VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

robrize2169 · Oct 29, 2023

i did have Lena fuck around with Robert, basically to keep her job for a bit, and then i had her dump his sorry ass after Ian beat his sorry ass...

Andrea9999 · Oct 29, 2023

Leongen43 said:
..... I abandoned her like a dog to her fate and in the worst way possible by the time Ian beats her up he's done. I don't want to bother Lena more anymore

You have mixed up some pronouns here, no?

Socrambus · Oct 29, 2023

SerHawkes said:
I think in all likelyhood Jeremy and Ian are going to be finals fighters, 1 vs 2 for the big money prize fight when all said and done.

Which will probably be in Chapter 16 maybe? Or 20 if EK wants to drag shit out with pointless crap and drama.

I wouldn’t be surprised if tournament rules are reworked. If top 3 are classified that would mean at least 5 competitors to make any sense, probably more. And with only one fight per month, you would get the tournament going over 4+ months, that’s a lot of time and you would need to add finals.

| Vee | · Oct 29, 2023

SerHawkes said:
I think in all likelyhood Jeremy and Ian are going to be finals fighters, 1 vs 2 for the big money prize fight when all said and done.

Which will probably be in Chapter 16 maybe? Or 20 if EK wants to drag shit out with pointless crap and drama.

I wouldn't be surprised if Mark happen to appear in tournament as a fighter.

Just a hunch

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Socrambus · Oct 29, 2023

| Vee | said:
I wouldn't be surprised if Mark happen to appear in tournament as a fighter. Just a hunch.

Maybe Dave makes another cameo, he did jiu-jitsu, didn't he?.

yuvce · Oct 29, 2023

Socrambus said:
Maybe Dave makes another cameo, he did jiu-jitsu, didn't he?.

Considering the amount of GGGB cameos that are in the game, I wouldn't rule it out. But in this instance it would kinda make sense. As long as he's just an opponent you need to defeat and not what she did with Jack.

BlandChili · Oct 29, 2023

yuvce said:
Considering the amount of GGGB cameos that are in the game, I wouldn't rule it out. But in this instance it would kinda make sense. As long as he's just an opponent you need to defeat and not what she did with Jack.

Jack was an opponent you needed to defeat.

Lena just happened to lose.

fatpussy123 · Oct 29, 2023

On most saves I have Lena sleep with Robert, either to get the lena_bj stat high enough or to raise Lena's lust stat. Then dump him after.

RichietheReapa · Oct 29, 2023

Holly basically said my book sucks. Are there choices to get a more favorable review, and dialogue from her?

BlandChili · Oct 29, 2023

RichietheReapa said:
Holly basically said my book sucks. Are there choices to get a more favorable review, and dialogue from her?

Yes

fatpussy123 · Oct 29, 2023

RichietheReapa said:
Holly basically said my book sucks. Are there choices to get a more favorable review, and dialogue from her?

There's a book guide on the front page of this thread, basically there are different optimal combinations. I always use a specific combination because it's easy to memorize and saves me the trouble of checking the guide.

I always go fantasy-revenge book and the subsequent choices are always the ones with a red background. Then the ending is either "victory" or "sacrifice".

yuvce · Oct 30, 2023

RichietheReapa said:
Holly basically said my book sucks. Are there choices to get a more favorable review, and dialogue from her?

From MrBubu's ORS guide

Zero1994 · Oct 30, 2023

There is some character list like a wiki or something, I no longer remember who is who when they discuss here.
The images help me remember who is who.

And thanks

noturiah · Oct 30, 2023

| Vee | said:
I wouldn't be surprised if Mark happen to appear in tournament as a fighter. Just a hunch.

The curveball I'm thinking of is that Marcel is in the tournament. I'm not saying I'm expecting it, but I wouldn't be surprised.

Oh, and if Ian is dating Holly, Marcel tells him, "If I beat your ass, I want a date with your cute girlfriend..."

And even if Ian loses, Holly can still say no to the date. But if Holly's "be like Lena" stat is high enough, then Holly says yes.

And on the date...

Birdnman993 · Oct 30, 2023

RichietheReapa said:
Holly basically said my book sucks. Are there choices to get a more favorable review, and dialogue from her?

I was basically inspired by Berserk to make the book and the love never fails

Andrea9999 · Oct 30, 2023

Leongen43 said:
If I think I fixed it, it's because Chrome betrayed me again, the damn thing is my nemesis.

If you mean google translate, then try this: after translating, reverse the translation to see if it makes sense.

| Vee | · Oct 30, 2023

noturiah said:
The curveball I'm thinking of is that Marcel is in the tournament. I'm not saying I'm expecting it, but I wouldn't be surprised.

Oh, and if Ian is dating Holly, Marcel tells him, "If I beat your ass, I want a date with your cute girlfriend..."

And even if Ian loses, Holly can still say no to the date. But if Holly's "be like Lena" stat is high enough, then Holly says yes.

And on the date...

That would at least be interesting scenario than the bartending one.

Socrambus · Oct 30, 2023

yuvce said:
From MrBubu's ORS guide
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Regarding this, I think the "simulation" for the book quality used in the game is way too simplistic and arbitrary. It could be improved by adding a writing variable to Ian similar to Lena's blowjob skill. Everytime you choose Ian working in his book (or things like asking Holly for advice), it would be increased. And then Ian's attributes could be used in the writing of each part depending of what theme you choose. For example, in the book love interest part the charisma attribute could be used if you choose "romantic", the lust attribute if you choose "crude" and the wits attribute if you choose "metaphysical".

LoneWaker59 · Oct 30, 2023

Leongen43 said:
The truth is that I only used Robert to end Lena's drought but once I got far enough with Ian and Mike I abandoned her like a dog to her fate and in the worst way possible by the time Ian beats her up he's done. Robert I don't want to bother Lena more anymore

I always choose Robert at the beginning of the game just for the "Bad Jessika" variable to happen, later when you have the option to break up with him it's always funny to give it a chance but when he starts talking about Lena being his girlfriend in the middle of sex choose the "Dump Him" option.
This character is so boring that I compare him to Doug from Good Girl Gone Bad.

Samuel Hidayat · Oct 30, 2023

SerHawkes said:
I'm more affronted by the lack of Ian hooking up or even hanging out with Ivy than being a prude.

Not to mention both Robert and Mark don't add anything to the story or game other than to be used as a dildo. Not my cup of tea.

Mark can help Lena with their music career if things work out, so he's better than Robert already.

Socrambus said:
I wouldn’t be surprised if tournament rules are reworked. If top 3 are classified that would mean at least 5 competitors to make any sense, probably more. And with only one fight per month, you would get the tournament going over 4+ months, that’s a lot of time and you would need to add finals.

If it's a single-elimination tournament, at least 8 fighters are needed. Top 4 for the semi, and Top 2 for the grand finale.

Birdnman993 said:
I was basically inspired by Berserk to make the book and the love never fails

Of course. Casca enjoyed it, after all.

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