- Aug 12, 2017
- 158
- 485
Nice sexy start, love the art work, the setting provides lots of possibilities for the story.
The English is really bad (I suggest asking someone to help you) and the text speed behaviour and the misspelling of the name Alice need fixing (all not too hard to fix) but I still look forward to the next update!
The English is really bad (I suggest asking someone to help you) and the text speed behaviour and the misspelling of the name Alice need fixing (all not too hard to fix) but I still look forward to the next update!
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