VN Ren'Py Nurse Desire [v0.4 Public] [Deep_Desire]

2.00 star(s) 2 Votes

Lizzardcheese

Member
May 25, 2024
168
391
200
I won't complain about the art style, character models, story, or tags, as these are subjective
However, please ensure the overview is written clearly. Many readers might, after seeing it, believe this game offers various branching paths, whereas the initial update revealed that, regardless of your choices, betrayal inevitably occurs
Please be precise in drafting the overview
Best regards
Agreed. Pretty far off in the description.
 

Eyepatch1$

Member
May 3, 2025
111
130
113
Yeah, I'm really not sure what the choices are actually changing or at all dev if the cheating happens anyway maybe put a ntr is unavoidable warning up so the description on choices you have won't confuse or trigger people coming into the game thinking they have control over events. Either make the choices matter or change this into a kinetic novel or at least have a choice a scene on either help her out somehow or just ignore her and let it happen.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Fibbers and ryg88

Pif paf

Engaged Member
Feb 5, 2018
3,537
2,655
502
Looks like viking files are not accessible right now

This XML file does not appear to have any style information associated with it. The document tree is shown below.
<Error>
<script src="chrome-extension://mfidniedemcgceagapgdekdbmanojomk/js/elephant.js"/>
<Code>AccessDenied</Code>
<Message>Access Denied</Message>
</Error>
 

ryg88

Member
May 20, 2025
395
386
123
As of v0.4, the story seems straightforward, hitting the notes expected of NTR stories.

Some issues with v0.4 that hopefully can be solved in the next public update:

1. When FMC is with a random patient, the name that shows up is the MC's default name. You can even see what the correct name is supposed to be, Daniel Costa.

screenshot0001.png
2. In the "under the desk" scene, while the doctor is speaking with the patients, the patient's dialogue is similar to the narrator's dialogue. There is no label indicating that the text is supposed to be said by the patient. This also happens later on when the MC visits the doctor while being unaware of the FMC crouching under the desk.

screenshot0002.png
As for the VN choices, it seems that, after the "behind the curtain" patient handjob, there the story becomes linear, whether it's the NTR or non-NTR route. The choices didn't seem to matter after the handjob scene. (Not sure if the earlier choices will matter when v0.5 becomes public or if choices will return in v0.5.)
 

N3termia

Member
Feb 6, 2024
382
532
230
The Nurse is hot!!! Mystery NTR is hot!! hidden sex too pls! a good NTR is where the story involve the husband!
 

ryg88

Member
May 20, 2025
395
386
123
Yeah, I'm really not sure what the choices are actually changing or at all dev if the cheating happens anyway maybe put a ntr is unavoidable warning up so the description on choices you have won't confuse or trigger people coming into the game thinking they have control over events. Either make the choices matter or change this into a kinetic novel or at least have a choice a scene on either help her out somehow or just ignore her and let it happen.
It's probably a "hidden variable" NTR story where the choices might not seem to matter at first and things look very linear with minor differences, but at the 80% or 90% mark of the story, there will be some branching leading to 2 or more different endings, depending on what choices were made by the player. (Similar to that other VN A Promise Best Left Unkept)
 
  • Thinking Face
Reactions: Eyepatch1$

TurboKinetics

Fractured Hearts dev
Game Developer
Apr 30, 2025
1,303
1,999
214
It's probably a "hidden variable" NTR story where the choices might not seem to matter at first and things look very linear with minor differences, but at the 80% or 90% mark of the story, there will be some branching leading to 2 or more different endings, depending on what choices were made by the player. (Similar to that other VN A Promise Best Left Unkept)
But then why mark choices ntr or not if they dont even matter? This games gonna be a wash. Devs need to just be upfront about unavoidable ntr
 
  • Like
Reactions: ryg88

ryg88

Member
May 20, 2025
395
386
123
But then why mark choices ntr or not if they dont even matter? This games gonna be a wash. Devs need to just be upfront about unavoidable ntr
it might not matter at the moment, but maybe near the end, it will. that other game APBLU was mostly linear until the branching point happens near the end, and there was unavoidable NTR there too.
 

laurita100493

Newbie
Apr 4, 2018
46
85
254
A really bad non-update… Seriously, does the developer think this is an update? If this is the result of two months of work, they should just quit and consider opening a fruit and vegetable stand. The game is deleted anyway; with this developer's attitude, it's headed straight for abandonment.
 
  • Like
Reactions: gaga123310
2.00 star(s) 2 Votes