As a NTR, story is very good. A bit too good, actually.
But I think this is a nice game for me. This format of messages through Message APP is too immersive. It's like a "first person" NTR situation. We not only see what happens with the character, we feel like WE ARE the character! That means we get more involved by the events, like it's happening with ourselves.
This is for hardcore NTR fans. I prefer see from a 3rd person perspective. I like the idea, and enjoy the situation, of NTR, but I think I wouldn't enjoy being NTR'ed.
But if the creator's intention was exactly this, then congratulations! It's a very immersive experience, enough to disturb me!
BUT, on another hand, post-nut clarity brings reflection. And reflecting about the story, conclusion is it's awful.
Think about it. A couple gets married, and a week after the wedding the MC (you) suffers a traffic accident. Not a "simple bruise" accident, but one that demanded surgery (he was fed through a tube), and was discharged from the hospital with severe pain in the legs, enough to keep him immobilized in bed! He started to feel less pain thanks to some experimental shady drug.
Thing is, they had a honeymoon schenduled for the next week. It was the "honeymoon of the dreams" of the wife. So, MC didn't want her to miss it "because of his mistake" (as if someone is at fault for being involved in a traffic accident). So, he insisted that she went alone, with her best friend and a couple who was the godparents.
First error: a honeymoon is a honeymoon IF THE MARRIED COULPE SPEND IT TOGETHER! How can be a honeymoon if only one goes, with a bunch of friends, leaving the other behind alone at home!
Second: In the situation of the accident, what would a decent, responsible wife would do? Stay by her husband's side! They were just married, it's not like she's desperade for a gettaway, or vacations from home! "Oh, but I insist in you going!" - reply would be - "I insist on staying. How can I enjoy myself alone, knowing that you are not there with me!". Seems pretty sane, right? But that wasn't the case!
If the problem was that the spending and planning of the travel would go to waste, then she could have said that whore friend of her to invite one of her hookups, and enjoy with him there! Later, after the other one recovered, they could think about enjoying a proper honeymoon.
But no, she just left on vacations, leaving her husband behind, to enjoy "honeymoon"! A "honeymoon" without husband!
Third: and this wasn't only the wife's shitting, but the whole family out there. They set out to enjoy a relaxing vacation, lefting a person who was just the week before in hospital, and was recovering from a surgery, ALONE and UNNATTENDED! The guy was in a condition that didn't allow him TO MOVE FROM BED! I will not even enter the merit of "feeding" and "toilet and higiene needs", but it's inhumane leaving a person in this condition. But that appears not to be a problem for the guys in this story. After all, if his conditions worsen due to the sick be left alone taking shaddy experimental medicine, then fuck him, at least we had our fun here!
Fourth: during ALL THIS SITUATION, in a weakened and vulnerable state, probably depressed for not being able to be in his own honeymoon, the fucking whore friend of the wife beggins pissing off about "realizing a fantasy" the MC told about DURING A NIGHT HE WAS DRUNK!
Dude, that girl have shit for brains, or she's a plain shameless motherfucker bitch, without a drop of empathy! Guy not only is sick, bedridden, home alone for at least a week, probably depressed for being left behind in his own honeymoon, and the bitch comes putting pressure for him to accept and encourage his just-married wife to "flirt with other men"! Tell you what, with a friend like that, who needs enemies?
And that was only the begining, but I'll stay about here, because this is not a post anymore, it's almost a light novel chapter!
Anyway, mr. creator, this was part of the reason why this game of yours disturbed me quite a bit! The background situation, as a whole, is pretty shitty, in a "messed up" sense! However, don't get it wrong. Story progress got me interested, so I want to know the ending.
