VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[Gicoo]

The Ivy army,all 5 of them.

Still more than the amount of men who our Superslut Ivy will fuck in this game.

 

[DeemLeem12]

While i do agree with quite a lot of what you are saying,. I think you err in the depiction of romances in female public books. You can check any YA novel catered to women, and you can see the characters tropes in this female oriented novel. I mean, you can check wattpad which is infested with these novels.
And something more, what's funny about this is that the most cliche and degrading stuff towards women is usually written by other women. It is what it is. I mean... you can see the authors of twilight or 50 shades of grey are guilty of this.

50 Shades of Grey, despite its focus on BDSM and such, is actually a lot more intricate in its romance than ORS. The main character in 50 shades isn't getting debased like with Lena. Even with Anastasia serving as a sub, the male lead is way more endearing to her than with the males (Ian excluded) are to Lena in ORS. YA novels catered to female sexuality are very different from ORS's depiction of its female lead. This really just screams 'men writing women' which hey, we're in F95, we see a lot of this in other games too. Just look at how female MCs are portrayed in a lot of the games here. And I'm all up for this, I don't go to F95 to read good romance or plot, I'm here for the kinks. I just hoped that things were more transparent and open.

 

[Blurpee69]

50 Shades of Grey, despite its focus on BDSM and such, is actually a lot more intricate in its romance than ORS. The main character in 50 shades isn't getting debased like with Lena. Even with Anastasia serving as a sub, the male lead is way more endearing to her than with the males...

Did we read the same book? Dorian is kind of an abusive shit at all times to Ana, and even towards the end when Ana has "healed" him her primary function is to still manage his emotions for him.

 

[rex234]

I often shit on managers but watching the time needed to release one update for thi game I understand now that we need them

 

[Gicoo]

In GGGB, we saw Jessica fucking Dave, Jack, Eric, Arthur, Kevin, Tyrones gang and random porno actors. A few others are referenced.

In ORS, we saw Ivy sucking Jeremys dick and touching Ian. Mike? Reference. Mark? Reference. Billy? Not yet. Axel? No. Jack? No. Ian and Jeremy, who are engaging her for eleven chapters? Mayyyyyybe~

 

[Leongen43]

In GGGB, we saw Jessica fucking Dave, Jack, Eric, Arthur, Kevin, Tyrones gang and random porno actors. A few others are referenced.

In ORS, we saw Ivy sucking Jeremys dick and touching Ian. Mike? Reference. Mark? Reference. Billy? Not yet. Axel? No. Jack? No. Ian and Jeremy, who are engaging her for eleven chapters? Mayyyyyybe~

You better not make those comparisons with Jess and Ivy or her followers are going to get worse because of the little heterosexual content they received from Ivy yet, right? if they have to wait when it happens will they need viagra?

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[dobzzz]

Damn I really hoped the update would come out today

 

[varpep]

I get the impression that Emma is very into Ian. She even says she prefers him to Jeremy (which is not saying much but...). Do you think Eva might add a romantic path with Emma in this update? Ian better sleep with one eye open if Perry ever finds out what he and Jeremy are up to or he might end up sleeping with the fishes or worse, on the streets.

 

[Leongen43]

I get the impression that Emma is very into Ian. She even says she prefers him to Jeremy (which is not saying much but...). Do you think Eva might add a romantic path with Emma in this update? Ian better sleep with one eye open if Perry ever finds out what he and Jeremy are up to or he might end up sleeping with the fishes or worse, homeless.

You're right and I would love for it to happen in the update because when I started playing the title it was Emma with whom I wanted Ian to have a serious relationship but the reality was that it couldn't be done, it's special because with Emma you can have anal sex unlike any other. woman of the game, right?

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[varpep]

You're right and I would love for it to happen in the update because when I started playing the title it was Emma with whom I wanted Ian to have a serious relationship but the reality was that it couldn't be done, it's special because with Emma you can have anal sex unlike any other. woman of the game, right?

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I agree but Cherry might be a close second then we have Lena who is no where close (Alisson fans punching the air rn cause their queen can't do anal). I hope Lena and Cherry can bury the hatchet so Ian can invite Cherry to an anal foursome with Lena and Emma.

 

[Leongen43]

I agree but Cherry might be a close second then we have Lena who is no where close (Alisson fans punching the air rn cause their queen can't do anal). I hope Lena and Cherry can bury the hatchet so Ian can invite Cherry to an anal foursome with Lena and Emma.

I agree, the differences between Cherry/Lena are because they were both tricked by Axel's neanderthal, I guess if they could clarify the differences between them and ORS being a porn game what better way to end than with a hot threesome between them, yes Ian he gives Cherry an anal creampied Lena gives Cherry creamy rimjobs and to finish with a creamy French kiss, will it be hot ? it will be very if it happens like this

 

[ffive]

I agree, the differences between Cherry/Lena are because they were both tricked by Axel's neanderthal

That's not true: Cherry and Axel were both tricking Lena together. Cherry admits as much to Ian, confirming what Lena has told him.

This is also why there's not much chance for reconciliation between these two. It'd be like expecting Ian to make up with Mike so Gillian can have a MMF threesome.

(not to say it's impossible, but, ehh)

 

[Leongen43]

That's not true: Cherry and Axel were both tricking Lena together. Cherry admits as much to Ian, confirming what Lena has told him.

This is also why there's not much chance for reconciliation between these two. It'd be like expecting Ian to make up with Mike so Gillian can have a MMF threesome.

(not to say it's impossible, but, ehh)

The dialogues that I read Cherry say that she was not very clear about the relationship between Axel/Lena (there are other types of relationships besides monogamy) and when she learned the truth of the damage she did to Lena without knowing it, she walked away from the two of them and That is why he feels guilty even when the culprit is Axel who took advantage of the situation.

A threesome between Lena/Ian/Cherry really interests me because it would be hot to see but a threesome between Gillian/Ian/Mike I am not interested, why would I want Ian to have sex with the skinny backstabbing bitch with no ass and tits Gillian who is less attractive than Louise?

 

[yuvce]

The Ivy army,all 5 of them.

Still more than that homewrecker you worship.

 

[ffive]

The dialogues that I read Cherry say that she was not very clear about the relationship between Axel/Lena (there are other types of relationships besides monogamy) and when she learned the truth of the damage she did to Lena without knowing it, she walked away from the two of them and That is why he feels guilty even when the culprit is Axel who took advantage of the situation.

I have no idea where you read that dialogue. Maybe it was something in another game..? Between Cherry's own admission and Lena's earlier description of events, the game makes it clear this wasn't the case at all:

    ch "Suddenly finding Lena there, though... It caught me completely off guard."
    ch "I guess she told you about our history, right?"
    i "I know a bit... She learned Axel was cheating on her, and the girl he was sleeping with was you."
    "Cherry took a deep breath before answering."
    ch "Yeah. That's right."
    ch "I'm not proud of what I did. Not at all. Lena has every right to hate me."
    menu:
        "I'm sure you didn't do it on purpose":
            i "I'm sure you didn't do it on purpose. Axel probably kept that he was dating Lena from you, or..."
            ch "No. I knew they were together from the beginning."
            ch "I knew what I was doing... And did it anyway."
// ...
            i "And... why did you do it?"
            ch "I just..."
//...
    ch "I guess I was in love."

There's no mention whatsoever about "types of relationship" and even if there was, it'd be just a bullshit excuse -- Cherry was sleeping with Axel while he was in relationship with Lena, and she was pretending to be Lena's friend while she was hiding the cheating from Lena until she got found out. If she genuinely thought Lena and Axel had open relationship she wouldn't be hiding the fact she's fucking him behind Lena's back.

She also didn't walk away from anything afterwards, in fact she was hoping that with Lena out of the picture Axel would make her his girlfriend.

 

[DeemLeem12]

Did we read the same book? Dorian is kind of an abusive shit at all times to Ana, and even towards the end when Ana has "healed" him her primary function is to still manage his emotions for him.

Grey is emotionally unavailable at the start but is shown to be sweet at times and demanding on others and she has a hard time reading him. This is why Anastasia was thinking how Grey has multiple shades (hence 50 shades of grey). Part of the appeal for Grey was his 'bad boy' vibe (and also being a billionaire who showered Anastasia with gifts and helped with her financial situation). It was even stated Grey 'doesn't do love, he fucks' but after finding out that Anastasia is a virgin, he decided to 'make love' to her. And still he is shown to be caring and goes after her when she decided to cut things off at start. Part of his journey is letting himself be vulnerable and letting his childhood abuse release its hold on him. Just compare how despite the books' focus on sexual freedom and 'bad boy being kinky and hot', the depiction of the female lead and her dynamic with her 'dom' is still more romantic and intricate than Lena's path of 'bad boys'. And 50 shades is a middling smut despite its popularity.

EDIT: Also who the fuck is Dorian? Are you confusing Christian Grey from 50 Shades of Grey to Portrait?

 

[lucadiadis]

Here I am on a porn game forum discovering that not only horny dudes actually read hockey mums romance novels, but they also analyze them. It is also at least the second time (first time was me) that Oscar Wilde is referred to on this thread. Makes sense though, since EK cites him (without naming him) in ORS during Ian/Cindy first sex scene, but still, life is weird.

 

[Andrea9999]

Here I am on a porn game forum discovering that not only horny dudes actually read hockey mums romance novels, but they also analyze them. It is also at least the second time (first time was me) that Oscar Wilde is referred to on this thread. Makes sense though, since EK cites him (without naming him) in ORS during Ian/Cindy first sex scene, but still, life is weird.

I know; I still cannot get over it. I bet 80% watch the American soap operas.

 

[lucadiadis]

I know; I still cannot get over it. I bet 80% watch the American soap operas.

"Fetishes: Cuckold, BBC, Loli, Corruption, and Little House on the Prairie"

 

[Birdnman993]

That genuinely sucks. I feel like I'm one of the few people that actually really liked Jasmin.

Sad, I liked the romance she had with Ash without Jack involved although it lacked a little more development.