HTML - Abandoned - One Girl, One Big World [v0.4] [Anna Merlyn]

Love it. Need more female protagonist games with doggy love. And a redhead too. All boxes checked.
Gotta chat for a bit since F95 really need it to be 200 characters in the review, and they couldn't be bothered to implement a word-count, so I really do not know when I should stop.... But I feel it should be about right now. :X

I think it has potential. I kinda liked the story and the UI. Some things can be improved, like the quest page, things don't line up right.

If the game can be expanded in the future that would for sure make it a lot better. Also it was a bit uncertain what to do at times. Other than that I liked the scenes and the dialogues.

review for v0.1
Honestly not a bad start. The interface is really well done, and with a lot more content we'll have a decent game here.
The characters and story are your typical porn game troupes.
Images are all well done and fit with what is going on.
It's just that there is very little content right now, as a v0.1 it's understandable, but as it plays right now, it's just doing the same couple of things a handful of times, and .... that's it.
tl;dr Really excited for future updates, but needs a whole bunch more to do before I can give it a better rating.

update for v0.4 - Better, but still very lack luster. There's at least story lines that have been started, but most of them are short and not really impactful to the gameplay or story

Rev One Girl, One Big World [v0.1]

Art's unremarkable.

Writing is remarkable in a bad way. It's both derivative and technically flawed. Scenario is somebody's SparkNotes on every MtF life sim ever made, narrative is disjointed and barely english, characterization as a word is longer than any written into this work.

Porn's dull and stretching to hit every trope in QSP / HTML offering.

Technical execution is poor; lots of placeholders, TODOs, and logic fails.

TLDR: Not an original idea in its head.

Updated review for v0.4:

The game still features broken or placeholder passages, as well as broken code. Since the "back" button is enabled, it can be used to escape them.

It's taken a heavy focus on zoophilia, and even if you don't play the animal paths, the game will show you dreams of sex with animals, so it seems unavoidable.

The rest is a grindy loop typical of most HTML games: repeat actions and farm stats to trigger an extra picture or video here and there. Some of the "sandbox" events only seem to happen once, so if you avoid them early on for roleplaying reasons (eg; keeping your virginity), you may get locked out of them later on.

The writing is very bad. I don't know if it's getting lost in translation, but here is an example:

Dad: "Its okay sweety! Everything will be allride"
He has good saying when he is the one beeing saved by your sweet ass how it seems like... just in that moment

Click to expand...

I honestly have no idea of what that's supposed to mean. It doesn't matter too much, because the plot is as nonsensical as it gets: you get turned into a woman without any explanation, you speak with animals after getting a collar, a convicted felon invades your house and spends a week living there without anybody doing a thing about it...

I'm bumping my score to 3 stars, because it's exactly an average HTML game. There's nothing that makes it worse than the rest, nor anything that makes it stand out, besides the animal content.

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Previous review for version 0.1

Right now it's mostly a collection of dead ends/black screens. Some bugs here and there.

It feels a bit rushed right now - very little content, even for a 0.1 version. As usual, I'll update the review once more content is added, but right now it offers very little content: just some hints at what the game could be.

The premise sounds good, but we'll have to see if it ever gets there or if it's yet another one of the myriad of games with too many promises and too little content.

I'm giving it the extra star because the AI art is good, and unlike what many think, it takes effort and time getting the correct prompts to get the pictures that you want. It also features real porn and some 3D renders, which are also of lower quality than the AI ones.

game is meh so far. Not much content. Too early to assess anything. Bunch of images in the game which aren't used yet. Couple of places that seem broken. As of yet nothing to write about so will update in future if its worth time instead of a 2 minute mock up

I decided not to limit myself to a comment, but also write a short review.

Pros:
- The game is a sandbox in the present tense (which I consider rather a minus), but the game has the beginnings of a magical component (which is a plus).
- There is a plot (unlike many sandboxes).
- Good design, navigation, buttons.
- Some good events.
- Cheats (make the test easier).

Cons:
- There are pirated pictures + 3D (but the author promises to fix it in future versions, so I won’t lower the rating).
- Lots of dead ends (which is fine for an early demo, but it's better not to give the player the opportunity to press buttons that lead to dead ends at all).
- Bugs.

Result: I give 5 stars in advance. I hope for the development of the game and correction of the disadvantages.
Once again I wish the author good luck and all the best.)