VN - Ren'Py - Nudist School [v0.14] [Elsa]

Version played: 0.12.1

Story wise:
It's pretty simplistic, as a dyslectic myself I tend to mostly read past poor grammar where others have pointed it out, it does not really bother me much. Other than that the setting and plot work reasonably well, definitely not amazing but they carry the sex schenes well enough.

In terms of those scenes, they are pretty frequent without feeling to forced, works reasonably well for me.

Visually the models do look different enough from another but there is a lot of stock model use, which at some point I just have seen too often. I don't know how easy it is to make them different from another in whatever is being used here but it really detracts from the experience.

Speaking of visuals, the renders are pretty poor for this day and age, I know there are worse ones out there, especially in the past but given the state of things, I really don't think they are up to standard anymore.

The animations are even worse, stiff and get to the point I would rather not have them at all.

So in summery, it's not all terrible but really there are plenty of better games out there. I personally consider this one dropped at this point. Perhaps if this were 5 years ago, my opinion would be different but as it stands it's just not worth it.

A very successful game so far. I like the story. Even if there are sometimes grammatical errors, I can't wait to continue playing. Stay tuned and see if you can fix the grammatical errors when time allows.

there are obvious grammatical errors even someone who's not a native speaker can notice, but I love the game. the renders are beautiful and the characters interest me. so far there aren't any meaningful conflict that makes the plot more interesting. I'm looking forward to future updates and improvement.

I actually enjoy this game despite it's linear nature. The Dev says it's her first game and it shows. But still the scenes while a bit unbelievable at times are sexy. I hope the Dev keeps at it because I'm sure she will improve as she learns more and more. Oh, and the animations are actually pretty good too.

Well what can I say , about this game.
Shitty plot, like I've seen bullshit but this is just crazy.
Shitty griphics,
Looks like author can't even remeber what happened a day ago in his own game.
what the hell with putting dic in virgins and 2 days later saying she is virgin it's her first time.

sex scenes are so boring, no foreplay, no kissing, no talks, just showing a dick in and out.
GameDev should at last try to play games where some story exsist, to understand how it's done.
Edited.
Dhit seriosly it goes worse and worse with each update.

this game would be so much better if there were no text. cause it's impossible to apprehand.

[Review of v0.11] This game won't get past 3 stars for me and here is why:

PROS
1) The story revolving around being nude in the school is interesting, i like that.
2) The characterization of the girls is well done: each girl has their own personality and we get to know their problems and past traumas.

CONS
1) No romance or feelings in the game! I was expecting the MC to fall in love with at least one girl (and vice versa) but i was wrong: there's no holding hands, no hugging and 3 or 4 kisses at most despite the presence of dozens of girls.
2) When MC fucks a girl we don't know what happens afterwards. The scene is not mentioned again in the story and the characters act like that sex scene never happened (are they now a couple? Or maybe friends with benefits? Only God knows).
3) The gameplay is non existent: there's no route, no pursuing girls, no relationship stats. You can only choose to see a scene with a girl or not. That's all. There's no panel to check your current status with a girl and variables are not set up so every choice has no real meaning.
4) Renders are very grainy, it seems the developer Elsa ignores the usage of a de-noise tool. This quality is not acceptable in 2023.
5) Many scenes are missing or Work in progress.
6) Some animations are at 2-3 fps. At this point it would be better to use static pictures.
7) Some typos and minor grammar mistakes. Proofreading is needed.

I just need to say how much I love the models specifically Olivia. I'm totally in love with her bush, I feel like not enough characters in other games have them. my only critique about your models is I wish there were more variation in the breast types size shape etc. just a minor complaint for an overall great game. Please keep up the good work sir!

Overall Rating: 1/5
Disappointing and Lackluster: A Missed Opportunity

Story and Plot: The narrative is a disastrous attempt at storytelling, showcasing a high school nudism theme that is as unimaginative as it is poorly executed. The plot lacks any form of originality, feeling like a disjointed series of events rather than a cohesive storyline. Emotional engagement is non-existent, leaving players with a sense of emptiness and dissatisfaction.

Character Development: Characters are painfully one-dimensional and fail to evoke any interest. The dialogue is cringe-worthy, showcasing a glaring lack of maturity and depth. It's a challenge to find any redeeming qualities in these poorly constructed personas.

Graphics and Renders: Inconsistent and often grainy, the graphics do little to salvage the game's numerous shortcomings. Scenes lack detail and sophistication, with many renders falling flat in terms of visual appeal.

Animations: The animations are embarrassingly subpar, both in quality and creativity. They add nothing to the game, serving only as a reminder of its inadequacy in competing with other titles in the genre.

Grammar and Writing: Plagued with grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, the writing is a testament to the game's lack of polish. It disrupts the flow and immersion, making the already lackluster dialogue even more unbearable.

Originality: This game brings nothing new to the table. Its attempt to stand out with a controversial theme ends up feeling like a poorly crafted imitation of better-executed games.

Verdict: In its current state, this game is a glaring example of wasted potential. With a narrative that fails to engage, characters that are forgettable at best, and technical aspects that range from mediocre to poor, it's hard to find any reason to recommend this game. It's a 1-star title that begs for a complete overhaul or, perhaps more mercifully, to be forgotten.

V 0.9

This is a VN, where plot and dialogue are supposed to make up for the lack of gameplay.

The plot is nonsensical, and the dialogue is very bad: one-dimensional characters, out-of-character actions, poor writing.

The art is ok, although for some reason half of the time there will be characters with shiny plastic clothes, like if they were made out of some loose latex material - you'll be able to see reflections on random pieces of clothing.

The developer seems active, but they seem to favor pushing new scenes instead of working on story or character development, and once again, this is a VN - without a good story and characters, it's nothing but a collection of average renders locked behind some uninteresting text.

Unless you really like the preview renders, I'd stay away from this, as that's all that this game can offer in its current state.

Not a particularly deep game, but hotter than I thought it would be, despite the very silly premise.
A relatively wide range of bodies (though I don't think the game knows what an A-cup really looks like!) combined with a certain goofy ESL charm kept me interested all the way through.
This is pretty much the only type of government program I support.

Summary: Not a total disaster (I did play it to the end), but so many flaws that it was hard to enjoy most of it.

Writing of plot: The premise is ridiculous, so you know from the outset that it’s going to be silly fun or a waste of time. However, even within the unbelievable framing, the narrative doesn’t hold together. It comes across as more of a series of absurd and raunchy skits stuck back-to-back.

Writing of dialog: Stilted and predictable.

Writing of characters: The different girls had distinct personalities, which is a start, but each was super obvious. No character development. Most girls did random sexual things that were totally out of character.

Grammar/Typos: Only a few.

Still images: The models had nicely varied bodies. Faces were familiar from stock models. Quality of renders varied from low to medium.

Animation: Some animation, but the quality was below average.

Sound/Music: There was music, but so generic, that I turned it off.

It's pretty good, the beginning was not that realistic and it was pretty odd how coincidence things happen but overall its pretty good. Sometimes i feel there should be more choices but the game is still developing so got no issues so far. also, I feel like some event are happening too fast, as much i would to see the sexy stuff, I also want a good progression in the story.

Pretty funny and some of the scenes were sexy! You'll have to play this game as looking for a fun time, because some of the fantasy situations the main character gets into are unbelievable but also really hot. Like for instance when he is forced to put his dick in against his will haha. Though there are nice genuine moments with some of the girls as you get to know them, which gives a nice balance to the overall wild situation he is in.

The character models are always something I'm interested in, and these girls are diverse in face and body. There are definitely some standouts, and it makes the playthrough all the more enjoyable.

Really looking forward to seeing more crazy situations, and how far he can get with each girl, relationship wise and physically haha.

Pro:
- Some of the models like Olivia or Valerie have a nice personality in contrast such as others.
- Huge amount of nude scenes that tease you.
- Scenes like the special club with Lucas are a nice change to the forced nudist projects.
- Most girls have a great design.

Con:
- Some of the girls have a shitty personality (e.g. Lyra, Bailey) that either project their personal problems on MC or try to use him to their benefit.
- Graphics sometimes look terrible, like the scene in class with the two government officials. Their crotches look terrible when we pick them up.
- Almost every girl had a traumatic past and we have to fix them. Too much of a white knight setting.

I also suggest some nudist projects the MC takes no parti in. Let's see how the girls handle it themselves.

I really had to think about it if this game is a 2 or a 3, but in the end I decided that it leans more towards 2 for me.
Now don't get me wrong, it's not a complete dumbster fire, but it way too many scenes just felt completely disjointed and janky plus the whole "The goverment forces us into nude projects" is kinda dumb, at least the way it's implemented here. Your typical porn game doesn't necessarily need a deep plot to be enjoyable, there are lots of every day life games out there which are really enjoyable to play, but if you touch on something like this, you should have a red string that you plan to follow and not just line up seemingly random scenes.
One thing I like in this game are the models as they're cute and different from each other, not just the same body over and over again with a different face or the same face with a different haircut.
That being said, the game doesn't really utilize them well here, because the writing is just very subpar as it doesn't always seem to make sense even if you take the overall a bit weird nature of it into account.

No idea if the dev has a first project or if this is the first, but with a bit more experience I'm sure it can improve.

Fun story, that is pretty well writting all though the sex scene text could be alot better due to the weird text in them, it does have potential and can still improve on virgin scenes to get to 5 stars, also there is about 0 romance or relationship building with any girls, virgin or not it just goes stright to fucking and in some cases infront of other LIs, so its more of a porn game then anything else, so take it for what it is and dont expect to feel anything for anyone since there isent really time for that.

The one spot where it fails is with the virgins, they sure dont fuck like virgins and none seem to have much pain or blood so there dosent seem to be any kind of deflowering with any of them, which is to bad that they never thought about that part, so it lost a star on this part.

Story 4/5
Its a pretty fun story and alot of girls, in some cases you dont have any options to who you fuck though which is a bit of a let down since story does have choices, it goes a bit to fast for my taste with 0 romance just stright to fucking, its ok but you dont really get to feel anything for any LIs.

Girls 4/5
There are plenty and most of them look nice and there is something for everyone.

Animations 3/5
They are decent enough to enjoy but not great.

Music 3/5
Its always nice with some background music, its not really mood setting but decent none the less.

• Models are fine
  • Some renders are pretty grainy and the lighting often feels off but I enjoyed looking at the girls overall
• Animations are serviceable
  • They feel pretty basic and stilted but they do their job
• Setting is hot
  • I really like the premise and the idea of being comfortable with your own body (even though they're all hot but it's porn, I get it)
• Writing is terrible
  • Without sounding too mean, reading through some of the sex scenes made me feel like I was reading a poorly retold textbook. A few examples:
    • Teasing her pussy first is an important thing to do so that she will secrete pussy juice to reduce friction when having sex.
    • Her warm wet pussy welcomes your dick by providing pussy juices to reduce the friction between your dick's skin and the vaginal wall.
    • The juices from her pussy help to lubricate the friction between your dick and her vaginal wall.
  • I get that English is not the writer's native language but I can't imagine any of this sounding remotely hot in any language.

TL; DR: If public exposure is your kink, it's a nice wank. Just... don't think too much about what you're reading.

0.8.1

dialogue is unbearably stupid. ive seen worse so i guess rating 2 it is then.

so your only solution is to just skip. but then again the sex scenes are boring too with average animation.

the main problem with dialogue is that it feels that the dev tried really hard to make the story believable/real. so it hits double when it sounds/feels completely retarded. characters are overly whiny/annoying/1dimensional. whole dialogue is 1dimensional. it's like the dev keeps reminding you that you are playing a game and it's impossible to immerse yourself into the story.

it's rare for me to give animated 3d porn rating2 but i think this deserves it. it might be still rating 3 but i think games with crappy but serious dialogue are impossible to play.

it's like a practice project for someone dabbling in renpy. so my recommendation is, let him practice, and wait for his next project cuz that might be good. but this isnt.

I like the game overall. It's obviously about nudism but there is a slight undertone of BDSM (submission specifically) as the students have little to no say in their nudist exploits.

The dev uses a choice based branching system(as opposed to kinetic or sandbox). Though sometimes it is unclear where a choice will lead it is overall decently used.

The level of English is the weakest link in this game. It is clear the dev is not a native speaker. Don't worry you can still follow the story but there are clear grammatical errors.

As for the renders they might not look amazing but they are of a decent quality. Besides it is clear quite a lot of work goes into them. Having that many characters on screen (and thus having to pose them) takes a lot of work.
If I could give a tip to the dev I'd say that lighting will make a large difference to improve the renders.
As for the characters there is some difference there but generally the frames of the girls are similar. (not a negative or positive but an observation).

(v0.7) There's a lot to like about this project but there are areas that could see improvement.

The Good
Great models with realistic proportions: The girls from the class look their age while older characters are curvier. Since nudity is a big part of the plot you're going to see a lot of these characters, and that's a good thing. You'll also see a lot of your (the M.C.'s) junk, which while large is still within normal human dimensions.
Early sexual content: When you start out nude, it doesn't take too much to move the plot to the next level.
Humor (hopefully intentional)
Light tone throughout: More slice of life than high drama, Our Chad MC is well on his way to assembling a harem..

Possible Improvements
Still needs editing by a fluent English speaker
Ditch the unnecessary and intrusive narrator
Write in the first person rather than the third

Summary
A serviceable harem romp as the only male in a girl's private school experimenting with nudism. Extra star for attractive realistic models,