VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Gato21]

SerHawkes face palms every single post. Feel free to face palm all his posts

Can I get free headpats, too?

 

[loloby]

People laughed at my post saying I expect the next update in December. Eva comes out today and says the next update is planned for November. Suck on that bitches

I genuinely thought of big update. Anyways, it's a win win for everyone.

 

[WatsonJohn]

I don't think it's presumptuous to attribute it to your mindset when what you're saying is your opinion. My, similarly personal opinion, is that i don't perceive myself "less catered to" on a path where i choose for the characters not to fuck everything that moves. Or catered more to when i choose to play a path where i do.


All is easy for those who don't have to put an actual effort in producing the game. What the game actually does is reusing some of the content in order to provide the player with larger selection of characters they can pursue. Because the author doesn't have means to produce even more unique content she already does, in reasonable time.

Mind you, this bigger selection of characters doesn't mean skewing in any particular way, because the decision how much of it you want to see in single playthrough is, again, completely yours. Whether the player wants to juggle between a few characters, or focus on just one or two, that's all on them. The game itself isn't influencing it.

And you seem to be making a big presumption here, about the nature of sexual content in the game. Because for all we know a large part of this content is actually made with "romantic path" on mind first, and then simply reused for the "slutty path" which effectively gets some cloned leftovers.

This is just being in circles. In that case, this is you being presumptuous that you are attributing this to my mindset. This is just your opinion, after all. You could make an opinion that Earth is flat. Whatever I say to make my observation that it's in fact spherical would just be my presumption, my own "perception". Let's go over to Ian in a sec. Can you say that Minerva solo path is equally catered to a Cindy solo path? It must be my "presumption" that more effort and content are done more on one side than the other.

Yet another one of those, "you can't say that cuz you're not making" As if people can't speak their own minds on the matter. People can make their own reviews. No matter what you say, it won't shut people up. And I'm not even complaining about the number of content. You're missing the point entirely.

That's just factually untrue. Ian may get some more because he's the other main character, but the direction clearly caters more to one side. And again, this is just be you being presumptuous.

 

[Andrea9999]

Seymour will probably ask Lena to do some very immoral things during the meeting with his wealthy and powerful business partners in Dubai. And the question will she tell Ian, where is she going?

Perhaps more exhibitionism first with others brought to view her...handcuffs behind her back....using the Lovense in her behind....inviting the dinner couple they met at the restaurant (the man with the elderly lady). Also, perhaps as in the Story of O, and perhaps in Dubai, a more sinister controller might take the reins. EK's use of sound effects from Lena are more genuine sounding than in the other scenes. I wish she had more of a focus on the Seymour-Lena arc.
(btw, Lena is not with Ian in the way I played; I had Ian enjoy Holly which broke it up.) Once in Dubai, Lena may not be able to return.

 

[Andrea9999]

If given the choice, probably not, simply for the sake of drama, though maybe.

I do not think Seymour will directly break his pact with Lena. Remember his benevolence when Lena postponed a meeting to vist her needy folks. Rather, once in Dubai, perhaps a more sinister, wealthy Arab controller will take charge, who only cares about intensifying the domination and arousal into the no-limits zone. Lena would find her trip very different from envisioned....she would see what it really is to be a show animal. Lena might not actually return...sexual slavery can go on for a while.

 

[SerHawkes]

I do not think Seymour will directly break his pact with Lena. Remember his benevolence when Lena postponed a meeting to vist her needy folks. Rather, once in Dubai, perhaps a more sinister, wealthy Arab controller will take charge, who only cares about intensifying the domination and arousal into the no-limits zone. Lena would find her trip very different from envisioned....she would see what it really is to be a show animal. Lena might not actually return...sexual slavery can go on for a while.

Entirely possible, then again, I never agree to work or agree to terms with Geymour so his whole shpell is of no interest to me and doesn't really add anything to the story other than some boring "villain" asshole character that was intended to be a 'corruptor' but isn't really that interesting to begin with.

SerHawkes face palms every single post. Feel free to face palm all his posts

Thanks for the free headpats. Much luv.

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

I dislike Lena, while Ian does, so in my gaming experience I can't stand the two of them being together, Ian I chose two other variants as a couple, but Lena for me always remains the slut of the game, also because she is designated in every way to cheat, then you might as well make her act like a slut directly, hahah, I hope the next updates are more prolific for Ian and more slutty for Lena, I look forward to it.

 

[Andrea9999]

Entirely possible, then again, I never agree to work or agree to terms with Geymour so his whole shpell is of no interest to me and doesn't really add anything to the story other than some boring "villain" asshole character that was intended to be a 'corruptor' but isn't really that interesting to begin with.

Our tastes are different. I used to be in a sexual submissive lifestyle. Now I have a serious sig other in a love life. I like the game parts that accentuate the fantasies in which I no longer participate.

 

[Leongen43]

I really liked Lena but I don't like that they have a serious relationship with Ian because I feel like it deprived me of a lot of content even when I make them both unfaithful, in the game I always end up having a relationship with Cindy (because I hate Wade) or Cherry ( to annoy Lena), I like this game and I would like to see more Ivy material because it is more turned on

 

[dolfe67]

Seymour will probably ask Lena to do some very immoral things during the meeting with his wealthy and powerful business partners in Dubai. And the question will she tell Ian, where is she going?

If she goes to Dubai and there is no scat content I'd be extremely disappointed

 

[dolfe67]

I dislike Lena, while Ian does, so in my gaming experience I can't stand the two of them being together, Ian I chose two other variants as a couple, but Lena for me always remains the slut of the game, also because she is designated in every way to cheat, then you might as well make her act like a slut directly, hahah, I hope the next updates are more prolific for Ian and more slutty for Lena, I look forward to it.

Oh because Ian is not designed to cheat? Keep your double standard to yourself

 

[Andrea9999]

If she goes to Dubai and there is no scat content I'd be extremely disappointed

*sigh* The slow progression from the exquisite elegance of submission to the demanding filth of the sheik. Of course they would keep her dressed elegantly at the beginning of each session....perhaps even during the animal phase.

 

[| Vee |]

Game provides complete choice to players how they want both MC's to be in certain paths. Lena can be a cheating slut so can Ian be. Only difference might be in no. of lis that's all. So stop bullshitting that certain MC is this and that. If you don't like Lena COOL, If you don't like Ian Cool too. BUT DON'T whine that game doesn't give player's authority to make MC behave in certain paths. That's on player A.K.A YOU!
PERIOD!

 

[| Vee |]

My plan is to release a sort of Prologue, that will finally cover the anticipated MMA tournament, aside from moving the plot forward with several character relationships, and will also have a scene you might not be expecting. My goal is to release this update before December.

Didn't see this one coming!
I didn't expect that Prologue will cover tournament. Does it mean that tournament will be a short one or prologue will cover just some part of it and than at a later date will have more important matches? If anyone know do tell plz or share your opinions!
SerHawkes was right about about it.

 

[I-No]

Lena might not actually return...sexual slavery can go on for a while.

As much as I would enjoy such a development I don't think Seymour would give up Lena that easily. And why should he? For money or wealth? Probably not.

 

[Socrambus]

Didn't see this one coming!
I didn't expect that Prologue will cover tournament. Does it mean that tournament will be a short one or prologue will cover just some part of it and than at a later date will have more important matches? If anyone know do tell plz or share your opinions!
SerHawkes was right about about it.

wen "This summer, several gyms in the city area are hosting an amateur MMA tournament."
$ fjeremy = "happy"
j "That sounds awesome!"
i "What's the tournament like?"
yuri "You fight once a month against someone in your weight class from a different gym. You fight in a bracket, so even if you lose a fight, you can make it to the top three if you win the other ones."
yuri "There's a small money prize for the winner and finalists."

So it seems there will be only one fight in the coming prologue. And there won't be a fight against Jeremy until maybe a possible playoff with the top 3 of each bracket.

 

[ffive]

This is just being in circles. In that case, this is you being presumptuous that you are attributing this to my mindset.

There's no presumption here -- i have presented my reasoning and you didn't say a single word that'd actually refute it. There's no facts for you to base your claim on, and no facts which you'd cite to support your point, so opinion is the only alternative that's left. If you think differently, feel free to state what you think you're basing your statements on. Because you have yet to do it.

You could make an opinion that Earth is flat. Whatever I say to make my observation that it's in fact spherical would just be my presumption, my own "perception".

The shape of earth can be observed and measured with devices which don't have presumptions or perceptions. Both "flat" and "sphere" are also clearly defined. This is not matter of opinion, but facts. It's disingenuous for you to put yourself in the role of the reasonable person in this analogy, when your observations in our discussion were of completely different nature.

Let's go over to Ian in a sec. Can you say that Minerva solo path is equally catered to a Cindy solo path? It must be my "presumption" that more effort and content are done more on one side than the other.

In terms of content, fun fact. There's 4 sex scenes for Ian/Minerva and also 4 sex scenes for Ian/Cindy. In terms of player satisfaction, there's many more voices expressing dissatisfaction with Cindy's (lack of) appearances in the game as of late, than about limited presence of Minerva. So, one could make a point that Cindy's fans actually feel less catered to, than Minerva's fans.

And herein lies the crux of the issue: you have yet to define what you actually consider as "being catered to". So, instead of asking me this question and shifting the burden on me, how about you make your point in full first and describe precisely how you evaluate this "catering to" Minerva's and Cindy's paths? Then we will have something tangible to apply to the rest of the discussion, instead of apparently expecting me to just somehow know what you think, when you can't be bothered to articulate it.

Yet another one of those, "you can't say that cuz you're not making" As if people can't speak their own minds on the matter. People can make their own reviews. No matter what you say, it won't shut people up.

Absolutely not what i said. If you want to fight strawmen then don't bother. It's a pure waste of both your and mine time.

For the record, what i actually meant wasn't "you can't say that" but "what you're saying is unrealistic [and thus naive and/or stupid]". This doesn't mean you can't say it. By all means, knock yourself out.

 

[Andrea9999]

As much as I would enjoy such a development I don't think Seymour would give up Lena that easily. And why should he? For money or wealth? Probably not.

He might... in order to go on living...after all....some sheiks will simply not be denied and he will have scant means to prevent them from fulfilling their desires in Dubai. EK can take this arc into a truly deepening erotic adventure. Especially if an incongruous elegance/filth motif is maintained.

Your avatar shows the intense depth of your lust.

I have only played one instance of the game. I would like to try another where Lena chooses the lust decisions but still stays away from actual sex except where Seymour is concerned. And a second where given the same except surrendering to a photoshoot done by Seymour with she and Axel. I saw a gallery with the latter title but did not open it to avoid spoilers.

I can just begin to visualize....

 

[Leongen43]

Beautiful image that you shared but she is missing it lacks a couple of accessories such as nipple piercings hooked to a chain so I can wear it lest it gets lost, right?

The photo session with Seymour and Axel has three ways. I'll tell you, it depends on whether you were negative or positive with Axel and a third party gave positive responses and some negative ones with both Seymour and Axel.

 

[Andrea9999]

Beautiful image that you shared but she is missing it lacks a couple of accessories such as nipple piercings hooked to a chain so I can wear it lest it gets lost, right?

The photo session with Seymour and Axel has three ways. I'll tell you, it depends on whether you were negative or positive with Axel and a third party gave positive responses and some negative ones with both Seymour and Axel.

I am ok with piercings, but I have eschewed tattoos; there is nothing more erotic in my view, than our smooth, pale ivory white flesh...accentuating our core deep vulnerability.

And thank you for the cryptic tips on an Axel-Seymour combination arc.
(Does doing that preclude accepting Seymour's proposal?)