VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[Socrambus]

Unfortunately. I wouldn't mind a more concrete female dom, even if Eva decided to write her character as more playful as opposed to malicious.

Minerva seemed the easiest option but it didn't go that way. Although she only seems interested in chad Ian, maybe Ivy and/or Lena in certain paths like Ian cuck.

 

[BlandChili]

Minerva seemed the easiest option but it didn't go that way. Although she only seems interested in chad Ian, maybe Ivy and/or Lena in certain paths like Ian cuck.

The issue with Minerva is that she's ancient and while quite a few people like the mommy dom type, not everyone is into women in her age bracket. Issue with Lena is she's the playable character, when I mentioned having "a dom option" it was from the perspective that this option could be for either Ian or Lena.

Ivy could have worked but as with everything Eva seems to be gearing her in a submissive direction, at least for Ian, with how he can impress her by winning their "fight."
Can Ian retain her interest without that even?

 

[Socrambus]

Ivy could have worked but as with everything Eva seems to be gearing her in a submissive direction, at least for Ian, with how he can impress her by winning their "fight."
Can Ian retain her interest without that even?

I don't think so, but I was thinking in some scenario where she's not really interested in him but she dominates him during a threesome to assert dominance over Lena or Holly. That's why I mentioned some path similar to Ian cuck.

 

[problematic toy]

Oh my fucking God I'm so annoyed. I've spent what must be literal years now persuing the Lena X Holly path and finally, FINALLY they're admitting their feelings, they're coming out, they're going official or however you want to phrase it; and its all shown from fucking Ian's POV!

 

[FactualAligator]

Nah, wen is too busy with his jiujitsu grindset to worry about such things.

While you were all out there sucking and fucking, Wen studied the blade.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Chapter 13 Status Report

After finishing the prologue, I’ve continued making progress with writing the new chapter and working on the art. The illustrations for the next release are already in the hands of the colourist, and new backgrounds have been commissioned. I’m also working on illustrations for future releases, but right now, the focus is on finishing Seymour’s section. As for that, I think I’m over 50% done. Let me share with you some of the behind-the-scenes process:


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I'm sharing this excerpt because it’s simply a reflection on the events that took place in the last chapter. These kinds of passages are common and necessary as they provide coherence to the events and the character’s psychological and emotional response to them. In practice, it’s just a summary of the current state of the plot, but they involve a significant level of complexity. In this case, Lena reflects on her relationship with Ian and the events that took place in the last chapter. The key is to consider all the variables that need to be included and write an internal monologue that is coherent and highlights the essential points of the character’s thoughts and emotions, while avoiding excessive length or repetition. What makes it even more challenging is finding a way to weave the different segments into the same scene, allowing one reflection to lead naturally into the next, and then bringing them back together so the scene and the train of thought continue smoothly. It’s also crucial to choose the right moment to introduce these reflections, think about what needs to be reinforced, and determine how the character should react to each possible event. What I find especially challenging is that I can’t write any scene in a linear or straightforward way. I have to keep every possible outcome in mind, decide what information to provide, how to write it concisely and appropriately, and ensure all the loose ends are tied up so the scene makes sense in all its possible variations. This makes it impossible to write a scene from start to finish in one go, as my mind has to constantly cycle through parallel and interconnected possibilities. That’s why writing a section like this can take me an entire day, sometimes even longer.


In any case, I'm aiming to finish writing by the end of this month, and once the new art is delivered to me I will put this shorter update together and release it as soon as I can, while already making progress on the one to come after this one. As always, I'll keep you posted!

Update content that non-Seymour route players will recieve:

 

[BlandChili]

Did I miss something, or does v12.3.FULL/EPILOGUE actually provide almost no new content?

It wasn't meant to, supposedly. It's the final version of the alpha and beta releases of 12.3 with a bit of added dialogue.

 

[Ray_D]

Chapter 13 Status Report

After finishing the prologue, I’ve continued making progress with writing the new chapter and working on the art. The illustrations for the next release are already in the hands of the colourist, and new backgrounds have been commissioned. I’m also working on illustrations for future releases, but right now, the focus is on finishing Seymour’s section. As for that, I think I’m over 50% done. Let me share with you some of the behind-the-scenes process:


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I'm sharing this excerpt because it’s simply a reflection on the events that took place in the last chapter. These kinds of passages are common and necessary as they provide coherence to the events and the character’s psychological and emotional response to them. In practice, it’s just a summary of the current state of the plot, but they involve a significant level of complexity. In this case, Lena reflects on her relationship with Ian and the events that took place in the last chapter. The key is to consider all the variables that need to be included and write an internal monologue that is coherent and highlights the essential points of the character’s thoughts and emotions, while avoiding excessive length or repetition. What makes it even more challenging is finding a way to weave the different segments into the same scene, allowing one reflection to lead naturally into the next, and then bringing them back together so the scene and the train of thought continue smoothly. It’s also crucial to choose the right moment to introduce these reflections, think about what needs to be reinforced, and determine how the character should react to each possible event. What I find especially challenging is that I can’t write any scene in a linear or straightforward way. I have to keep every possible outcome in mind, decide what information to provide, how to write it concisely and appropriately, and ensure all the loose ends are tied up so the scene makes sense in all its possible variations. This makes it impossible to write a scene from start to finish in one go, as my mind has to constantly cycle through parallel and interconnected possibilities. That’s why writing a section like this can take me an entire day, sometimes even longer.


In any case, I'm aiming to finish writing by the end of this month, and once the new art is delivered to me I will put this shorter update together and release it as soon as I can, while already making progress on the one to come after this one. As always, I'll keep you posted!

Eva looking at players who did not decide to choose the seymour route.

 

[jimul18]

She said this Seymour update is 50% finished,zero chance it takes her 3 months to finish it....
Seems to me like this is going to be a "small" update,really curious what content is going to be there for the people who hate Seymour and dont want to do his route lmao

I think late October, early November is likely since it is essentially only one scene. As for the Dubai stuff, any extremely dark scenario is almost certainly never going to happen. It has been over 4 years and what have we got. One FFM and MFM threesome, a bit of anal, 0 DP or group stuff....sorry to disappoint but any depravity like the real life stories out of Dubai will be impossible also due to fear of getting banned on Patreon.

 

[Ray_D]

Can someone summarize ?

You: eva I did not choose the seymour route with lena, what content awaits me?
Eva: nothing.
You: what do you mean nothing and what am I supposed to do?
Eva: see you next year.
You: wait.

 

[Arata20]

You: eva I did not choose the seymour route with lena, what content awaits me?
Eva: nothing.
You: what do you mean nothing and what am I supposed to do?
Eva: see you next year.
You: wait.

Corrected.

See you in two years, summer 2026.

 

[Xupuzulla]

You guys are going to miss the trips to Rome,Japan and Dubai?

 

[Skylark21]

Eva was talking about releasing prologue and Seymour event only and not whole update itself. Content for those who are not on Seymour route will be released separately after that.
Coming update is going to be prologue + Seymour event only, one after that will include content for non Seymour route and Lena's week 2 and third update Ian's pov.

 

[Ray_D]

You guys are going to miss the trips to Rome,Japan and Dubai?

I probably won't miss it, but it'll be worse for the bastard who has to clean up when the unspeakable happens.

 

[Roderick2]

Hey guys, do you know if there is a way to make Lena sleep with Wade after "the ball accident" or it is a future content (maybe)?

 

[dolfe67]

Can Ian retain her interest without that even?

You can spend a will point to flirt with her on the phone in this chapter (without getting her gym event), don't know if it'll lead to something with her down the road.

 

[Ray_D]

Hey guys, do you know if there is a way to make Lena sleep with Wade after "the ball accident" or it is a future content (maybe)?

Make lena a slut and the option will probably present itself to you in the future.

 

[88stanford88]

Hey guys, do you know if there is a way to make Lena sleep with Wade after "the ball accident" or it is a future content (maybe)?

Yeah! Lena must "sleep" with everyone in the game ... but i don't know!

 

[ffive]

Hey guys, do you know if there is a way to make Lena sleep with Wade after "the ball accident" or it is a future content (maybe)?

No. If Ian is on cuck path in the evening Lena will stay behind and talk with Wade about (as she claims) possible MMF with him, but that's the extent of it, at least so far.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Eva was talking about releasing prologue and Seymour event only and not whole part 1 update itself. Content for those who are not on Seymour route will be released separately after that. Eva's going with split updates even further, now part 1 will be part 1.1, 1.2 I guess?

This would be biggest "fuck you" to the Seymour haters
Andrea999999999999999999999 eating good this year,in the end she was right about everything,Seymour is the travelling pimp.