- Thread starter johan88
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- Jun 30, 2024
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Needs a bit more teasing or dirty talk. A bit more 'meat' to the conversations. Chapter five was starting to get interesting. I'm not saying the escalation of events is moving too fast, but the dialogue is perhaps a bit to quick and to the point. Not asking for filler either, but the aforementioned dirty talk is wanted. Chapter 5 is, a bit busted. I can infer what was said, but there is clearly missing or misplaced dialogue here.
Phone interfaces are my kink. The rounded app icons, the swiping up and down and back and forth, the dings of messages, and animated transitions. It's all so sensual!
- Dec 12, 2021
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- May 25, 2017
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Text is kinda rough, but it's overall a good premise.
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- Mar 2, 2018
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...is her just being on her knees the only picture she sends? Is this developer not capable of making art with dicks in it? Is there not going to be anything besides just girls in various clothes and bikinis?
I like the art in general, but...like...will there actually be something there?
I like the art in general, but...like...will there actually be something there?