Ren'Py - Completed - One Pump Chump [v1.0.1] [TwistedScarlett]

While I in general like a lot of TwistedScarlett60's work and style, this is more than just a good porn game; it's a good piece of parody work, that both does justice to the work it parodies, but doesn't feel immersion-breaking for the original material (save maybe that one could make arguments about Tatsumaki's depiction, I guess). Genuinely good work.

I am pleased with this.

You can tell this is a quality game from the moment you start, the visuals are clean and consistent (the style is also really nice)

There's many systems to the game - leveling, affection meter, dialogue choices, turn based combat and resource management.

The dialogue is nice. I haven't noticed any grammatical mistakes.

Sound is good too.

Overall I'm really impressed with this. I hope to see the continued development of ONE PUMP CHUMP

Game's amazing. While short (which makes sense given that it's still in it's early development):
- The story is actually engaging, doesn't just feel like a filler between NSFW scenes
- Visual design is pleasing, especially of the characters
- Gameplay idea is fun and allows for (limited) specialization
Would be amazing if there were animations included for NSFW scenes, but overall I highly recommend.

Enjoyed their previous erotic game parody of My Hero Academia which had a fun story to play through. Found out this is their latest game and decided to give it a try and found it very enjoyable as well. Tatsumaki's interactions is very cute. Keep it up.

Can't wait for the next update! I had a lot of fun with the dating and combat aspect of the game. The hentai scenes were great and the game also includes a gallery that let's you view the images and scenes again.

Excellent art, original premise, good worldbuilding- TwistedScarlett does it again! I really enjoyed some previous works, namely My Tuition Academia, and this one seems poised to meet that level of quality.

Really great game!
the art remembers a lot some other games like the uraraka from bnh one
the story is nice, and kinda creative, i liked it, plus the characters interactions and choices it's really cool, if i would add something, besides "new areas upgrades, etc" because the game still in development, would just be change the hud, to something less "appearing" in the screen, and give some details and art to it
try adding more details to art, and make the bodies less absurd, i mean, Tatsumaki looks great, but Fubuki and others have a body taht's just too much unreal, people loves big breast, but try make it at least more a world like, well, that's based more in taste
and the art in general add more shadow, more skin detail and flaws i think, it will make it look like less AI

(i searched, he is the owner of the other games i mentioned, btw, i forgot to say, i love the freedom in this type of game, give us more!!)

A parody game that shows promise in a lot of ways:
+ The story is faithful to the source material, while still being a very servicable plot as a standalone story.
+ The overall pace of the game is quite fast for a corruption game, which is refreshing compared to many games that move at a glacially slow pace.
+ Gameplay systems aren't grindy; main story progression is tied to in-game days and combat isn't required for progression. Furthermore, the primary method of gaining "EXP" to improve your character is simply by passing days. Given events aren't repeatable, you could argue there is ZERO necessary grind currently in the game.

I could see people taking issue with the lack of animations, but I personally think the other aspects of the scenes (art quality, SFX, and good narration) more than make up for this.

Since this is only the first release I'm hesitant to give it a full five stars, but given the dev has made a quality game before I think it's a safe bet that this game will continue to deliver high-quality content.

game had alot more content then i expected for the file size considered.

art was really nice and how you did tatsumaki's and fubuki's charachters were really nice never close to how they would act in the show I'm very excitied for what there is to come and hope new charachters can be introduced and better combat

One of the best actual parody of shows/games etc, the quality is amazing, the dialogues could use some work because, for me at least, they sometimes sounded unnatural, they weren't bad but just a light touch would do the trick in fixing, CGs are amazing, I can't say anything bad about them, maybe that one of CGs just looked out of place (the penetration one), it didn't really
resemble what other did, and whole Tatsumaki's character changed there, maybe it was made on purpose but still, moans are nice, I myself much prefer little noises to whole voiceacting. I will have the game on watch and I much
recommend playing it by anyone yourself. Waiting for next versions! Keep up the fabulous work!

I played all the games of the author, his drawing is probably one of the best, i like the idea of the game, i did not encounter any bugs, everything is great as always.
I really look forward to the next updates, i think this may become my favorite of his games and, yes, i am a big fan of Tatsumaki.

I loved the scenes and the parody. The script is good and the characters fit well into the story. The sex scenes are great. I have nothing to criticize, the game is good. I'll be looking forward to more content in the future!

The developer has a following, and the game is based on a well known anime, that's about it. The game is way overrated. No animations, hardly any game play. If this was produced by an unknown developer it would not receive a 4,5 star.

As usual nothing to say, a few bugs here and there but nothing much, blowjob layering issue has already been reported iirc, I've had the first esper upgrade buy itself without being able to do anything and giving me 2 MP instead of 2 WIS

Pretty great foundation, only complaint I have is thst the dialogue could use a bit of work. It's a bit too romantic and tatsumaki seems to be not nearly bratty/funny enough so she seems a little flatter than her character should be.

Amazing as always, great artwork, combat seems good enough, UI's kinda messy on mobile if the button has too much text but for the most part it looks clean and most important of all interesting story, I'm intrigued what the story will become at the certain events of opm

Review as of Act 1 v.0.1.0

This might be the most impressive 0.1 release I've personally played. There was a surprising amount of content for a first release and the foundations for an excellent game are already present.

I like the game system that's currently in place. The patrols and skill tree aren't too fleshed out or demanding as of now but it adds a bit of depth and choice that I can appreciate.

But at the end of the day the most important thing is the lewd stuff. The game focuses heavily on Tatsumaki and it seems that she'll be the primary focus. I think this is a good call. The main girl gets a lot more screen time and characterization. I'm much more interested in seeing a wide variety of interesting content for one character than getting less variety or uninspired content for a bunch of characters. It seems like the game does hint at side content for some other characters, which would be great so long as it doesn't come at the expense of the main girl.

This is a really solid first release that inspires a lot of confidence moving forward. It seems like the dev has a clear idea of what they want the game to be and I will be eagerly waiting for the next update.

Edit: I didn't even realize this was made by the creator (creators?) of Friendship with Benefits. I think that's even more reason to be excited about this game's future.

Edit 2: As of 0.4.0a, this game is still incredible and I stand by every compliment I gave.

Shockingly good. Gameplay is just alright(but not at all grindy) but the writing and images are both great. A surprising amount of content for a 0.1 release, too.

We just need to see if it manages to break the curse of parody games with a promising start that makes them never update again.

Promising demo. I liked the focus on one character and romance. Art and character designs are good. Planned content and fetishes looks promising. Interested to see how the patrol and upgrade system works out. Exited to see how the game develops.

Alright, I played through the first update and was honestly surprised by how much content there is so far. Let’s break down the key points:


1 - Art:
Well, this is a matter of personal taste, but I really dislike that damn rubbery-looking AI skin, it’s just a personal thing, okay? I know in this case it was probably the opposite, the AIs were likely trained on the original artist’s style... but putting that aside, I personally prefer visuals with color tones that don’t give off that artificial AI vibe.


The character proportions also didn’t quite catch my attention, again, just personal preference. Tatsumaki is the one who keeps the most realistic body proportions, even if not perfect, which is fine. But Fubuki, along with others, falls into that usual trope of tripling breast size, which for me makes the character less attractive. That said, I do have to admit the overall art is very well-structured. The facial expressions are convincing and all; I can see the quality even if it’s not really my thing.


2 - Gameplay:
I really liked the skill system during combat, the use of the original series’ music, the sound effects, and the way affection points work with character interactions. The patrol mechanic is also a cool addition, and I can totally see this evolving well if it's carefully thought out, whether in forming some sort of harem with the characters or facing off against enemies like Garou, among many others.


3 - Personalities:
I think they’re fairly well done, faithful to the originals. I really liked this aspect and don’t have much to critique here.


4 - The downsides?
Well, aside from my earlier comment about the art, I felt the dynamic with Tatsumaki progressed a bit too quickly to really build a sense of real desire from the player. I know the dev tried to set up a gradual build-up with small interactions leading to the sex scene and all, but it all happens every two in-game days, so on one hand, yes, there’s a lot of content, which is great, but on the other, it kind of feels like the player already hit “level 100,” metaphorically speaking, and now it’s just about farming to optimize. That kind of kills the excitement for the character, and even the motivation to grow stronger through daily expeditions. Both things should be intertwined, with a balanced level of challenge to keep players invested.


It’s funny, because there are games that, even after tons of updates, only tease the characters while developing them, maybe just a peek here and there, and that builds huge desire in the audience without even showing much. Anyway, I went on a bit here, but I think the overall point stands.

So that’s it, I think a fair score would be a 4. I was honestly torn about giving it a 5, but I can’t deny how I truly feel when making my final decision.