VN - Ren'Py - Origin Story [v0.7.0] [JDOR]

Dayum, that's a good game, dev.
Keep it up! It doesn't matter whether there are animations or not; the story is amazing, and so are the renders and models, along with a bit of humor from Fraser. The background music is good as well, and it's amazing that this is your first game. Go nuts making this!

Well
The dev changelog says that there is not ntr cuckold
But in the memories the mc had the worst birthday ever his stepsister bailing him his stepmom flirting and having sex with a random bartender and for some reason he had to the bathroom so you can watch or hear them safe mode on off
His childhood riend with her power sleeping with a lot of people just ruins the virgin sex
Lack of choices mostly to have sex feels like a kinetic novel

The setting could've been something generic and bland, superpowers in school? What is this, My Hero Academia? I'm happy to see that this one is actually something different from the norm. It makes things somewhat believable within the ruleset of its own setting.

Models are great, maybe just one or two I'd change a few things, but I'm sure these two are the favorites of someone out there. So, it's guaranteed that you find someone that tickles your fancy.

TL;DR: Highly enjoyable, with plenty of LIs options, so player can pick and choose whatever suits their taste (including the famous "all of the above" option).

The game is surprisingly enjoyable despite initial doubts about its over-the-top premise. While the plot involving superpowers is refreshingly chaotic and avoids typical superhero clichés, the main character often feels unrealistic—frequently discussing masturbation in awkward, cringeworthy ways that inexplicably charm the female characters. This detracts from the writing’s believability. Though the story is intriguing, it novel still has plenty of room to grow, and the game shows strong potential and could become something special with time and continued development.

What a great surprise this was. The dialogue is actually hysterical at time, many laughs were had. The characters are all well rounded with distinct personalities. The writing is as good as it gets and the world building is interesting, deep and cogent. This is one of a handful of games where you will get attached to the characters who have rich, deep and compelling backstories.

All the posted CGs are a good reflection of the game, if you like what's here you will love what's in the game.

This is one to watch and you're likely to be left wanting more.

Here's another visual novel with a virgin MC who somehow becomes the 'chosen one.' All the girls instantly want him, explained away by cheap 'pheromones.' The author tries to say there's no NTR, but that's the least of its problems. You get a scene where the MC's mother-like figure hooks up with a waiter during his birthday dinner—total disrespect, yet the MC seems inexplicably fine with it.

Then there's the author's take on game modes. They offer a 'Safe Mode' for sensitive players, but then insult you by calling 'default mode' players 'brave' for watching those scenes. It's incredibly condescending and just sours the whole experience.

Incredible game, surprised the hell out of me how enjoyable and well-made it was. The renders are gorgeous, the three-dimensional characters are varied in personality, and there isn't a single uninteresting LI. The writing is sharp, witty, and funny enough to get more than one belly laugh. The pace of the game is pretty stellar as well, as you are never given a chance to become bored.

The biggest highlight, though, is the story and how well the superhero premise (heavily inspired by The Boys) is executed. It also makes for some pretty fun sex scenes, which I'm such we'll see more of.

The only problem I have his the amount of LIs borders on excessive, which makes it hard to become interested and emotionally invested. But the characters and the writing is good enough for that to only be a small issue, and despite it it's one of the most perfect games out there. Can't wait for the next update.

Great models, characters with believable diverse personalities in a super hero school setting.

Check, check, check.

Came for a wank, stayed for the story.

Reminds a little of how I would play my rogue-like play-throughs, mixed in "the boys" universe.

Only one thing is keeping me from giving this the elusive 5 I have such a heard time giving. Honestly I am enjoying the story for teh biggest part which in itself is rare as there are not a lot of good stories to be found out there. So major Kudoes on that point alone.

What took away that one star you might ask? Well.....I am wanting to understand why every single woman in this game is a carpet muncher? Oh and Kudos on there being bush here as well. Too many out there that are alergic to a natural presentation. Some of us still find a natural woman sexy. Also again Kudos to not every woman wearing a pair of beach balls on her chest as well. Again variety is truly the spice of life.

Oh and it would really be nice if he actually had to work to get in the panties of some of these girls as well, especially since they all love munching carpet way more than chowing down at the sausage bar.

Not that I care for gay sex but it would be funny as hell if our MC had the option to snag some of these nice powerful male powers by dominating a few of these pricks and making them swallow his load. Just saying. Why linit the theft of power to just these boring female ones. There are some real ass hats in this one that I would love to see have their power stolen and used against them.

Needless to say am really looking forward to seing where this goes in the future. Well worth your time to play it. Even if you don't take my word for it.

Great game. Love the characters and really love a lot of models and characters.
Story is really nice.
Great game. Love the characters and really love a lot of models and characters.
Story is really nice.

Fantastic game. The world building is great. All LI are really fun and fleshed out. Sex scenes are plenty and very good. There are no animations but you really don't miss them. The overall story is moving kinda slowly the past update or two, so hopefully they can get it back on track a little.

[v0.7.0]

This is a solid 4/5 VN, BUT:

⠀⠀⠀The novel introduces everyone as dimwitted horny teenagers with zero personality and social responsibility, who are just down to fuck. Everyone talks about sex non-stop and constantly cracks sex jokes, it's tiring. It's also off-putting.
⠀⠀⠀MC's childhood friend in particular deserves a better introduction to the story. Forming some sort of year-long "cherry-popping" agreement with him, instead of simply pursuing the relationship doesn't make any sense. She's clearly bold enough to offer sex, so "shy" and "terrified to push for more" argument doesn't apply. She claims she stayed a virgin because she only wants to do it with MC, yet in the next sentence she says "don't get it to your head", because it will be business as usual to being just friends after the act. Is she bipolar? Like that conversation kinda destroyed her image for a while, but luckily author redeemed her eventually.
⠀⠀⠀Script and pacing suffers from frequent exposition dumps that serve the purpose of acquainting readers with lore and characters, which is not the way to do it. It's kinda irritating to sit through yet another Q&A session or very long dialogue with a girl, you know? There are also dialogues which I could only describe as yapping, that serve no purpose other than to pad the runtime.
⠀⠀⠀Everyone describes and emphasizes that Sisterhood's members are all supermodels way above beauty standards, yet most of them look fairly average (compared to the rest of the characters), a bit of a visual-narrative dissonance here.
⠀⠀⠀There is technically a glossary that differentiates proper "love interest" apart from fuck buddies, but IMO there are only two actual LIs: Evelyn and Amber. Everyone else you just have sex with, and that's fine, but they're not really a wife/GF material, more like FWBs
⠀⠀⠀The comedy is fine: not cringe, sometimes kinda funny when it's not yet another sex-related joke, but not "bursting with laughter" levels either.
⠀⠀⠀MC is often pretty awkward, I wish he wasn't fanboying or drooling as much for half the character cast, feels so degrading.
⠀⠀⠀Sex scenes have no animations and no sounds - sure, fine, but there's no gallery either (except for some random pictures), so you can't even re-watch them, so lame.
⠀⠀⠀Technically you can "turn off lesbian content" and sure you won't see related sex scenes, buuuuut everyone is still basically an open lesbian and ALL WOMEN are constantly making remarks about being (or wishing to be) "intimate" with each other. Honestly at times it feels as though these wenches are more attracted to one another than to the protagonist.

And yet despite these shortcomings (some pretty subjective) it's a good VN: visually appealing and interesting to read. Ember's both dads approve!

Excellent game. Probably most engaging sex scenes I saw in this kind of game.
Missing videos might actually be for the best as the scenes are much longer and engaging. Also scene variants are practically unique scenes instead of just 90% copy past or cut content as is the norm.

one of my favourite games,
It has great graphics, likable characters, a reasonable spread of kinks & one of the only good superhero concepts in this genre.
Updates can be a little slow but always come with a decent amount of content.
Will definitely looking for whatever the dev does next.

This VN offers a novel take on the superpower genre, with a fresh and creative storyline. The characters are incredibly hot and well-developed, adding depth and charm. It’s a unique and memorable experience, especially for fans of the genre.

This VN is a superb discovery! The models are excellent, the story is interesting, the free roaming concept is good, and there are some great ideas for the adult scenes. In short, a good VN! It's significantly underrated on this site.
The MC isn't a complete idiot. Be careful, though, as the story gets a bit lost towards the end, but it's nothing too bad if the following chapters focus a little more on the heroines and the girls in the house.
A great discovery for me, hence the 5

This started off very promising when it was first released, but now I just find it's another run of the mill VN story, just with somewhat better writing and in a pretty cool world.

I thought there was great promise for this to be an underdog story for the MC at the beginning, and I feel that probably would've been a far more interesting route.

But nope, as per usual, the MC becomes the "chosen one, all ladies want him from the get-go" archetype that we have seen ad nauseam at this point. Gets sexual super powers so that all the women in the story want to jump his bones without any effort from him whatsoever. It has made for a very predictable and unexciting story, there's really no progression to be had here now.

I get it, this is a "porn game" at the end of the day, but I am tired of these stories where everything just falls in to the main characters palms. It's boring. If he had've been an underdog, imagine the progression and all the interesting conflicts that could've happened in this world...

But instead, he gets sexual powers pretty early on, gets a house full of heroines that all want to fuck him, everything's peachy! There's no obstacles or hurdles, no tension. I can see where this story is going from miles away, so I am not really inclined to keep playing.

It's a shame because the world had a lot of potential, but alas this IS a porn game.

Wow. Just wow. This game has everything I am looking for -aside a few kinks, which are not really relevant. The story is interesting without being shoehorned or taking too much time to get to the point, the LIs are lovable, horny and serve a purpose ; the scenes are very well thought, the plot is good, it makes sense and holds all throughout the 7 chapters I've been playing through.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next updates, I just can't get enough !

The only downside : no replay gallery -you can access a few pictures through the top-right corner icon, but that's not available all the time. This is my only complaint. This game is GOOD.

the plot is funny, the scenes are enjoyable, it is lacking just a bit in term of choices as it is unclear their weight in the story. Most of the choices seem only of the type "you want this scene? Y/N".
Also please add a gallery

Well written and the characters are unique both physically and in their characters. The main character is stupid but in the way that's expected of 99% of protaganists leading for the story being pretty damn good.

The only issue, I would say, is a little whiplash from the pacing and writing at times. Sometimes, the story is SEX SEX SEX, and sometimes, it can be pretty dark. There are a few moments where the two clash pretty hard, and it's jarring.
Some of this I put down to the dev clearly not being 100% confident of the tone they want to set, but in later versions this is clearer.