VN - Ren'Py - Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

Beautifully written story and characters. So many different paths that can be taken. Great writing. Great visuals and of course lots of sex. It really allows to indulge in your fantasy. The variation in characters and traits are pretty good.

Fantastic Art with No DIRECTION nor DEPTH

I wanted to like this game, and to an extend, I do, but this game fails to delivery on just about every expectation I had.

No place for romance in..

The game has you play through the daily lives of two of its MCs, Ian & Lena. And, for some reason it wants to connect the both of them as if they were bound by destiny. Which is obviously contradicted by every thing else in this story.
The premise of romance is simple. Both the MCs are struggling financially and emotionally. They should totally link up together so they can heal, right? Wrong!
Playing through the game, I couldn't at all tell where the chemistry was between the two protagonists. What was so important that these two should be together? Where was the string?
Lena was not an addition to Ian's life, and nor was Ian to Lena's. And it also doesn't help that you could control both the characters.
If you play Lena as intended, then you're playing as a depraved sex worker, drug addict and all around a massive red flag. Not much of a romance choice for Ian, is she?

No place for likeability in..

All the characters in this game are straight up unlikable, except for maybe Alison. The female LIs of this game are either selling their body for money, or trying to, or are simply argumentative. Is this really the extend of their depth?

The male LIs aren't any better either. All they wanna do is smash, and that they will with anything that breathes. They will act quite nice when Lena is sleeping with them, but will start being real sleazy and petty when they get rejected. I wonder how come Lena's side ended up this bad.

No place for bros in..

You heard it. Not only are there no likeable romance options, there aren't any likeable bros either. As Ian, you're left with : -

a) Perry - a dorky man child and a borderline creep. Who you have to take pity on so you don't steal his crush, btw.

b) Wade - A former stud, and now a full time slob. You'll stab him in the back and steal his disloyal girlfriend as the snake friend that you're.

c) Jeremy - A bro when it comes to assisting you in the GYM, but everywhere else you'll end up butting heads over who gets with the girls. i.e., the competition.

No place for depth in..

Yep. Unfortunately, this lacks any level of depth whatsoever. Not once I was invested in a single character or plot point in this game. As the male MC, you just go about trying to court all the women, and long behold, most woman here are an aspiring pornstar.
As the female MC, you go about trying fuck anything and everything. Man, woman, a pencil sharpener?! Doesn't matter, she will sleep with anyone and anything when in heat and need of money.

A place for sex in..

Unsurprisingly, this game had lots of sex scenes, if you don't mind holding CTRL through all the story so you're unaware of the brain functions of it's ludicrous characters.

A place for Karen in..

One of the characters in this game is an absolute Karen, but that later turns out to be a good thing, as the hate-fuck relationship is just all the hotter. So, good job on that!

No place for strong MCs in..

I wonder why Ian is the male MC. He is the least jacked man in this game, other than his two juvenile friends. Just about every fight he got in, the other dude was 2 weight classes above him. All I could think was this man about to get killed any blow to the head.
He also had to use maximum strength to try and win a match in wrestling against a onlyfans woman. Ever heard of bulking, Ian?

Lena isn't much better either sadly. Instead of finding better solutions to her financial problems, her ideas are - to write cliched lyrics and earn no money, launch an onlyfans account, or work with sleazy men and be sleazy for cash. Where's the strong will, Lena? Can't be bothered to work a 9-5 and learn a high-paying skill?

No place for execution in..

I know I have been rather harsh throughout this review, but that's because I know this game could've been a great deal better had it been executed properly. I can see that the developer tried to build something good but somewhere they got confused and lost direction.
The romance and the thread of destiny, as the tittle suggest, doesn't exist between the two MCs. All in persuit to give the player freedom of choice in place of niche. But rather, you get forgettable characters, even more forgettable story and all around a very shallow game.

I am tired of people writing negative reviews on bases of choices they made and thinking that's the whole game/story. The artwork is fabulous, and writing in aspects that every choice matters and has changes in dialogue and outcomes is very rare. I would have rated this one a 4, but now I'm rating it a 5 just to counter these negative reviewers. Yes, there are not as many crazy scenarios are not as her GGGB, but as audience grows the creator changes too. Pretty open-minded people in terms of kinks become narrow-minded while rating a game just because it does not have the story or type of character they like, regardless of the game being good.

There's a lot of variability in the choices you make and the different routes players can decide on. The stat system is well done and the different game modes make the playthrough both intuitive and free. This work is ingenuine and deserves the high rating from a plethora of perspectives. The back and forth between the people within a 'small world' all loops back and form a genuine rapport and subtlety to the relationship dynamic. All in all; a game that has cracked the shell of a game for an interesting experience that can't help you from wanting just a little bit more.

This game is at the very top of my list of favorite adult games. The artwork is all fantastic and the sex is very hot. The story doesn't do anything crazy. It simply follows the intersection in the lives of the two main characters. Yet it has enough interpersonal drama to keep things entertaining. As far as the mains they are fascinating enough that I am engaged with their personal stories. What ties it all together are the many choices throughout the game. I've repeatedly replayed this game to see where different paths might lead.

I had some really interesting moments that kept me hooked throughout my playthrough. I enjoyed exploring how both main characters connected with different people, even though there wasn't an option for gay relationships. It was satisfying to navigate their ups and downs with women.

One thing that stood out was how the game handled cheating. When both MCs got involved with Holly, it led to some real consequences. It felt realistic to see the female MC call out the male MC for cheating, which added depth to their relationship. The game treated all types of relationships—straight or gay—with equal care, which was nice to see.

I found the female MC's character development to be well done. Despite facing challenges, her reactions to different situations felt genuine and relatable. Her growth throughout the story, especially in how she dealt with emotional conflicts, made the narrative more engaging.

The game ran smoothly for the most part, with only minor issues like the open relationship option not always being reflected in certain conversations. These small issues didn't take away from my overall enjoyment of exploring the story and getting to know the characters.

Overall, I thought the game offered a compelling exploration of complex relationships and personal growth. The characters, including Holly, the male MC's nerdy roommate, and even the female MC's cat, were all well-rounded and added something special to the storyline. If you're into games that dive deep into moral dilemmas and focus on character-driven storytelling, this one will keep you engaged from start to finish.

The most branching options and replayability that I've ever seen in an AVN. The 2D art is very well done and a solid upgrade from Eva's last AVN, Good Girl Gone Bad, which I also love. I can't wait to see where this one ends up and I'm sure that I'll be playing it for awhile to explore all of the different paths that can be taken.

Story 2/5
Story is very vanilla and bland and theres no real plot to it, i would say its pretty much just normal every day life stuff so nothing that will blow you mind.

You play both an MC and a MFC, the male part are pretty good and fun to play, but the female part i dident enjoy at all since you have no freedom and no choice with her being a whore more or less doing nude photo shoots, nude drawing sessions, social shit, none of that is in my taste so she just wasent for me since i would have turned that shit down if i had any controle over how to play her and it feels a bit over the top that shes working 2 jobs and doing nude photo sessions and drawning sessions on top of that.

MFC also feels brainless complaining when people like her boss looks at her nude public photos i mean what does she expect? and if she dosent like it then why do it in the first place.....just another reason her character feels idiotic to me.

Also not really a fan of playing two MCs since it would take alot to like both of them and it feels weird playing MC who has Lena as a possible LI and also being in controle of her, kinda kills the point of romance when your romancing you self....it just dident feel right to me.

Worst part is it feels very forced since i have 0 interrest in Lena with my MC but MC loves her which ruins the game, having MC lusting and constantly thinking about wanting to date Lana and then keep picking option to not contact her or not date her just feels idiotic and again kills the story.
And it feels even more idiotic when your MC text Lena while your playing her? i mean wtf? its like your not in controle of any of them.

What really fucked up the story for me was Holly, she was the only one i really cared about and it pissed me off so much when she took nude photos with Lena, it made absolutly no sense since i picked every single choice for her NOT to be like Lena and those choices i also found annoying i mean why the fuck would i want to change the one normal shy girl into a whore like everyone else, thats the reason i dident want anything to do with Lena to start with and then game turns Holly into Lena no matter your choices i mean fuck that shit.

Also has alot of pictures missing where it justs the grey figure and say holly2b on it and had grey renpy screens as well and no not talking about the weird grey screen puzzle thats also in the game.

Girls 3/5
The art is pretty good and its nice that its diffrent from all the normal stuff, i just dident find most of them all that hot, thes not that much diversity in builds either.

Animations well sex scenes 2/5
Since game is not animated it loses alot of value and with boring and very shot single photo sex scenes they really arent worth anything.

Music 3/5
Average background stuff nothing special and none with lyrics.

Choice 4/5
Choices does matter in this one, but some seems weird when it comes to Holly like why shes turning into a second Lena when picking all choices against going that made little sense to me.

Its really only due to the choices being pretty well made in this one that i landed on 3 stars or it would have been a 2, since it was really just to boring and to vanilla for my taste and not being animated is also boring.

This game is 100% going on top of my favorites. This game is beautifully written and crafted as a game that give you best experience I've ever gotten through a VN

The sexual scene is beautifully portrayed in such erotic and realistic way that I absolutely honored the writer for such an amazing insight of what a sexual experience should look like.

Your decision DOES make a difference! And not something that will burden you with memorizing path, but rather a true experience of a character, and it's greatly executed.

The most realistic young adults in any VN I have played. This game explores a very accurate portrayal of mid-20s people finding themselves, dating, going to bars, working, gigging, etc. The story feels super natural and it's really easy to get wrapped up in.

The story on this game is 10/10, there are multiple branches to the story where you'll have to play it over and over to get. The art is not overly cartoon, nor is it too realistic, I feel this falls in the happy middle of sexiness and in game view. Even though this game is not finished, it really leaves me to look forward to the next chapter. Eva Kiss has delivered yet another masterpiece.

A very good game, decent art works and writing. Extremely rare for a game of this kind. It's almost feel like two visual novels merging into one. There are a wide range of characters with complex relationship between each other and many of your choices matter. Although the game is not fully complete but the available content already quite rich for it genre.

The Verdict
A must-play masterpiece. One of my top favorites and still somehow underrated. This game should be considered top 5 on this site.

The Good

• Amazing, unique art that was clearly the product of hundreds of hours of work. A breath of fresh air from most VNs.
• A creative decision to feature two protagonists that plays perfectly.
• Some of the best branching paths I have scene in a game. This is absolutely a game to play through "blind" first, then play it again and try to do as much different as possible, and then look at the walk-through and be blown away at the options at your disposal.
• Hot, hot, hot sex scenes with the perfect amount of build-up.
• A charming set of diverse characters. Two protagonists works amazing here, and I frequently found myself realizing that I was interacting with characters differently depending on which character I was playing which is such a cool thing to experience.
• Great environments and sound design. Just a beautiful game.

The Bad

• It feels like there should be a bit more of a reason why the two MC's are supposed to be together. It's obvious that this game is supposed to be a dynamic, variable story of how that comes to be, but there are routes here where the "red string" gets stretched very very thin, particularly if you're playing full Chad Ian and full slut Lena. The game functions perfectly when you're playing either character in a more demure role (the Ian NTR route is particularly hot, if you're into that), but you can definitely reach a point where your suspension of disbelief is stretched that these two are meant for each other when they're both fucking everything in sight, making money hand over fist and generally loving life.

+ interesing characters, all of them have different personalities
+ good music, especially during lewd scenes
+ simple story
+ plenty of choices and relationship combinations
+ perfect game for ntr fans - this content is well done here

- 12 long chapters and cheating still don't have any consequences, it's high time to lock some of routes because of that
- Ian is really boring MC, just a simple guy and nothing more. Axel or even Mike would be much better in this role. Lena is also not better, great replacement for her would be Ivy, who is much more interesting
- open relationship between both MC's is poorly done, there is only one sharing scene (3some). Everything else is classic cheating and not sharing
- for some magical reason game doesn't consider lesbian sex as cheating
- romance it's not so good. I don't feel any real connection between characters, not to mention a good touching moments

I expected much more from this avn, especially when it comes to open relationship stuff or nicely done throuple. 3 stars from me

I rarely leave reviews, but in this case I want to share this with you. (Written for version 12 Alpha)

- Main characters: Having two main characters at first seemed like a very controversial decision to me, but as the game progressed it became really interesting! Each main character had an interesting story, and when switching over there was no feeling: “Damn, I’m back to a boring story again,” but rather like when watching an interesting series, where each episode ended in the most interesting place, and that’s cool!
- Variability of solutions: Undoubtedly, this is one of the key features of the game. This game is missing a sign at the beginning that says, “Your decisions affect the story,” and that would be absolutely true. (unlike many other games). But this also has disadvantages, some decisions that affect the plot may be far from their result. So, playing on chapter 11, I could see the option blocked due to the fact that I made a different choice in chapter 3. Going back and going through everything again is not the best solution, but that is the reality.
- Characters: Oh my god, it’s so wonderful to see beautiful main and secondary characters. Without gigantic and unnatural tits and dicks! Some games really lack this. So I would like to note that they are all well written and (often) interesting to listen to.
- History: It exists and it doesn’t bother you. You are not initiated into some kind of global conspiracy or useful things, but this does not make it any worse, perhaps even better considering that now all the games around are “the main character is the center of the universe.”

- Sex: It’s worth mentioning this point separately because many people are interested in it (for me too). I have rather contradictory thoughts on this matter, but let's take it in order. If we removed all the points above from the game and left only the sex scenes, then I would mark this point as “Bad”. Static pictures (occasionally moving) that are supported by text have never caused a storm of emotions in me, but considering them in the context of the story and specific characters, this can be quite good. Also, during intimate moments, we sometimes have access to some options that can change the scene a little, but only a little (which is sad). I would also like to note that all character customizations (piercings, for example) are displayed correctly during these scenes and this is truly cool! Overall, if you rate the game as a sex game, I would rate it 3/5, but that's only if you're playing it to jerk off.

- Visual style: As I noted earlier, the game does have beautiful characters and backgrounds, but there is another side to it. The game looks more like Japanese novels, where when talking you see only a static picture of the characters (with changing emotions) and the background. In addition to sex scenes, the game has a couple of unique pictures for the situation, but you can count them on the finger of your hand. ALSO, I wanted to note that often in unique pictures the characters are only vaguely similar to themselves, I don’t know if I’m the only one with this problem, but throughout the game I was haunted by this situation. By the way, this is one of the reasons why I gave the sex scenes only 3 out of 5, because during a normal conversation with you there is one character, and during sex scenes it is completely different! At the moment I consider this the biggest problem of the game, but it’s unlikely that it will be fixed)

What the game lacks: It certainly lacks a little more fetishes to reach a larger audience. I would like more work on the love lines! (although she is not bad anyway) For example (!! there may be spoilers further!!).
It so happened that for Cindy’s love route, the main character must break up with Lena, but in return we get not exactly what I expected, namely several sex scenes, and that’s all... I didn’t leave the main character for this! I want more development of the character, and in light of the last chapters, it may be that she’s actually cheating on me with Axel...

Let's sum it up.
I will definitely continue to follow the game and play new updates, but not for the reason of 18+ content, at the moment I am interested in the story and character development, as well as variability. I hope the author continues to create interesting moments and reveal more characters.

Another great game by Eva Kiss. Art is much better when compared to their last game. The story is just as great as GGGB and has about as many routes as it did. Have played it countless times already and it is not even completed.

I have tried playing it repeated times. People seem to love it. I loved GGGB, the previous game from Evakiss. This one... feels boring and vanilla. It lacks a hook other than "sex". The art is ok but nothing incredible, the writing is plain and simple.

The author is trying to create a sitcom parody here, almost as sanitized as the real sitcomes.

Don't get me wrong, this is a competently made game with a lot of ambition in some areas, if you like sandbox style games you'll probably like this, just be a little patient about.

But when compared with other similar games, it lacks that spice.

On the way to become one of (if not THE) best dating sims ever created. Everything is so well done here, you can tell the people behind are very experienced.
I can only congratulate over and over again. Launch this bad boy on steam and collect your very well earned revenue.

Not as great as GGGB but a very good game with a good story and won't say complex characters but they're not dumb either like most of the adult games...

NTR is optional, so that's good, drawing style is also great but evakiss is very slow in progressing the story, that's the only major con and reason for 4 star review. Or else it deserves 5 stars

Our Red String [Ch. 12 Prologue Full]

Pros:
+ Intricate connection between characters
+ Two unique characters perspectives to view events from
+ Story narrative can be shaped and controlled from two sides
+ Choices actually matter and change many events and character development, personality, and looks
+ A lot of content, many possible paths and ways to play the game
+ Dialogue and story is well written

Cons:
- Art style might not be for everyone
- Art consistency feels off at times


This game was a bit of a surprise to me. The art style wasn't necessarily what I prefer, and yet the game grew on me the further and further I went into it. I now have two completely different playthroughs and have a third one planned.

Without spoiling the game too much, the game allows you to see the story unfold from two different perspectives and shape the story and character development from both sides. You can even affect or influence how a character changes their looks and corrupt their personality and see it unfold from the other protagonist's perspective, for example.

You can do a fairly faithful, vanilla run through where you try to be a positive influence to your friends and the community. Or you can corrupt everything including both protagonists, or have one side corrupt and one side good, or vice versa. The possibilities seem quite limitless!

The game is unique in how you can control the narrative from two different angles and the story and dialogue are all well planned and written. Worth checking out even if the art style might not necessarily be for you. Give it a shot!

Overall Rating: 9.0/10