VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[Nymphonomicon]

At the club, what if Holly went and got hammered by the bouncer?

I think she's still too timid for that, but I bet he could talk her into a handjob or oral.

 

[Arisushi]

I'm actually hoping Jeremy could be a good option, to subvert that BBC stereotype a little. Sure, he's got a monster cock, but maybe after Chapter 7, he and Lena can spend some time together and she actually gets to know him as a person and they grow closer.

If Jeremy actually turns out to be a "good" love interest for Lena, the game will have already peaked for me at that point.

"A womanizer, who doesn't break the bro code, but is also slowly falling in love with one of his closest friend's girlfriend."

There will be so many layers to this guy, that he'd probably be my no.1 character in the game.

but I'm more excited about a poly relationship with him and Holly, which had a lot of cute promise in the earlier chapters. Still hoping it happens. These games often have threesomes and "harems", almost never actual poly relationships.

YES!!! As of this moment, this is the story line I'm looking forward to the most, and I don't mind if Eva takes another 5 more chapters to build it all up.

 

[Nymphonomicon]

It is, but compared to Ian, maybe people feel like it is a little underwhelming in terms of pure sex or choices during sex scenes.

I feel at the end of the day, there will always be a divergence between scenes and story for Ian and the same for Lena because the game seems to be considerably different for each of them. Ian's story and gameplay feel more like a harem genre, whereas Lena is in the corruption genre. Harem games are more often than not about quantity over quality, but corruption games are about what is being done to the woman, not how many guys she's hooking up with.

 

[godoff95]

Yea I liked what Eva did with Jeremy in this chapter.

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I'm curios to know how the convo between Jeremy and Ian gonna be like.

 

[Nymphonomicon]

I'm not personally that interested in anything too vanilla with Axel myself. I have been sort of holding out hope that you might be able to do a "reversal" of their past dynamic.

I'd totally do a playthrough if Lena can dom Axel.

I feel Lena would fall into back into? submissiveness if she had a female friend coaxing her into it.

 

[lwahrleff]

I just want to praise this game in getting people to hope about the possible future paths it'll take. I had not even considered the possibility of Perry or Wade redeeming themselves and getting together with Lena, but that could be nice...

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Oh, that's interesting. I didn't think much of it when it happened, but you're probably onto something. Here's hoping it leads to something solid.

On a related note, I really hope Lena's better love interests are not defined by Ian's absence.

As someone who wants some solid romantic drama, I'd rather she struggled between choosing Ian or his friend(s), instead of just choosing them only if she's not into Ian.

That would be a pretty dull way to explore the multiple love interests concept.

Agreed, drama and potential cheating is already happening. Ian could be already in love with Lena when Lena blows Jeremy during the game. That's an example of some potentially messy (and fun!) situations that could arise soon.

 

[BlandChili]

I feel Lena would fall into back into? submissiveness if she had a female friend coaxing her into it.

That's most likely what would happen, especially given that being a sex slave is one the the fantasies you can make Lena confess to.

I was just hoping for something alternative. The reason why I'd like her domming Axel is because I don't really see anything attractive in returning to a relationship that didn't work out the way they lived previously. If Lena is really so submissive that she'd return to that dynamic with Axel, why would she have the character to break out of it in the first place?

That's just a conflict I'm not personally interested in exploring. Power to those that do, by all means.

 

[TamaMountain]

Anyone else find it amusing that Alison denounces pornography when talking to Perry, yet she can get really kinky with Ian?

Cindy did the same but hard to tell how wild she can get. One can hope .

 

[godoff95]

Anyone else find it amusing that Alison denounces pornography when talking to Perry, yet she can get really kinky with Ian?

Cindy did the same but hard to tell how wild she can get. One can hope .

The offender tends to condemn those who offend.

 

[Nymphonomicon]

That's most likely what would happen, especially given that being a sex slave is one the the fantasies you can make Lena confess to.

I was just hoping for something alternative. The reason why I'd like her domming Axel is because I don't really see anything attractive in returning to a relationship that didn't work out the way they lived previously. If Lena is really so submissive that she'd return to that dynamic with Axel, why would she have the character to break out of it in the first place?

That's just a conflict I'm not personally interested in exploring. Power to those that do, by all means.

I'm not saying I want Lena to fall back into a relationship with Axel, but I would like to see a storyline where she can come to realize that being a sub is what she wants and that the reason she keeps looking back on her relationship with him is because it awakened her desire to be a sub.

 

[Deleted member 40068]

I really hope we get some more dedicated Cindy content, not just with Ian but with Axel/Jeremy and even Seymour too. She’s way too hot inside and out to be showing up only once in a while!

 

[Cicica]

I feel at the end of the day, there will always be a divergence between scenes and story for Ian and the same for Lena because the game seems to be considerably different for each of them. Ian's story and gameplay feel more like a harem genre, whereas Lena is in the corruption genre. Harem games are more often than not about quantity over quality, but corruption games are about what is being done to the woman, not how many guys she's hooking up with.

Exactly. I think that the Lena side of things could be improved through options during sex scenes, like positions and such things more than anything else.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

I really hope we get some more dedicated Cindy content, not just with Ian but with Axel/Jeremy and even Seymour too. She’s way too hot inside and out to be showing up only once in a while!

Hopefully with Lena, too.

 

[TamaMountain]

Exactly. I think that the Lena side of things could be improved through options during sex scenes, like positions and such things more than anything else.

I think the opposite actually. Talking solely about the sex scene and positions, I think Lena's is a lot more varied whilst Ian's is more on the vanilla side, although it does seem to be ramping up.

 

[BlandChili]

I'm not saying I want Lena to fall back into a relationship with Axel, but I would like to see a storyline where she can come to realize that being a sub is what she wants and that the reason she keeps looking back on her relationship with him is because it awakened her desire to be a sub.

Oh no, I wasn't pointing fingers at you specifically, just that sub Lena/Axel isn't really something I personally find very compelling.

I'd love to explore Lena's submissive side through another relationship, especially a lesbian relationship personally. GGGB allowed Ashley to have a difference in her relationship with Eva for example, It'd be fun with the shoe on the other foot, so to say.

One thing I feel is often lacking in dom/sub relationships in this type of media is the more neutrally consensual type. Very often dom/sub devolves into complete surrender of one character, this is fine of course it can be fun to explore, but I'd love an option for a depiction as more of a game with a more general romantic overtone.

This will probably not happen, but I'd absolutely love the option of getting Lena involved as a sub to Cindy or Holly. Damn, corrupting Holly just enough to play around with Lena like that... GOTY 2021~

 

[Princess Groundhog]

That's most likely what would happen, especially given that being a sex slave is one the the fantasies you can make Lena confess to.

I was just hoping for something alternative. The reason why I'd like her domming Axel is because I don't really see anything attractive in returning to a relationship that didn't work out the way they lived previously. If Lena is really so submissive that she'd return to that dynamic with Axel, why would she have the character to break out of it in the first place?

That's just a conflict I'm not personally interested in exploring. Power to those that do, by all means.

Yeah same. However, I would like to see a sub Lena, and really the only viable option would be to go back to Axel, so I can see that happening for sure. For a dom Lena we have Louise already, I hope Eva takes that very far, like have her be her actual sex pet. I doubt we would see Lena domming a man, though I would love that. Apart from the pegging hints, I don't feel like Eva's very comfortable with submissive males, apart from cucking situations. Not to mention bi stuff.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Oh my goodness, cute timid Holly domming Lena would made me squee with joy!

And I can totally see Cindy turning up the bitchiness and domming Lena, maybe together with Ivy or something. Would love to see our beautiful Lena made to lick Cindy's and Ivy's heels on all fours as they stand over her

 

[NateGrey]

Yeah same. However, I would like to see a sub Lena, and really the only viable option would be to go back to Axel, so I can see that happening for sure. For a dom Lena we have Louise already, I hope Eva takes that very far, like have her be her actual sex pet. I doubt we would see Lena domming a man, though I would love that. Apart from the pegging hints, I don't feel like Eva's very comfortable with submissive males, apart from cucking situations. Not to mention bi stuff.

Regarding Louise, I'm hoping dom Lena will be able to make her pleasure Ivy. Given Louise's dislike for Ivy that would be really hot to see.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Regarding Louise, I'm hoping dom Lena will be able to make her pleasure Ivy. Given Louise's dislike for Ivy that would be really hot to see.

Very much yes. One of Lena's dares was to make Louise kiss Ivy's feet and she was disgusted and obviously refused. Would be great to get her over that feeling and maybe down the road even loan her out for Ivy to play with.