Possibly but honestly wouldn't mind if the MC got super lucky. but up to you!
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Originally, the heroines’ sloppy speech was meant as a stylistic choice, but it looks like we overdid it. So in the next update, we'll adjust it: when they're sober, they'll speak properly, and when they're drunk and having fun, they'll shorten words and make mistakes. I think this will feel more natural and be less annoying for the player
Please stop tanking the game's rating over this, it's barely surviving as it is, haha. It was just an unsuccessful experiment! We'll try to avoid such silly mistakes in the future.I agree with the stylistic choice, there really isn't much of a way to describe it over text and someone being perfectly eloquent over text is unreasonable. But people would make more 'emotional' mistakes, and common spelling mistakes because their inhibitions are lowered.
So they will often 'reveal' more than they intend to and are VERY honest. (at least the drunks i've dealt with).
So they will often 'reveal' more than they intend to and are VERY honest. (at least the drunks i've dealt with).
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The game currently shows the percentage of photos unlocked in the current playthrough. Later, I will add another indicator—the percentage of photos unlocked across all your saves, including the current one. This will make it clearer. Sorry for the confusion! (100% of the photos in one playthrough is unattainable, as different photos appear in different branches of choices. It's much more interesting to have unique content in different branches)Anyways to unlock all photos
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Literally 70% of the VN and RPGM devs that use AI art are still stuck in teen years. The immature story writing, unable to introduce something new to the plot or artstyle and overuse of futa & NTR genre -- sum of these factors are more than enough proof that these devs barely reached 18 (and they ask us in game if WE are 18 which is ironic, lol) Heck, I won't be surprised if some of this site admins and editors are teenagers too for missing out on potential game tags pretty often and even allowing any game into the site without proper verification or checking if the site rules are met. Is human mind really that limited? Why not a brand new story that is set in a completely different environment leading to surprises and adventures?
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I'm 39 years old,
. I noticed that many games use this kind of stylization and mistakenly assumed that many people like it. I agree, it’s better to rework the dialogues.Something you could do with doing more 'mature' story telling is involve like essentially what I call a "peer review" where you ask people or your patreons on approval of the writing in essentially a tone that you are going for. Romantic novels I know have very slow build up, and wait for the explosive acts to happen, or start it with a one night stand slowly build more 'romantic' qualities. A friend and I have been writing explicit novels/stories for ages. Honestly, people when they text are actually pretty longform, they let their emotions come out on very long texts. I know I send huge walls of text and so do people I know. So longer discussions of things is pretty natural. Like look at most visual novels for a good basis of how people write dialogue they are usually pretty long if they are talking about subjects they are passionate about or something plot related.I'm 39 years old,
I know my favorite Visual novels are pretty long form and have a slow bake when it comes to the story but most Eroge are pretty similar that vein.
But this comes from having a clear idea of what your theme and tone you are going for the story. Naturalistic dialogue is something that is learned through experience. So rewriting the dialogue will come easier and i think the best place to start is Visual Novels which phones games... are basically at this point.
Adding voices messages is very unwanted. I hate having to turn audio on to be able to play a game.
This is actually a really interesting concept and looking forward to seeing it develop... Script issues aside . Only thing I'm unsure about is what way the story's going, so the MC is dominant and you see that clearly with Naomi ... It feels like it's gonna be a fuckfest for the MC but on the other side it comes across as he's using his dominance of Naomi to cuck himself without Rachel knowing , like I said I enjoyed it but just can't gage the direction as of yet
Anyone else think the same?
Anyone else think the same?
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if you're gonna unexpectedly turn our nice nts route into an ntr route i'm gonna dip out. I don't mind a decent NTR story, but having that shit dropped in your lap when youre looking for a nice loving swing/sharing relationship...i'm not interested in what could happen with my fetish in real life...i come to see this stuff here cause i want to see it play out well. I was playing a phone game earlier that did that and i dropped it immediately. You're gonna lose your readers trust if you do that to them. they chose the route they want...you fuck em over like that and they'll just leave.
We want to introduce as many branching paths as our imagination allows and that fit well into the story. So, we won't be forcing anything. There are both fans of this format and those who oppose it, which is understandable. Fortunately, visual novels allow for multiple branching choices, making them more relevant to a wider audience.
I've gotten in an argument with a dev on this forum about how his decision was an obvious fucking disaster in the making and he justified it by pointing at his poll on his Patreon... where he had lost 95% of his Patrons at that point. Which, in turn, had driven him to come here to beg for money. He had one of the most popular series on this site at one point, it's still in the top all time trending lists, and he set aside the series that made his career to focus an entire game on his least popular side chick(s). And he was already pissing everyone off w/ his inability to hit deadlines, provide updates and then he gave his supporters the chance to get even. Now his fucking career is dead and no one has seen him on his Discord, Patreon, SS, website, etc. His last known appearance was literally on this website arguing with me.
Yeah, get a proof reader. Just don't fucking fan source something that fucking important. Many of the most famous authors in the world have 2-3 people they completely rely upon to proof read and keep all the lore in check. It's not a bad thing until you try to give that power to people who spend all of their time typing one-handed and can barely read to begin with. Most fans don't take this shit seriously. As a developer, YOU HAVE TO. Even on the low end, this is a significantly better gig-based income than most people will have available to them. A few hundred bucks a month where you're also not having to spend hundreds of bucks on gas, also putting wear and tear on your vehicle and your body, is a massive step up from most gig jobs. And all you really need to do is have something most gamers are likely going to have anyway - a decent/good gaming pc.
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I downloaded the game. There is only the Office Secrets Android.exe file in the Office-Secrets-Windows-013 catalog. The game does not start.
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as long as it's a branching choice and not just unexpectedly dropped on your face. i played a game a couple days ago that did that and it ruined my night. I won't mention the game...but If anybody knows who polly is they'll know who/what i'm talking about. The game railroaded you into a sharing with women only route and then you get a text from her friend that she's banging some dude. You text her and she just starts talking shit to you WHILE she's getting fucked...it was brutal. I fully expected the story to evolve in that direction and potentially get cheated on, but i didn't expect the brutal ultimatum...this is what i'm gonna keep doing, either like it or fuck off. Just such a complete 180 degree turn from I love you thank you for being such an amazing supportive boyfriend literally like an hour before that to a complete disregard for the way you felt. Hell, if she'd have just been remorseful and sorry that she hurt you I'd have been fine but fuckin hell was that awful. At least a fuckin warning of some kind for us NTS fans that it was that kind of story. I know there are people who love that shit and that's fine, you do you.
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For the moment just one or two.
Not a big deal its very early its only like version .03
Honestly not a fan of the fact atm we really can't choose to have Naomi not sleep with your wife atm. and not come over and do things with you the MC. Very illusion of choice atm.