Good first release but there are still some annoyances.
Transitions of any kind really break gameplay flow(music stops, screen fades to black and then reappears, which all takes a bit too long).
The music is especially weird, cause often you spend only a second or two in an area so the music cant even get going just to be cut off again.
Also there is some grind in the game, I think grind is okay in some games but only if the grind itself doesnt feel totally meaningless. Here the game just excpects you to click the same things for 10 ingame days or so straight just to have enough money. No skill required, no reading required, just click the same things a bunch of time.
Now to the positives which there are also quite a few:
Models look good! Even if all background characters have very similar faces.
Story is also intriguing so far.
Music choice is good! (just needs to not be cut off at every transition point)
So with more content and some quality of life changes this could be a great game! Whish all the best
(also escape maybe shouldnt immediatly kill the game, instead maybe bring up a menu to save or return to main menu)