VN - Ren'Py - Completed - NTR'd by Clumsiness [v1.0.0] [Hangover Cat]

As of .5 but I don't plan on following any further.

With most games of this type it starts out relatively well and then devolves instantaneously. I did enjoy the attempt to put a humorous spin on it. It actually pulled me in more then I expected at the beginning. Which really only made the let down all the more disappointing. Things just fly off the rails way too quickly for me. And the charming silliness abruptly bounds into absurdity. I fully understand this a quickie game that's only real goal is to facilitate expedited ejaculation, but it's a bit wordy and weighed down with contrivance. I get that an approximation of bad luck serves as the foundation of this game. But it is just like, damn... really?

I keep thinking, maybe this genre just isn't for me. But then I'll stumble onto a concept (not this game) and I'm like... hmmm... ok. I will admit to not having the right mindset for to engage with ntr material properly. I have no desire for my partners to seek comfort in other men and I respect the inherit sanctity of the relationships of others. So I have no desire for things that aren't mine. As I am unable to fill the shoes of the protagonist or antagonist I guess I am really only here for the journey, and the seedy underbelly of debauchery. What twist and turns await. What deplorable, filthy, depraved acts will this person commit in pursuit of cardinal pleasure?! In this game? It's kind of boring and tame, and more than a little unbelievable. Even for the premise. It's just like, "Weird. Oh well. Guess I'll just cheat then." The amount of times she arbitrarily jams his cock in her mouth is insane. "Oh no! I definitely don't want this! (Grabs the back of her own head and gargles his balls. Every time.)" I'm mostly here here for the art and silly premise. The art is great, but the story sucks me out of it. And not in the good way. I even tried skipping it, but the snippets I caught just killed the vibe. I don't know if the writer and artist are the same person... but damn. I wish the artist would branch out into a different genre. Like I said, the writing has potential. It just seems kind of manic. And I know everyone wants to have their cake and eat it too. And like, I get that is a theme within the genre. But it's no excuse for shoddy craftsmanship. At least in my estimation.

Nice art, good writing, a bit different from the rest. I much prefer this kind of a double betrayal over the random buff gyaru dude, fat NEET creep or ugly bastard (also fat). The kind of falling into lust makes for a lot better storytelling than a girl getting dicked down by some tanned fuckboy and adopting hoop earrings, tattoos and smoking out of dick to pussy contact.

Excellent game. I prefer the more serious and darker tone of The Edge Of but this is pretty good in it's own right. I do hope we can get a bonus ending that features the edgier content that the dev is more well known for.

Very simple game, but wonderfully done, the sexual events are somewhat innovative and well executed, not to mention the MC which is one of the hottest on the entire site, even more than the ones from main game of the same dev.

10/10

Funny as all hell, one of the most enjoyable games on here. The over the top style and lack of seriousness is great. Pity the game looks like it's going to be comparatively short, but still looking forward to seeing what happens.

Amazing really amazing this is what happens when you dont push NTR and rush corruption stage really good one here Wife is knows what she doing is bad while classic asshole is not asshole thats even better maybe he acts like that maybe he is really clumsy who knows but scenes amazing sexyness is beyond anything here i really love it yet this is NTR .

Yet we can say game is happening so fast in few scenes we got sex scene so prob game gonna be shorth thats sad other than that i have no problem solid good game worth 5 star for now.

No blue balling bullshit, no blackmail, no rape, no hearbreaks.

Lighthearted, silly, funny and innovative.

Absolute perfection.

Also worth pointing out the art is very high quality and that dev has been dishing frequently updates thus far.

All in all up to this point this game has been my favorite discovery of the year. Definitely worth checking out.

A very interesting take on the NTR genre, and the artwork is very nice. Decent speed on the updates is a definite plus as well. The comedic touch really adds to it, and makes it stand out from other games like it. I suppose my only criticisms would be that the husband character is taken a bit too far, and that it would add to the experience if maybe there were more variations to the standing character images.

Fantastic game - it's a fresh take on the genre coupled with great art (like usual from Hangover Cat). Can't wait to see more updates and what's in store. Now the rest of the review is just filler to hit the word count, but seriously if you like the genre and his other game check out this one!

This is rather fantastic.

Disclaimer: I'm not into netorare. No kink shame, just no kink same
If you're like me and you're more into cheating games where the protagonist is doing the cheating/stealing, then this game can totally function as that. You have the option when you start of choosing either the husband's perspective or all perspectives. Choosing all perspectives starts with the wife's point of view. That, coupled with the humorous writing and premise, makes it feel a lot more like a regular or somehow lighthearted cheating story and not a netorare one.

The story presents itself as silly, and it is, but I found the writing excellent regardless. The author has a good sense of humor and still writes reasonable interactions within this whacky premise. At least, from time to time
The art is pretty damn hot (more CG's than I was expecting), and I enjoyed the accidental buildup to the first blowjob a lot. That's the furthest the content goes as of version 0.2, but I'm looking forward to future updates, even if they take a while.

UPDATE - 1.0.0:
At one point in the middle of the game, there's a plot twist. I had some strong opinions about it:


In any case, this game gets 5 stars because the dev absolutely earned it. I still loved it, the art is fantastic, the animations are fantastic, the writing is fun, the idea is unique, and in general it's polished nicely.

I think what's special about this game is that it manages to bring NTR fans and non-NTR fans like me together, and that is rare.
Of course, you still have to be into cheating of some sort, so if you're like me and you're looking for some mutually hesitant, mutually emotional cheating: You'll get that for a while, then it'll fall off, then it'll come back.

I love the game premise, and I think there's a lot of room for encounters with this particular scenario. The artwork is fantastic, and the story seems well written so far with decent pacing. At this initial release (v0.1.0) there isn't much content, but it has a lot of promise.
I hope we'll see more, and soon!

[Version 0.1.0]

I have to say this really does live up to its synopsis, whilst this version has a few clumsy undressing scenes they are done so well you really do end up acknowledging the guy IS clumsy.

The graphics are pretty decent themselves and the dev uses screen effects and sounds to great effect too. I couldn't find a renaming feature in the game which might be a good thing to add. Other than that the pics, the story, the sound works well together and uniquely has that selling point of actual clumsy, not deliberate or putting on an act NTR. Personally I'm curious how the dev will handle making actual NTR sex into something clumsy but that's one more thing to make me keep an eye on it.

It's early days but definitely worth looking at and keeping an eye on.