Renders are great.
Writing is poor.
I'd advise author to tandem with some authors on this site who have horrible CGs but good stories. There's A LOT of them over here.
And then you can just learn about writing at your own speed, if you want.
You can start with contrast, triple promises or chain sequensing, etc.
The last one, for example, is the notion that your every scene should make the reader WANT to see what happens in the next scene (the same you can apply to sentences, dialogue, or even renders).
Another example is the main contrast of the game: daddy-daughter relationship - "We shouldn't, but we want to." Which should be a very strong one, but handled so poorly that it's like not even there.
"Oh, I shouldn't, hehe." "Yeah, you shouldn't, hihi." "Yeah i shouldn't, haha."
Jesus.
You can take a reference from Summer's Gone - and how sister there is crushing on her brother. There's not a single sex scene! out there, but it's still insanely hot. And popular.
That's just a couple of writing tips to start with.
Just don't give up. Renders are really great.
Writing is poor.
I'd advise author to tandem with some authors on this site who have horrible CGs but good stories. There's A LOT of them over here.
And then you can just learn about writing at your own speed, if you want.
You can start with contrast, triple promises or chain sequensing, etc.
The last one, for example, is the notion that your every scene should make the reader WANT to see what happens in the next scene (the same you can apply to sentences, dialogue, or even renders).
Another example is the main contrast of the game: daddy-daughter relationship - "We shouldn't, but we want to." Which should be a very strong one, but handled so poorly that it's like not even there.
"Oh, I shouldn't, hehe." "Yeah, you shouldn't, hihi." "Yeah i shouldn't, haha."
Jesus.
You can take a reference from Summer's Gone - and how sister there is crushing on her brother. There's not a single sex scene! out there, but it's still insanely hot. And popular.
That's just a couple of writing tips to start with.
Just don't give up. Renders are really great.