VN - Ren'Py - Nudist College [v0.20] [Elsa]

(For 0.5 Release) [Edited after speaking with the Dev.}
I dislike giving negative reviews, as I also write for a hobby, and know how hard it is to bring a story to life. However I incorrectly assumed this was a Fem Dom story.

PRO:
-Good renders! Skin detail was paid close attention too, as the older Teacher, and later, Guide had more aged skin. LI's are attractive!
- The MC is not a dimwitted push-over. The opposite, he's brighter than all but one of the other characters.
- LI's are all very different in personality.

CON:
-Names don't match from time to time. There is a glitch for the (0 .5 ) release, and Elsa is working to fix that.
-No FemDom, nor is there any planned. The tag needs to be removed. (I was told by Elsa herself she never planned on it. The tag is misplaced.)
-All sexual activity is near accidental or to get out of trouble. Which could seem fun, I suppose.

I hope to see this finished, as it is lighthearted, Elsa does great renders, and has given the LI's very distinct personalities.

A mildly interconnected series of public nudity and exhibitionist events. The models are attractive and the writing is serviceable. I always wanted nudist and ENF games, but they are quite rare so this scratches an underserviced itch.

Pretty good, I don't tend to love 3d games, but this one is pretty good quality, and the story isn't bad, I'm curious to see how it progresses.

It plays like a pretty standard VN, and I don't really have any critiques. Other than it's nothing new or groundbreaking.

v0.4
The game is extremely short for a fourth iteration, and has some very slow and small releases.
The plot is literally just the title, and whatever story development the game has it's as illogical as expected, but I won't take this against the game, it's what was was advertised and we got it.
The dialogues though, are generic and shallow as they come. Really, it gives little to nothing if you pay attention or not, and the characters aren't exactly the sharpest tools in the shed nor are depicted as interesting either. They're unidimensional as they can possibly be and behave like 12 year old brats. I ended up skipping a solid amount of the game due to all this.
This kind of games rely heavily on their animations, as they're it's raison d'etre given the plot in itself is just a device for showcasing the sexual encounters of the MC with every female he comes across, and here they're very lacking in quality, length and quantity, big oof.
The only thing that is alright are the renders, but that's about it, and they're about average, nothing too fancy either.
All in all, there was some effort put into the game and the idea behind it is interesting, but the fact that a 150 render update that took as long as it did to come out was supposed to "be great" speaks volumes by itself of what's to come for this game.
I had expectations as this game had potential to be something good, but it just dropped the ball, IMHO not worth investing your time.

Story - 2/10 Far from original, and rather bland. It whole thing goes very fast, there is very little work up to the nudity premise. No emotional attachment at all.

Renders - 6/10 The renders are decent quality, not grainy although nothing to brag about.

Originality - 2/10 There must be at least fifty other story/games with the same high school scenario and more than a few that do the nude in school or similar. So this one is not original.

Grammar - 5/10 The writing is extremely generic, some spelling errors and sentences that are just not interesting at all. Like someone trying to be clean cut and proper and perverted at the same time.

Animations - 2/10 The usual 2 or 3 second sex and couple of strokes and it's over stuff. Since Animations and Story are the biggest things for any of these projects, they are the main reason anyone looks at these in the first place. Severely lacking in the animations department, then again that is so common in most of these. Very few have more than the 2 second stuff, and most do a really poor job of trying to have any realism. Some do but this is not one of them.

Playability - 9 /10 Everything is simple and there is no looking all over for things like some other stories have. Pretty straight forward controls and such.

Amount of content - 5/10 not a lot of content for being out for almost a year, although not bad seen worse.

Although not horrible and a decent attempt at a game, it really doesn't have anything that makes it shine. Bland and Generic is pretty much what it is. I think maybe the dev needs more experience and most certainly needs a better writer.

i really love this game because of the character. the writing is okay at best, but i would still like to follow up to this game. and i would like even more if this game has a sandbox mode so we can interactively interact with the character

This is one of those games you kind of have to turn your brain off to enjoy, the writing is decent enough but has some very rough spots, the models are absolutely fantastic and have some good variety.
Looking forward to new content and hopefully the characters start having actual development.

I love this game, although it's still in early develop progress. Lena and Olivia are great, I'm looking forward to further release. No idea why there are so few nudist or exhibitionist games like this. Is it not popular in the western world or something? I can hardly find any. Anyway, great thanks to the creator!

This is beyond dumb. "The reputation of the school is on the line. Let's do handjobs." The models are nice, and it's nice that that there is SOME story outside the nudism nonsense, but it's not much. If you want to see naked 3d girls, there are easier ways. A story, this is not.

Actual content in a 0.2 build, with good adherence to the principle fetish. Girls are likable in terms of personality and few if any models are common used assets. Choices are unfortunately relegated to good or bad, not offering the player choice to tailor the experience to their preference.

Pretty poorly written. Not sure if it's a translation thing or they just aren't great at storytelling, but most characters feel flat and uninteresting, with a single personality trait. The first conversation in the game between the MC and your childhood friend is particularly bad, like two cardboard cutouts trying to make conversation. And there are a handful of minor issues that creep up, like using purple as everyone's name color, including narration and internal dialogue and without any italics, that can be annoying.

But the situations are really hot, and having the teacher take care of you if you're too embarassed to do it with Olivia is just amazing. I wish a similar situation happened with Clarissa, but that's just wishful thinking, not a complaint. Besides Olivia having comically large nipples, and there only being one older character, I have no real complaints about any of the models. Excited to see more, even if the dialogue isn't up to snuff.

Version played: 0.2
Time Played: 30 minutes. Reached end of content.

In spite of being very early development-wise I could not NOT check out a bush as gorgeous as the one I saw in the screenshot.
Basically, this game looks like it's going to be a light-hearted, harem affair as the MC is the only boy in an all girl's school.

Positives
+ Glorious, full bush (and fat tits with some great, large areolae too!). Olivia's whole physical design is just an A+ and that bush is S tier
+ Cute girls
+ Gets right to it when it comes to sexual content

Negatives
- Nothing at this moment that indicates that this is going to have anything to make it stand out from the six gajillion games with the exact same premise.
- Game seems to be moving really fast in terms of sexual content, which could be to its detriment unless it adds an absolute shit-ton more girls and some more fetishes beyond nudism and vanilla sex.

Again, things are still very early so I think your enjoyment is going to be based on your level of tolerance for the premise and just how deeply you need another one of these games in your life.
Or if you're a bush nut like me.

Note to devs: Nice early start! Looking forward to seeing what else you come up with. Be careful with pacing as you don't want to blow your load too early. Also, keep that high caliber bush coming!

I read the summary and was dithering whether to play it, but after reading the reviews, I decided to give it a try.

The writing and story are just so, so. With a lot of suspension of disbelief needed.

The renders are nothing special and a lot have noise in them.

Character models are pretty generic.

Expressions and posing are poor, in the first 30 minutes or so of gameplay there are a lot of scenes where the actor doesn't move, change expression even after lots of dialogue.

I wish the dev well with their project and I might revisit it in the future

It's early on in the game. I usually wait a little longer before writing a review (so far it's only at the 0.2 version ). However I really like what the dev has done so far.

The graphics and renders are great. I like the girls/women featured in the game - they are cute, sexy and we begin to see their personality more and more. As it is one of my fetishes - I like that some of the women feature pubic hair (not all mind you, there is something for everyone) though I wouldn't mind unshaved armpits too.

There are some grammar errors as the dev is not a native English speaker and the game is in the early stages. I am sure this will improve with time.

All in all I recommend keeping track of this game, it's promising to be a good one.

And don't forget to support the dev at if you can.

Be well, be horny, be happy!
/Demnor

(This review was made after playing the 0.2 version)

This is a simple, yet quite a fun game, tickling all the right boxes IMHO.

- Decent story: doesn't need to be complex to be fun.
- Good quality renders and fluid animations. Awesome!
- Its grammar shall be improved over time, but nothing that takes away the fun of playing it. People criticize too much the grammar of devs that aren't native english speakers. Maybe it takes non-native english speakers like myself to understand their difficulties better?

And the most important thing: We already have a plethora of games to choose from where we can see only the unnaturally clean female anatomy when it comes down to the pubic area. This game is a beacon of hope for people that appreciates the more natural look.

Keep going, dev. Great start, and stellar work so far!

Game is good, and I enjoyed it. Took one star off because there are several models in here that have been used in at least 3 other titles that i can name off the top of my head, with literally no changes to the default model.

I've been waffling between 4 and 5 stars - ideally, I'd deduct half a star for the poor english, but the fast initial update cycle makes me round up instead of down.

Pros:

• The renders are very good, amongst the best I've seen.
• Genuinely attractive models.
• Good facial expressions.
• Yay! At least one teenage female with a natural bush. I'm fine with trimmed and shaved, too, but props for variety.
• Enjoyable story, despite the entirely unrealistic premise

Cons:

• Really, really needs a native-english proofreader.
• Probably a side effect of the non-native language, but character relationships and interactions could be fleshed out more.
• A small quibble in the animations: breast movements aren't quite right.

I'm very much looking forward to watching this game, and dev, develop!

Game is really good
Story suprised me I thought mc going to a new school and school would be a nudist school But instead the goverment is looking for a few student to join a project about not afraid to hide your body
The renders are really good
No bugs

Interesting concept and great models and not to mention a lot of variation in said models, (something that is often lacking these days).
Awful writing, could really use some work. Story progression is really fast and often doesn't make much logical sense, (even for a porn game).

Well I can't say much rn can i? IMO the game rn is good, the render is a beuty let me tell you and the story is umm well I can't really comment on that since it's fairly new in the development, I just hope there will be more exhibition and voyeur scene.