'll play it soon

 

[Inaaca]

Yeah, no. Other dudes wouldn't care, or could even gleefully cuck the MC if the MC had a wife that was hot and the dudes thought the MC was a wimp or inferior to them.

Some guys wouldn't care if the woman was married, in a relationship or anything else. Some would go after her BECAUSE she is in a relationship and supposedly off limits.

So why not go after the guys, if they knew she was married, and went for her anyway. Even if she invited them to do so and willingly cheated, the guys deserve what they may or may not get from the MC if they fucked her anyway knowing she was with some other dude. The guy who does that already broke the "bro's before hoes" idea because they put themselves before the MC, supposedly another 'bro, so deserve to be crushed.

Even if the guys happened to know that she was married, and I doubt that all of them do, they still aren't the ones cheating on you. Your wife is the one cheating on you. Your wife is the one repeatedly breaking her vows to you, not the dudes that she's getting with.

If anyone deserves to be the target of your revenge, she does first and foremost. If you want to stick it to the dudes after, fine I guess, but get your priorities straight.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

Looks more like swinging than ntr. I mean, he fucks all girls of the men who fucked your wife, why dont he leave her then? -.- Would be pretty stressful for me fucking all the girls for a wife who isnt worth it.

But lets see how it evolves. So far I dont know any good ai generated game.

Honestly true like why stay with the whore. lol

 

[fgh24]

can yow add more more story and choices that can influence the amount of ntr you see

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

Good luck with your game.

 

[Cirdon]

Saucier The mayor's wife side quest.

It doesn't get marked complete after the MC views her at the waterfall.
But it also doesn't give a next step (or even a "Coming soon") to indicate there's more to do.

Is that the end of the current demo, or is there more I'm not seeing?