Stunning Visuals and Animations
Oppai Odyssey has some of the best visuals and animations I’ve seen in an AVN. The character designs, environments, and effects are top-notch, making it a visually immersive experience. However, while the game looks fantastic, the writing doesn’t quite live up to the same standard.
Story Lacks Consistency
The story is all over the place, with major inconsistencies that make it frustrating to follow. Some characters go through abrupt changes that don’t make sense, leaving the narrative feeling disjointed and incomplete.
Removal of Dr. Clermont
One of the biggest issues is the complete removal of Dr. Clermont as a love interest. There was no explanation other than "I'm running from my past", she was just taken out of the game. And was instead replaced by some ugly Alien that you can't do anything with. This sudden change left a noticeable gap in the story, making it feel like an unfinished draft.
Lym’s Unstable Character Arc
Lym, who was originally a main love interest, has been basically pushed to the side without reason. Her relationship with the MC flip-flops unpredictably. One update, she building a relationship with the MC. Then the next she’s stripped of her second-in-command role, and the next, everything is suddenly fine, and she’s back in bed with the MC. There’s no real emotional payoff or logical progression, making it feel forced. She should still be mad at the MC, but instead, she forgives him over something as minor as helping her move some objects. Atleast the other side character's have had simple progression involving the MC. However, Lym progression is unstable.
Maledom Choices Feel Meaningless
The game presents maledom choices with Nyx, but they don’t seem to impact anything at all. No matter what, Nyx still ends up as second-in-command over Lym, even though Lym was originally supposed to be a lifelong partner to the MC, shes replaced by some Elf you met a few weeks prior. I like Nyx as a character, but the game has focused on her for far too long, making it feel like Lym was downgraded to a side character overnight.
Conclusion
Overall, the game looks amazing, but the writing is messy and inconsistent. Removing Dr. Clermont, sidelining Lym, and making choices feel irrelevant all hurt the experience. If the dev wants this VN to reach its full potential, the story needs serious improvements. 1/5 stars
Oppai Odyssey has some of the best visuals and animations I’ve seen in an AVN. The character designs, environments, and effects are top-notch, making it a visually immersive experience. However, while the game looks fantastic, the writing doesn’t quite live up to the same standard.
Story Lacks Consistency
The story is all over the place, with major inconsistencies that make it frustrating to follow. Some characters go through abrupt changes that don’t make sense, leaving the narrative feeling disjointed and incomplete.
Removal of Dr. Clermont
One of the biggest issues is the complete removal of Dr. Clermont as a love interest. There was no explanation other than "I'm running from my past", she was just taken out of the game. And was instead replaced by some ugly Alien that you can't do anything with. This sudden change left a noticeable gap in the story, making it feel like an unfinished draft.
Lym’s Unstable Character Arc
Lym, who was originally a main love interest, has been basically pushed to the side without reason. Her relationship with the MC flip-flops unpredictably. One update, she building a relationship with the MC. Then the next she’s stripped of her second-in-command role, and the next, everything is suddenly fine, and she’s back in bed with the MC. There’s no real emotional payoff or logical progression, making it feel forced. She should still be mad at the MC, but instead, she forgives him over something as minor as helping her move some objects. Atleast the other side character's have had simple progression involving the MC. However, Lym progression is unstable.
Maledom Choices Feel Meaningless
The game presents maledom choices with Nyx, but they don’t seem to impact anything at all. No matter what, Nyx still ends up as second-in-command over Lym, even though Lym was originally supposed to be a lifelong partner to the MC, shes replaced by some Elf you met a few weeks prior. I like Nyx as a character, but the game has focused on her for far too long, making it feel like Lym was downgraded to a side character overnight.
Conclusion
Overall, the game looks amazing, but the writing is messy and inconsistent. Removing Dr. Clermont, sidelining Lym, and making choices feel irrelevant all hurt the experience. If the dev wants this VN to reach its full potential, the story needs serious improvements. 1/5 stars