HTML Office Queen [v2.0] [Lady Developer]

[AbsoluteMadman]

I feel like this game could benefit from what kind of office slut you want to become, i.e. more dominant, more submissive, whether you like gangbangs or not, but so far it's interesting

 

[Lordneah]

The UI is more pleasent in this release, however the issue remains that the writing is pretty bad and the choices are non-existant. At this point the game is just a porn gif delivery mechanism and nothing else of value. I agree with one of the reviewers who said that the men all seemed like carboard villlian characatures, there is not much depth just "man bad" and for seemingly no reason.

Next step suggestions:

1. Work on a way to have the scenes flow more smoothly. For example, the user experience is bad when I have to click constantly on a link to load the next bit of railroaded story. I'd prefer to scroll a bit more before having to click a link. A user-flow I have been considering that might be a good UX would be to have a scrolling text area and at certain scroll percentages, the gif that was meant to be displayed appears in an area reserved for displaying images and such, that way the realestate that is the reading pane is not cluttered with images.
2. Build out the characters and their driving motivations, their personalities, what they want and who they are. Try and make them all different and not just all the same.
3. Give the players some choice, being locked into a story but having the illusion via the UI of there being a meaningful choice limits your audience and likely infuriates them.

 

[Lady Developer]

The UI is more pleasent in this release, however the issue remains that the writing is pretty bad and the choices are non-existant. At this point the game is just a porn gif delivery mechanism and nothing else of value. I agree with one of the reviewers who said that the men all seemed like carboard villlian characatures, there is not much depth just "man bad" and for seemingly no reason.

Next step suggestions:

1. Work on a way to have the scenes flow more smoothly. For example, the user experience is bad when I have to click constantly on a link to load the next bit of railroaded story. I'd prefer to scroll a bit more before having to click a link. A user-flow I have been considering that might be a good UX would be to have a scrolling text area and at certain scroll percentages, the gif that was meant to be displayed appears in an area reserved for displaying images and such, that way the realestate that is the reading pane is not cluttered with images.
2. Build out the characters and their driving motivations, their personalities, what they want and who they are. Try and make them all different and not just all the same.
3. Give the players some choice, being locked into a story but having the illusion via the UI of there being a meaningful choice limits your audience and likely infuriates them.

Thank u for ur feedback..In next update I will try to add these things

 

[lucifer092]

This is a nice game. Cant wait for further updates and see how this evolves.

 

[bloodbus]

I just like the scenario in this game. I definitely think it could use lots of cleaning up like Lordneah suggested. I hope you keep it focused on one story and not branch into like 7 different stories - You don't need to bite more than you can chew. There's nothing more dissatisfying than liking a game but there's no reason to play it when every path has no content

 

[Darklord1234]

Imporved writting

Hmm, I think not.

 

[Bobber Tail]

Down side of "real porn" is inconsistency of character images.
The saves being locked to each update in an issue with most HTML games, but not all, so that means it's a choice or error on Dev's side.
Wish I had a better idea of choice results.

 

[Lady Developer]

Can

Hmm, I think not.

Can you please suggest what should I change please?

 

[BullRush77]

You must be registered to see the links

 

[SAHC]

Added group sex, interracial, multiple penetration, cheating, netorare, bdsm tags, and a few other tags. Try and keep your game properly tagged please, just makes it clear what type of game people will be playing.

 

[BRyoung77]

This dpes not look like getting to day 7 or any other day. this is as far as i can get

 

[Lady Developer]

This dpes not look like getting to day 7 or any other day. this is as far as i can get

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I guess you downloaded the wrong version

 

[Starmold]

Can

Can you please suggest what should I change please?

IMPORVED WRITTING is hardly convincing... *hint* start by correcting your spelling.

 

[Pogo123]

yoyoyo WHO are is every girl? like thumbnail, preview pics? PLEASE tell me. even i pisses me off i never meet such girls irl... >.>

also the guy's hand in the thumbnail looks like an older hand probably a pervy old dude with enough money paying a handsome whOre?

the girl in the second preview pic looks asian. never meet asian girls with such big tits irl...

but i especially like the girl getting doggied by some gym-dude and the girl taking a public spring shower (where the fuck is that)

 

[thatoneguy543w745387]

Can

Can you please suggest what should I change please?

Don't try too hard to please the people here - while some have good criticism, a lot are just whining babies who will complain at you over every little thing. Make the Game that YOU enjoy making lady dev. You seem like the type who takes constructive criticism, but don't bend over backwards for the whiners - nothing is ever good enough for them.

 

[Lady Developer]

Don't try too hard to please the people here - while some have good criticism, a lot are just whining babies who will complain at you over every little thing. Make the Game that YOU enjoy making lady dev. You seem like the type who takes constructive criticism, but don't bend over backwards for the whiners - nothing is ever good enough for them.

Ok I will remember that

 

[Blood-Red Circus]

Good luck with your game and all the best.)

 

[yessiyuri1]

Can anyone let me know if the images for the characters are at least similar?
My brain is a little nuerotic at times and it'll kill the storyline for me if characters vastly change physique and hair color.
I get this is from real content, but still

 

[LordofEntropy]

Don't try too hard to please the people here - while some have good criticism, a lot are just whining babies who will complain at you over every little thing. Make the Game that YOU enjoy making lady dev. You seem like the type who takes constructive criticism, but don't bend over backwards for the whiners - nothing is ever good enough for them.

Indeed, this is a good thing to keep in mind; there can definitely be some useful feedback from some folks at times. But there will also be a lot of whining, bad advice, and, "make the game I want you to make, remove this! Add this! OMG why aren't you listening to me!" There will also be comments that are just mean and straight up false; don't even bother responding to those as you will get nowhere with those types, just ignore them and try to not let them get to you. Good luck!

 

[BRyoung77]

I guess you downloaded the wrong version

No I was just stupid lol I copied the new into the old and it didnt work so i deleted the old and redid the new and it worked fine!! The game is doing good keep up the good work.