VN - Ren'Py - Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 ALPHA] [Eva Kiss]

I am going to keep this short. I think EvaKiss is very talented and this is one of the best erotic games I have played. The writing and art is excellent and every character involved in the plot is interesting. The choices actually matter n the game and the branching paths makes the replay value great. The lewd content is also varied and hot and most people should be able to find something that interests them.

I don't really like games with multiple main characters because they lose a lot of immersion.But this is EVAKISS's work, and the quality and the plot are superb.Everything has two sides, and if you try to cater to a larger audience, you lose the character.

Incredible VN. Great graphics and a good story. Character development is done well and story progresses in logical fashion. Lots of different paths, too. Additionally, the project develops at a rapid pace with regular updates. What more can you ask ?

Strong recommendation

You did it again! Awesome story! Awesome art and great choices. I love the buying sex toys as well as clothes. Oh and can't forget adding a second antaganist. This game/VN is epic. Of course, it's not GGGB, but it would be in my top ten. I can't wait for more! I'm officially addicted. Oh, can't forget I was VERY dissapointed when I thought you messed up the coding!! Why would your release it, if it wasn't QA'd? How could you sink so low and F up the follow up release!? Then... Whoa... What? Oh. Damn, you got me! Great humor twist! Loved every aspect of this one.

Review of the game as of version 0.8.

This is the second EvaKiss title I've played and enjoyed. The first is "Good Girl Gone Bad," which I enjoyed enormously. This title, "Our Red String," (ORS) shares many similarities with "Good Girl Gone Bad," (GGGB) but is even better in a few crucial elements. The first is artwork. Both titles utilize original 2D art, but the artwork in "Our Red String" is more colorful, more vibrant, and even contains some animations, which "Good Girl Gone Bad" lacked.

While GGGB's MC was a young woman, in ORS there are two MCs--one man and one woman. Their lives and circles intersect each other in different ways, depending on the decisions you make, and they can potentially engage in sexual relations with just about any other character in the game. I suspect that by the end of the game, even some characters not currently available as sexual interests may become sexual interests. If you only like games with big, over-the-top stories and dramatic plots, you may end up disappointed. ORS simply presents a period of these characters' lives as they try and establish careers, make ends meet, and find sex and love. It works compellingly because the dialogue is natural, humorous, and engaging. EvaKiss has a good instinct for story, relying on conversation and visuals to convey progress without having to resort to exposition. Occasionally EvaKiss reveals herself (or himself) as a non-native speaker of English (use of the word "reunion" to mean "meeting" hints that EvaKiss is French, perhaps Spanish or Portuguese), but the overall quality of English is good enough that it doesn't detract or distract from the experience.

Arguably the most fundamental, if not most important, aspect of any AVN is the lewd scene. ORS starts off a bit slow in that respect, but it quickly offers a ton of very erotic scenes and scenarios. The game would benefit greatly from a scene gallery, so that the scenes can be replayed on their own.

Speaking of "replays," ORS is highly replayable. Choices players make create a lot of branching stories, each with their own romance, sex, and other options. I played GGGB four times and still didn't reveal all the possible story variations and endings. ORS is not yet finished, but it's clear at this stage (0.8, so around 80% complete?) that the same will apply here.

I'll mention here a few other criticisms. They didn't diminish my enjoyment of the game, really, but they did cause me to roll my eyes once or twice. Among them, EvaKiss clearly relies heavily on some well-worn porn tropes and racial stereotypes. And one or two design choices made the game confusing--I'm thinking of Ian's psychedelic brain trip, in particular, which I needed to access a walkthrough to figure out.

On the other hand, it was refreshing to see a female protaganist making and enjoying sexual choices without being "corrupted," a convention I generally dislike, as women in titles like this tend to be punished if they enjoy sex, while men tend to be rewarded. The protaganist in GGGB can enjoy a few wonderful endings, even at her most lascivious, and I hope ORS allows for the same possibilities.

Our Red String is on a completely different level to anything else I've tried in this genre. The art work is very good, but first and foremost the writing is exceptionally well done.

The characters are realistic and well written; they're often based on tropes, but they're fleshed out to the extent that they feel like realistic individuals. Eva Kiss is also very good at patiently building up the plot and the different relations. Instead of being tempted to throw in a sex scene between two characters for the instant gratification, most often she lets the attraction between them build up gradually, waiting for the right moment, which makes the sex scenes in this game far hotter than in most other games.

The amount of meaningful choices and different paths, which themselves have several variations, is also very impressive. Even though the game isn't anywhere near finished, it's already possible to play it a bunch of times for different outcomes.

All in all it's just an extremely well written and executed game.

By far one of the best VNs I have ever played. Love the story, characters as well as the art! I find almost all of the characters very lovable. This game allows so many playthroughs and is definitely worth your time. Great work and I'm looking forward to more content.

What on earth can I say to do this game justice? All I can say is that Eva Kiss and team did it again and has a made an amazing story. This story is much deeper than Good Girl Gone Bad, and even features some characters from that game which is great.

This game is deep on multiple levels. The characters are constantly intertwined and interact with each other. Both main characters have quite many friends that they hang out with, interact with and share their thoughts with. In turn these various characters meet the two main characters and so different dynamics are made. I really like this, as it creates a deep story.

Eva Kiss is also an amazing writer. This is shown through playing as two characters who interact with one another. It takes a steady hand to not mess such a project up - especially when it translates into a game.

The characters have real personality, feelings, aspirations, ambitions, desires and so on. I find that all the character are very distinct - at no point did I have to ask myself who the hell "Ivy" is, because the characters developed well enough for them to stand out. This is shown in multiple ways, but mostly through their personalities. For instance Ivy and or no-nonsense straight forward comments, Louise and her insecurities, Perry with his stuttering thoughtfulness. I could go on, the point is that all the characters are really well made, and it that is shown throughout the story. It makes them very relatable.

The story is exceptionally well written. I'm not just talking in terms of choices of which there are many. I'm talking in terms of how it is written. The different characters "speaks" in different ways and this is excellently shown through the writings. It's just so well made.
It is also really nice where different options becomes available or disable depending on your decisions. Like, do you support your friend in some heated arguement or do you end up sleeping with a girl he likes etc? Likewise, the decisions you take on the romantic paths has great influence on the game. Afterall these are characters with their own feelings and relations with one another. The excellent writings makes it interesting to follow the various characters as you help shape their lives through your actions.

Fair warning; the art is beautiful, but this is not a game where you immediately can unbutton your pants and expect to find some hot scenes 5 minutes in. This is not that type of game. Sure you can fast track, but then you basically lose out on all the good stuff that makes this game so amazing.

Anyway, here's a quick summary:

The Good:

• Beautiful art and there's plenty of it.
• Deep and meaningful story - you even get to play from two perspectives.
• Fleshed out characters with distinct personalities. You really get to feel the friendship with your buddies.
• Decisions that matter and have a lasting impact.
• All the characters are inter-related and interacts with one another inside the story.
• Awesome writing which really helps to outline the characters.

The In-Between:

• It would be cool with more clothing options - especially for Ian.

The Bad:

• I cannot think of anything.

One of the best porn game/vn i ever played, the only comparsion is GGGB from the same dev, the quality of writing and pictures are awesome, the amount of choices u have for both protags is great, the only thing i dislike is the fact u heavily pushed into Ian/Lena relationship, and i feel weird putting them together since i control them both(i dont do self inserts but i still have some connection to them and i'm just not into this), but u can eventually put a stop to this without ruining the friendship so its all good, i like all the girls in this game, but my favorite for Ian is Alison and Minerva, if dev put a real root with good ending for the boss if i'm honest i will just "give" Allison to Jeremy, i just love this milf and this is the real one and not some "i'm a 40 years old milf that looks like 20", Allison is awesome too ofc, on Lena side i really like Louise, but Lena relationship with her seems quite shallow as of 0.8 update so idk, i feel kind of bad for her when i "date" her, since Lena doesnt seems to care about her, the Jeremy thing is a nice side dish but only for fap imo, i did not care much for other guys to be honest, since Robert is kinda trash(idk why he has so many scenes, but they are alright , he just so shallow and plain), and Mike only good for a fap since he is a cheater because of u, so i dont take him seriously(what to stop him from ditching u for the next pussy now that he know how its like to cheat), but i take this plot too seriously, but that the thing about this game, its not just a porn game, in some games u just skip the text since its garbage anyway, but its not the case here, so that a definitive plus, u really care about those characters when u play it, just like u cared about Ashley from GGGB, forgot to mention Holly, she is alright, and the dev definitly sets her up for a future poly or something(she also kinda feel like a dev self insert, but that just my opinion), i romanced her with Lena, cant tell u much on Ian side since i just like Allison and the boss too much to pay her any attention on that end, i reccomend this game to everyone, even if u are not into reading, just play it, u will like it i assure u, good luck to the dev with future updates and other projects!

Just like its prodecesor this game is full of choises. Choice that can make or ruin who wants to sleep with and it follows. If you aren't fully devotion to wooing a girl you ain't wooing her ever. It is much slower pace than Girl Gone Bad though. Which can be considered both strength and weakness.

Worth mentioning that it provide both male and female pov of the story, so thats always interesting. The girls and boys look good, no ugly buisness or netorare. Overall i would enjoy it anytime. But not lust after it.

Best game I've played. Came for a good fap and got not only that, but also a great story that kept me entertained throughout the whole play-through. I am looking forward to the updates, and I highly recommend it.

GGGB was absolutely incredible, probably my favorite game that I've played and Our Red String has the potential to be even better.

I've played up to .8 and it's fantastic. ORS is pretty ambitious when you think about it and Eva Kiss is fucking nailing it. To have multiple protagonists with their own individual yet converging story lines. To have both characters have a multitude of different choices with the possibility of changing the plot at each turn. It's incredible from a creative and technical standpoint.

The artwork in ORS took a step up from GGGB yet it still carries the same draw that made GGGB stand out as unique and beautiful.

As a note, .8 carries an incredible amount of content. A soft guess of about 6-8+ hours in a single play-through.

Compared to the author's previous game, the narrative is unfocused and somewhat dragging. Quite a few superfluous systems add to the tedium of repeated playthroughs (the stats, the book writing, the songwriting, etc.). The more unconventional themes of the previous game are toned down to a pretty vanilla experience, where the most transgressive sexual motifs are its vaguely racist interracial scenes. To top it all off, there's a scene with jarringly offensive transphobic language, and a pervasive sense of problematic ideas informing the narrative.

All in all, pretty disappointing sophomore attempt by Eva Kiss.

I'd initially downloaded this AVN because the story seemed a bit interesting. Never in my wildest dreams had I expected to find such a literary gem on an erotic site. The writing, the art(which is apparently hand-drawn, which deserves its own praise altogether), the way our choices actually seriously affect the story... it's almost unheard of to find an AVN like that.

This AVN is very unique. Every choice mattered and would be used further on in the story. I look back on my own playthrough, and see that if I'd made just one wrong(in my opinion) choice as Lena, it would have changed most of the future chapters and character interactions. That's basically unheard of in an Adult Visual Novel. I have a lot of favorites on this site that I've used just to pass the time, but speaking from an objective standpoint as a writer and artist myself, the only other AVN I can see competing with this from a literary standpoint, would be BADIK. That's not even a guarantee.

Your actions actually have consequences in this AVN. That's something that I wish other developers would use more in their own AVN's. You cannot just waltz around, screwing everyone as you please. The LI's are also not in nun-mode until you decide to sleep with them. If you want something casual, that's what you will get. If you want something serious, then you're going to have to work for it and believe that you may have to discontinue any casual relationships at that time to put more focus into your main relationship. It's frighteningly realistic.

I can go on for a few hours about this AVN, but basically it's an experience. It's unique and not something that you can find emulated in other AVN's on this site. You may find one or two trying, but none this successful. Every choice is connected or has consequences behind it. That alone puts this AVN on an entirely different level than most others on this site.

Plot: 10/10
Art: 10/10 (keep in mind that these characters are indeed hand-drawn)
Soundtrack: 10/10 (nothing unique, but great enough to the point that every song used perfectly fits the mood or situation it is being played in)
Characters: 10/10 (so realistic it's scary)
Dialogue: 10/10 (Also very realistic... like I can go out and witness similar conversations between friends of mine. The quality of dialogue in this AVN is matched by very few on this site)
Overall: 10/10

The story and the branches from choices are better than Telltale or other choice-based games. You actually feel like every decision matters, they don't all lead you to the same thing. The drawings are great as well, but doesn't really matter, the story and choices compensate for anything else!

Was uncertain at first but I grew to love the game. Characters are believable, it is well written and makes for good narrative experience. I like that it has some story and it isn't there to serve as filler between sex scenes. Those are hot too, though and quite variable and it certainly helps. Maybe the best game here overall.

Just perfect. Initially I was a bit apprehensive as I wasn't sure that artwork will interest me but how wrong I was. I loved it. I loved everything about the game.

The art style is unique and characters look great, writing is unbelievable & top-notch. What can I say that others have not said before. This is amazing work. Thank you Eva Kiss.

0.8
great story and believable plot. So much content for a compressed version at 110~ MB file. Along with the great art style there's a great story. One possible improvement was if instead of focusing on 2 protagonists, release 2 games with the 2 different protagonists.

A game where choices do matter is always welcome. Characters are fleshed out and importantly some grow on you over time. Unlike a lot of games where everyone feels set in stone from 0.01. Needs more romance outside of the main pairing but so far top quality.

Wow... just wow...

Dont know where to start.

I had one playthrough so far (v0.8) but i already saw so many options for many many playthroughs. I dont know how many different partners they can get... but i counted at least 6 possibilities for Lena and the same count for Ian... Thats really heavy. And as far as i see it, the ways the Protagonists can go are very very different paths. Never ever played something like this so far at f95.

No other game got so many different paths like this one here, as far as i know.

All Charactres are very different, some are loveable, others are just douchebags or sluts. But everyone seems to be important for the relationships between all the charactres and everyone seems to be intertwined with each other in someway. And most of these relationships will be discovered later in the game as a surprise... what keeps everythign really interesting.

The Art of the hand drawn graphic is really awesome and something else... absolutely top notch. I just love it.

The storytelling is just perfect, every charactre acts really believable i think. (at least in my playthrough) and every charactre has its very unique profile and act like it...

What stands out for me is the fact, that you cant bend the MCs. You have to decide what kind of person Lena and Ian are, and the skillpoint will set the frame how you can act inside of it... I got at some point that i had to kiss Cindy... cause i was getting to near her all the time, i didnt have a will-point at that point of the story and Ian acted just like this... he couldnt get the will together to resist this feeling... (i did a reload and played this thing a little bit different to stay faithful too lena than) and i must say, that was really good writing... it was absolutely plausible to me at this point in my playthrough that there was something buliding up between cindy and Ian, other games will give you than just the option like "go for it" or not... but here its different... how you act the entire game leads to different outcomes and most of the time you cant turn just things around with ONE choice. And thats really remarkable.

To summarize

Awesome look, awesome writing, awesome charctres, awesome charactre development.

This is not just a game, this is Art!

Cant wait for updates and for the game to be finished.