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Syndevic

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0.5 is also out on patron for supporters.

Imo I'm not sure how I feel about this game. Its going very fast and
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which is kinda crazy to me because there hasn't been hardly any build up or any reason given why she would cheat on her boyfriend. Her and her friend act like she's free to play the field, but she's in (I'm assuming) a committed relationship (they say "I love you" to each other which seems pretty committed to me imo) and not one that just started. Pablo seems to be a supportive boyfriend even giving her money to help with bills and there doesn't seem to be any problems in the relationship.

I do like NTR, but this is going into hard NTR territory so if that isn't for you, you've been warned. Or if you like a story that builds up to sexual stuff happening, rather than it happening very quickly and without any good reason.
 

Nikeee

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0.5 is also out on patron for supporters.

Imo I'm not sure how I feel about this game. Its going very fast and
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which is kinda crazy to me because there hasn't been hardly any build up or any reason given why she would cheat on her boyfriend. Her and her friend act like she's free to play the field, but she's in (I'm assuming) a committed relationship (they say "I love you" to each other which seems pretty committed to me imo) and not one that just started. Pablo seems to be a supportive boyfriend even giving her money to help with bills and there doesn't seem to be any problems in the relationship.

I do like NTR, but this is going into hard NTR territory so if that isn't for you, you've been warned. Or if you like a story that builds up to sexual stuff happening, rather than it happening very quickly and without any good reason.
Put 0.5 here if you have it
 

deviousstorm

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Aug 24, 2019
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Has anyone updated this game yet .5 seems to be out but not on itch.io
.4 is now on the update.
 

Toddy.Berlin

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Jan 23, 2021
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Mhh... I love phone-based NTR games and I'm excited for the next update!
But I see three "problems".
The characters hardly act at all anymore. Almost everything is done via the spy app.
But more importantly... the MC is once again the stupid idiot who knows everything but does nothing (in one direction or the other)
Can't it be an MC with balls in his pants for once?
And lastly... the female MC goes from a loving grilfriend to a cheating, evil bitch in a matter of days. That went too fast for my taste.
 

ItsNotUs

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May 14, 2023
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Another game about a cuck...
WTF!?
No plot construction, no thrill, the young couple is doing fine, there are no pretensions, and then the girl decides to cheat on her boyfriend for what reason? Reason simply doesn’t exist, and what mc, instead of arranging and to show her the proof, and give the reader an interesting situations, fights, quarrels, etc., he simply started a diary of a cuckold on his phone...
Complete nonsense and the absence of any worthy idea!
I don’t even know, maybe some day will come out game which will be original and not like others, but this is a copy of similar games of which there are already dozens! This sucks!
 
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Another game about a cuck...
WTF!?
No plot construction, no thrill, the young couple is doing fine, there are no pretensions, and then the girl decides to cheat on her boyfreand for what reason? Reason simply doesn’t exist, and what mc, instead of arranging and to show her the proof, and give the reader an interesting plot, he simply started a diary of a cuckold on his phone...
Complete nonsense and the absence of any worthy idea!
I don’t even know, maybe some day will come out game which will be original and not like others, but this is a copy of similar games of which there are already dozens! This sucks!
Just check out creators patreon page. He is making monthly 800+$ already. This is what sells. NTR story with brain dead MC.
 

BenIsland

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Jul 27, 2018
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While the art is good and idea is tested this went from 0 to 100 very quickly. I mean from romatic dinner, reluctance and kiss to hardcore fucking on OF in a span of an update. We'll see where this goes but that jump was really unrealistic.
 

deviousstorm

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Aug 24, 2019
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While the art is good and idea is tested this went from 0 to 100 very quickly. I mean from romatic dinner, reluctance and kiss to hardcore fucking on OF in a span of an update. We'll see where this goes but that jump was really unrealistic.
Feels more like a kinetic novel and I agree it just jumps to that. I'd thought that the main part was that we see more of OF stuff for the other girl. So that she is slowly corrupted. Feels like this is the end of arc... as you say 0 to 100 real quick. At least a bj slowly at first not.... that.

Honestly I feel like NTR gram is starting the story way too late into the story. We don't even know much about this bull other than what hte MC is told if we are given earlier access to the story events like her being introduced to him at least there would be story progression. ATM there isn't any build up it just happens off screen and we are only told about it.

The big thing is that it feels like the chapters / and story are skipping much needed set-up and pay offs.
 
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ItsNotUs

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Feels more like a kinetic novel and I agree it just jumps to that. I'd thought that the main part was that we see more of OF stuff for the other girl. So that she is slowly corrupted. Feels like this is the end of arc... as you say 0 to 100 real quick. At least a bj slowly at first not.... that.

Honestly I feel like NTR gram is starting the story way too late into the story. We don't even know much about this bull other than what hte MC is told if we are given earlier access to the story events like her being introduced to him at least there would be story progression. ATM there isn't any build up it just happens off screen and we are only told about it.

The big thing is that it feels like the chapters / and story are skipping much needed set-up and pay offs.
Jake is friend of her best friend's Emy + they work in the same place and according to "innovation" they will go together
for "advanced training", supposedly because of this they have a lot in common, but this is not a reason for cheat!
 
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