Since there's a lot of people complaining, but no actual reviewing, let me have a go at it:
=Breakdown=
Music: 4/10 - Well, it exists, and when it's not exploding my ears it sounds just very basic.
Art: 7/10 - Pretty, nicely drawn. Somewhat too pointy on the faces, and some weird reds/blushes on the body like sunburns.
Style: 6/10 - Live 2D should be standard for 2D VNs, it's just so much more fun to see. Very bland backgrounds.
Content: 5/10
{
UI/Game: The settings are broken, I cannot go into windowed mode, the save menu is strange, besides taking a lot to open, the quick-save button also opens the save menu for whatever reason;
Duration/Price: I was going to be harsher, but maybe the price has changed since I last checked. Short game, but for 5 bucks it's completely fair;
Sound/VA: I know it's expensive, but at least some kinds of sound effects would be nice.
}
Story: Since I hate these "pimping my girl" type of story, so I won't judge you on this in order to not sound like a biased jerk.
NSFW: 5/10 - While your art there is good, the lack of any kind of animation on a game that makes a good use of Live 2D doesn't make it strange, it feels extremely jarring. I mean, this is a NSFW game, the draw for most people is the porn, and but then it seems you kinda forgot to spice that up. And also it's really funny that Mocha has a nipple double the size of the opposite, which I don't remember if it was on purpose or not now.
Total: 54/100
=Thoughts=
I don't know the dev, but if this is your first "real" game, then congratulations to you, it's solid.
But there's still much that could be improved for your next outings, such as polishing the art in some aspects, filling a bit more of the game with sounds and different tracks of music. Developing longer interactions and/or different situations with both girls together would be interesting to see. Also more sex-scenes lol
Good luck!
=Breakdown=
Music: 4/10 - Well, it exists, and when it's not exploding my ears it sounds just very basic.
Art: 7/10 - Pretty, nicely drawn. Somewhat too pointy on the faces, and some weird reds/blushes on the body like sunburns.
Style: 6/10 - Live 2D should be standard for 2D VNs, it's just so much more fun to see. Very bland backgrounds.
Content: 5/10
{
UI/Game: The settings are broken, I cannot go into windowed mode, the save menu is strange, besides taking a lot to open, the quick-save button also opens the save menu for whatever reason;
Duration/Price: I was going to be harsher, but maybe the price has changed since I last checked. Short game, but for 5 bucks it's completely fair;
Sound/VA: I know it's expensive, but at least some kinds of sound effects would be nice.
}
Story: Since I hate these "pimping my girl" type of story, so I won't judge you on this in order to not sound like a biased jerk.
NSFW: 5/10 - While your art there is good, the lack of any kind of animation on a game that makes a good use of Live 2D doesn't make it strange, it feels extremely jarring. I mean, this is a NSFW game, the draw for most people is the porn, and but then it seems you kinda forgot to spice that up. And also it's really funny that Mocha has a nipple double the size of the opposite, which I don't remember if it was on purpose or not now.
Total: 54/100
=Thoughts=
I don't know the dev, but if this is your first "real" game, then congratulations to you, it's solid.
But there's still much that could be improved for your next outings, such as polishing the art in some aspects, filling a bit more of the game with sounds and different tracks of music. Developing longer interactions and/or different situations with both girls together would be interesting to see. Also more sex-scenes lol
Good luck!
