This was actually really good. The story felt decently written and I liked pretty much all the characters and felt sorta invested in learning about the universe, even if it is a rip-off of sorts of Harry Potter. Would be great if this had an expanded story in future, with more actual meat to the story. (Happy endings are of course welcome still).
My only gripe with the otherwise awesome artwork was the lack of actual action. Seemed kinda odd to have it described without the imagery of what you'd expect to be happening, but oh well, still great!