VN Unity NTS Honeymoon [v0.11] [Tasty Soap Bubble's]

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SolarEclipsed

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I've looked in the comments and used the search, but haven't found an answer to my question. The cumshot pic in the shower after Lily and Math have the photoshoot in his apartment (Chapter 7 or 8, can't recall off the top of my head), if you look closely, there's cum dripping out of Lily's pussy onto the floor. Is that a quirk of the AI generation, or an easteregg that she fucked him (and let him do it raw with creampie the very first time (that we know of if it's true / have evidence of if it's not an AI generation quirk)) instead of just giving a BJ?

Edit: And it's the allowing Math to be rough with her choice.
saw the pic and your right, at the end of the update I confronted Math and when I spoke to Lily afterwards her line was third times a charm, assuming that she had secret sex with him the day after that would me she didn't fuck in the shower but I was on the none rough path.
 
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SoaringClouds

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Some constructive criticism on Chapter 13 the NTS Route with Khalid. The description is that she walked out, he kissed her passionately and immediately flipped her around and started fucking her, then came on her ass when he was done. The implications are there that they didn't use a condom, despite her saying it was mandatory no matter what our reply is. I think it would be good to add a choice to ask about condom usage after seeig the video of the cum on her ass vs a "..." dialogue option. For people who said she had to wear one, she could reply (truthfully) that he did wear one, but he yanked it off after pulling out to cum on her ass. For those that said she could use one if she wants, she could say he didn't put one on, but she remembered that you were fine with it so let it happen. The "..." choice wouldn't change anything to what's already there.
 

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One more post about constructive criticism. Considering there was the option to say, "I don't see the problem" when Lily lied about the condom breaking and getting creampied by Math on the NTR Route, implying I'm Okay with her letting Math cum inside her if that option is selected, I think there should be more talk and pictures about that during the bamboo forest scene. Three pics: First one, an angle where we can see the dick clearly without a condom, Second one where there's cum either coming out of her pussy all anime/manga style creampie while he's fucking her or just dripping down his shaft, and Third one where she's squatting and letting cum drip out of her pussy. Then there would be the dialogue and/or options about them pointing out how you said it was okay.

I also think there should be an option to tell Lily you approve of the random pic posted anonymously (again, if the "I don't see a problem" option was selected). It would bypass the fight and keep the territory more ambiguous along the NTS/NTR line. In this kind of setting, Lily would do things without consulting you, Math would post them (and we should let her meet up with other strangers eventually also behind your back but exposed somehow), but the player wouldn't get mad. He would get excited and there wouldn't be any conflict.

Those are my ideas that I think would fit the scenario very well. I understand it's more work, but I think it would be worth it, lol.
 
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Given the discussions around the "Math Path"/NTR path, I commented in the developer's Patreon feed regarding a critique of some of the character development and a comparison and contrast with the full NTR and NTS story lines:

As an example: If you were under the impression than Math was a decent guy at first and it turns out he is a control freak and physically dominates your wife, and now, no matter how aroused you initially were, you might come to the conclusion that it is undermining your relationship and his proximity to the love of your life is now not sitting well with you.

I am all for the MC "chilling" as long as the MC AND Lily are in TOTAL agreement on what they BOTH want. In this type of relationship dynamic, where both partners are newlywed and consistently professing their undying love for one another, if either partner is or becomes uncomfortable with anything or anyone, there must be a mutual understanding and agreement to end said "anything" and break off relations with "anyone" without animosity. Otherwise the relationship degrades and becomes something less than it was.

Love is not enough to keep people together, otherwise there wouldn't be breakups and divorce. If there is a path for the Math dominance route where the MC can tell Lily he is uncomfortable with the developments and Lily is being a loving wife, then she should be supportive and agree to other options at any time. Yes, I realize this is part of the "Math was not rough with Lily" although it limits the scenes and character depth development due to it's linearity. One of the issues I have with this particular path/story-line is the gaslighting by Lily when the MC confronts her about the pictures posted that are obviously her (Hell, even the earrings match), and in doing so, Lily is not only betraying the MC's trust, she is contradicting her statements of loyalty and love to the MC from earlier. This utter lack of open communication and denial of events takes us fairly far off the NTS course. I am not saying I am anti-NTR. It just seems to be a contradiction in the character development to this point in the story as well as a complete betrayal of the foundation of a new marriage, regardless of where the experiment started.

Even if Lily was getting "caught up in the moment" and taking full advantage of the trust and freedom our MC has given her, she needs to come clean at some point about the pictures and events surrounding them or else this marriage would be over before it really even began. Even a full beta-cuck would want to know the details...I mean how else would they know enough to be aroused by it all? And, I do NOT get the impression our MC is a beta-cuck at all.

I would absolutely enjoy Lily coming clean on the redacted pictures at some point and feeling the guilt and remorse a truly loving wife would feel so they could come back to center and continue to enjoy the experience of Lily having sex with Math (and/or others) without the gaslighting, lying, and outright betrayal. Because, ultimately, without communication, (even after the fact), it is just plain old cheating, and where's the fun in that?
 

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I've thought of another suggestion. This one isn't constructive criticism, because it's about the future, lol. So, on the NTS Path when you choose the option about using a condom if Lily wants to, later, when she's getting it on with another guy raw, it would be incredibly hot if she texts during the event and says something like, "Babe, he wants to cum inside me. Should I let him?" Then we as the player get to decide, and if the MC is Submissive, Lily will let him cum inside her anyway (and this could lead to a conversation later where the player can shut that kind of behavior down or let her make decisions on her own if they're into it, kinda like how on NTS Phone we can let the FMC choose to break rules sometimes if she wants).

I also think it would be hot if Math appears on the NTS Route again (like how he surprised her on the beah by just being there), and if the MC is dominant, Lily will shut him down, but if MC is submissive, she'll have a one-off with him and it'll be posted anonymously. That might be taking it too far for those that want to steer completely clear of NTR on the NTS path, so maybe it's a 3-way option where the MC has to be submissive to even choose it, and the player gets a warning that it leads to cheating, not an automatic thing if the MC is too submissive. And maybe have it setup that if Lily shuts him down, NOW he's gone for good, but if she doesn't, he pops up every now and then and the player can choose which route Lily will follow (so the player is in control of the path completely).

Just some thoughts I had on the game.
 
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Bro you insisted your newlywed wife to go on a honeymoon without you, her husband? And your brother will be there too? When your wife is asked how was her honeymoon experience? Is she gonna say she spent it with her husband's brother? (Intentionally excluding her friend and her brother-in-law's wife is there)
Even for porn that's ridiculous.
 
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