HTML - Office Queen [v2.3] [Lady Developer]

Review is for v0.3
I actually really like this game, but the proof reading and formatting just needs to be better.
The story is pretty typical for one of these sorts of games, and I love it.
The characters are also typical, but that's because they work well for this type of content.
Pictures are a little inconsistent, but that doesn't really bother me personally.
The cons are minor from a technical standpoint, but major from a gameplay standpoint. The party scene had a couple of weird looping glitches in it where I had to do the same thing a couple of times to get the right option to appear and when I was trying to go get my picture taken for the photo job, the option disappeared when I tried to go to the park first. Other than that, the game just needs consistent formatting and some proof reading and this is going to get good, fast.
Update for v1.3
Still some technical glitches, but overall a much better experience. Overall, just needs some more (relevant) content. There's been a decent amount of updates, so I'm probably going to put this on the back burner for a year to see where it goes.

This is *very* early work (v0.3) but I think it has all ingredients for a great game and it is going into the right direction.
As I mentioned in a post on the discussion thread,html games with real porn assets are usually not very good. However, I'm really enjoying this one. The fact that you don't need to grind is a refreshing change, as is the straight-to-the-point corruption.
Hopefully, I can change this to a full 5 star in the near future!

Edit: I changed my rating to 2 stars after revisiting the game. I don't think the potential I saw earlier materialized...

I found this game similar to others HTML game. It is not simple to do something original, but it is a good game anyway and i don't understand why so many people voted so low... It has nice image, is the story of a married woman that is starting to cheat, so for someone that appreciate the cuckholding is a valid game.

I am astonished at people calling this a good game. First, it's not even a game it's a collections of gifs linked together via a lame narrative.

As a story, none of this makes sense. Not even the blackmailing elements make sense. When you go to the party, the only way to get out of the infinite loop of rooms is to force your character to get drunk whether they want to or not.

And the purpose of getting drunk is to gangbang the female MC. For reasons that make no real sense.

For me the story matters, since all of the gifs and images are available online via Pornhub, XXNX, or any other porn movie/image site. So, despite the porn I got bored really fast.

Pretty good game. No grind and the porn pics and gifs are really good. The game is simple and for now make sense without something that seems forced. I do not understand the negative reviews. I like the game and i hope a new update will come soon

As of right now I would say its a 3 star game, still giving 4 to counter all the ( in my opinion wrong ) one star reviews.

In my playthrough I saw 3 situations where my decissions did matter!

Its not the most complex game on here but its ok for a quick fap Id say!

If dev adds a little more freedom/roaming it really should get a good game!

v0.2

A collection of decent gifs. That's all so far.

Despite the format, the game is completely linear. Sometimes the player can choose the next location (eg., Mall, Park), but there are no interactions besides the next story scene.

The writing is bland, with occasional typos.

No effort is put into making believable characters. The men are misogynistic, but not in a kinky way, in a dumb and cringey way. None of the characters seem to have any pervading motivations; their decisions only serve to reach the next gif. The characters are not even interesting enough to be caricatures. They are like a copy of a copy of a porno plot.

Well, I'm just rating here but my complaints are the same as the others.
Barely no content, broken links, no gameplay, no choices. This thing was developed in a rush, without any testing. I don't know if the dev is capable of apparent evolution in the next few updates, and it's probably going to abandon it

Don't play this for choices, writing, consistency in Live action porn or in my personal opinion anything interesting. I want to say it's because it's such an early version but I have no idea and I don't see much of any potential here as opposed to some other 'games' on the saturated html stuff.

Poor language.
Barely any content.
Existing content is no good.
This game either need a lot of work, or euthanasia.

Not much else to say, but I'll slap in a few more characters to get this review live.

This review is for version 0.3
The game has imrpoved quite a bit, the interface is better and there is more content. The game is still too linear, it needs a lot more content and more polishing, but this is the right way to go, I'm looking forward to more updates.

You've given a rating of 5 because the game shows promise. While I acknowledge that the text may not be perfect, it's a minor issue that can be addressed. The developer seems to have a promising vision, and I genuinely hope they continue to work on this game, unlike some other developers who raise expectations and then abandon their projects.

1st release - not a lot here, and not a lot to like.
The bar for HTML based real life porn video games is fairly low - but even then, this "game" manages to be in the bottom 30% both in regards to quality and quantity.

The media chosen is fine and fits whatever is described somewhat.

The writing is pretty bad, even considering the ESL status of the author. The narration jumps between 2nd and 1st person with additional flashbacks and out-of-character sections.
It might be a good idea to make an effort writing in their native language, then having chatGPT translate and/or rewrite it.

The pacing is all over the place, e.g. the first day consists of getting up, blowing the husband, buying 1 outfit at the mall, checking out the park for a sec, then going to bed.

There isn't a single choice to make, it's basically "show graphic, click link, repeat".

I had high hopes because I genuinely like the scenario - this isn't it.

PROs: no grind, gifs are not the same as every other "real Porn" game.
Cons: 0 story development, extremely broken English, horrid dialog. EX:
Shopkeeper: Yes mam what do you want?
Daisy:I want an outfit for my office.
Shopkeeper:Look at this mam

Update: I've now played version 3.0, and everything that I said was a problem in the first release is still a problem in 3.0. I may give an update if this game makes it to few more updates. Seriously it's a dumpster fire that no one seems to care about enough to put out.

update for 0.5: the following should illustrate the dialog issues that persist in this abortion gone bad of a game: husband asking where she wants a money shot "my queen where would you like the taxes".

if it was possible to give this game negative stars, i would. Nuke it from orbit.