One suggestion, change the bright yellow letters on bright white background in more friendlier colors, my eyes hurt. Better to have charcoal background or at least some pictured background with nice colors but at same time the text is readable.
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Yes!!, but I can't provide the exact date. Please be patient, and thank you for showing interest! <3
SoggyLuffy
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The story itself seems to make zero sense. It is mostly incomprehensible rambling about chicks being dead without any build up to that point, then somehow alive again, without any reasonable groundwork leading up to that (supposed BFF is drunk and that made the other chick come alive again). And then at some point the 2 dudes yell they are into NTS... I get that the sperm diet is a plotdevice, but that is point A, Sharing would be point P, actually liking it Point Z (and the other dude sharing BFs BFF would be a plot device for that). There is an entire story of the BF trying to fill that need and then the turmoil to allow the sharing when he can't keep up and then the discovery to getting into it, which is all entirely skipped. Dude went A-Z in under 10 seconds..
With his foray into using AI tooling, author might want bounce outline ideas off ChatGPT so it isn't an incoherent rambling mess.
With his foray into using AI tooling, author might want bounce outline ideas off ChatGPT so it isn't an incoherent rambling mess.
Predictable response.
You do know that when genres start they start off popular? It's not just for porn games, get a grip, dude. No one is here to cater to you. And you haven't even played the game
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FatYoda
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Very nice rework. I love the swinging direction this is going. Hopefully they can figure out how to make them all immortal eventually. Im a little tired of the same old cuck stories where the MC just watches. I like it that he's getting involved and it's a swinging game.
FatYoda
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who cares...do you really want to read 8 updates with no action just so the plot can feel like it's at a proper pace? Fuck that. Just fill in the blanks with your own imagination and let's get to fucking. She said she found a diary that talked about this from the past and that she experimented with rats and bats. We don't need details. She made her a cumpire. Let's roll with it.
so, I'm kind of torn. this version is really good and i like that it just jumps into it, with a more wholesome sharing story. however, I really liked the demo version, its supernatural take was really cool, and I liked its edgier tone into a sub sharing path it seemed to take. I loved the supernatural 'queen of the dammed, with her cuck' feel the story was going for. I kind of want both stories and would love to see both versions play out fully. I'm defiantly going to be following this dev
BOBtheboober1995
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No NTR, only NTS is planned.
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I-Love-Adventure
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Kurotori
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The good art can get really good but the not so great art is also not so great. Good luck.