VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[jduk]

Most of the sex scene was hot, if we put aside that Axel is a creepy manipulative stalker. But that ahegao face was quite weird and it came out of nowhere.

I actually liked the way Axel just fucked her into submission without leaving any space... That was an alpha cock move. Lena liked it, she is a submissive slut by nature.

 

[jduk]

I agree with everything you said, but, I could also say don't go with her to see what she does?
If she's really into having a long lasting relationship with Ian, she wouldn't go with Jeremy (in case she did). I think when people are in love, they don't/shouldn't do that. That would be a red line for me. Maybe we will know in the next chapters.

Anyway, I'm biased in this discussion. When I "refused" Allison in the first night and she went with Jeremy, I lost all interest in her. Woman that go out looking to get laid never picked my interest.

If they willing to fuck with me i like them, if not fuck those bitches... Hehehe

 

[NekoNyaKotori]

Intressting so far (Played it on Android so had a lower version as the Current)

I would love more Yuri action (tryed to rush the males and played slowly on the female Protagonist and tryed to get her into girls ^.^

 

[Mr_Ainz]

About the Alisson situation (haven't played v8 or v9) but couldn't there be future scenes where Alisson talks to Ian about hooking up with Jacob on the trip? In the context Ian mostly focuses on Alisson.

I do agree that in an Alisson only route you should go with her on vacation but maybe she later regrets it saying that it was a mistake or something? Again I haven't played those scenes so don't really know how it went.

 

[lockerxx]

Seems like Eva is updating Lena's controversial expressions for the Beta, found these in her Discord. While I wasn't against the other ones it is true they looked a bit odd and I think these look considerably better

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Faces were Meme material

 

[kartolas]

About the Alisson situation (haven't played v8 or v9) but couldn't there be future scenes where Alisson talks to Ian about hooking up with Jacob on the trip? In the context Ian mostly focuses on Alisson.

I do agree that in an Alisson only route you should go with her on vacation but maybe she later regrets it saying that it was a mistake or something? Again I haven't played those scenes so don't really know how it went.

Sure, it will probably be up to the player to forgive her or not IF we ever find out if she went with them. I don't know if there would be any reason to not go with her, if one is fully committed to her, but to find out what she would do. As I said, maybe the dev missed that part of the story, who knows?

 

[jduk]

Who is Jacob??

 

[aifgamer]

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Yeah when I did the playthrough to check this, I found it interesting that Jeremy gives you this warning, but then you never get the phone call.

So there's definitely foreshadowing that he's going to move in on her, but the missing phone call seems to imply she doesn't take him -- this time.

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It might be a dick move, but she's not cheating on him because they haven't defined a relationship.

From a woman's point of view, asking a man on that trip and getting shot down would be a devastating blow to her ego. For a woman like Alison, who is already insecure, calling another guy to go instead is definitely a realistic and in-character move.

Edit -- Turning down the trip can knock your relationship meter down from full to half. It's a big choice.

 

[BlandChili]

Who is Jacob??

Jacob Rees Mogg. Leader of the House of Commons in the UK.

 

[kartolas]

Yeah when I did the playthrough to check this, I found it interesting that Jeremy gives you this warning, but then you never get the phone call.

So there's definitely foreshadowing that he's going to move in on her, but the missing phone call seems to imply she doesn't take him -- this time.





It might be a dick move, but she's not cheating on him because they haven't defined a relationship.

From a woman's point of view, asking a man on that trip and getting shot down would be a devastating blow to her ego. For a woman like Alison, who is already insecure, calling another guy to go instead is definitely a realistic and in-character move.

Isn't she seeing Jeremy when she asks Ian to go in a Vacation with her? I think I remember something like that on one of my first playthroughs.

 

[CoalPhelps]

In my opinion the choice made by Ian for his tales matters. Loser, Winner, Hero, imo Evakiss keeps the player's choices for the plot of the game. You choose Loser ? Cuckold path. You choose Winner ? You'll have a Rocco Siffredi's path.

This can be an interesting mechanic, but will obviously cause a lot of butthurt among players, especially those who skip these moments without really thinking about the book choices.

 

[AchedCroissant]

We need to save the ahegao face pic for posterity

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

100% agree. That shit was so random and out of place. Considering that Eva uses porn images and traces over them, she could have very easily picked another photo to draw over. Unless she deliberately added the face, which makes it even sillier.

But it still doesn't hold a candle to this face:
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The girls-bite-tongue-when-horny face is arguably my least favorite part of EvaKiss' work.

 

[oopsoops]

Axel is by far the best cock Lena has taken... Based at her expression at least... Poor Ian can't compete...

That's basically what I was saying on another post as well. Axel obviously fucked Lena better than Ian. She squirted!
However, Seymour also made Lena squirts and he didn't even freaking touch her!!!

 

[AchedCroissant]

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[dontcarewhateverno]

That's basically what I was saying on another post as well. Axel obviously fucked Lena better than Ian. She squirted!
However, Seymour also made Lena squirts and he didn't even freaking touch her!!!

Yeah. But that's just a love machine. And it won't work for nobody but her. (If only because sloppy used toys would be kind of gross).

That's practically like being a great sex partner by hiring your girlfriend a gigolo.

 

[TheBlackGungir]

What I feel though Eva might do is sure Axel obviously is her physical match and Seymour is obviously her Mental/Fetish match but whether it's Holly or Ian I feel though Lena may have a line talking about the "sex is great but that all it is sex" which could be dependant on whether you tore up the photo or not and also dependant are you and Ian or Holly in a relationship there is something more there than just sex. Scene with Axel was hot but man this dude is a Pure Creep and just seems like a bitch.

Seymour though is more interesting he taking away all options from her and this dude is smart enough and powerful enough to make her his granted he is the antagonist so he has to be but I wonder what she will do for the route where you turn him down it leaves an ominous feeling to it so maybe more pressure and most likely will have to use will not to fall and maybe more scenes with Emma and Lena.

Also, I hope for part two after the time jump they add at least one male character besides Ian that doesn't feel like a creep or douchebag like Ian gets Emma, Cindy, Cherry, or Alison, and Lena gets Axel, Robert, Mike, and Seymour and maybe Stan who is a lesser evil type of creep like damn I get Lena is bad and you want some corruption but does everybody in her story just want her pussy and in Ian route, he gets to at least try to have a true connection with somebody. One of my biggest pet peeves about this amazing game along with can we please just get a normal black guy, not a rapper or player as a black guy I get it easy fetish but just give me one black man who is just normal.

 

[oopsoops]

Yeah. But that's just a love machine. And it won't work for nobody but her. (If only because sloppy used toys would be kind of gross).

That's practically like being a great sex partner by hiring your girlfriend a gigolo.

Haha, maybe hire a gigolo to be the bull
I know it's a porn game but if we really engage into the story and characters, I think that scene shows Seymour is an expert sugar daddy who knows how to have fun. It's the whole circumstances, the astrosphere, the dialogue, and the way he controlled the remote that drove Lena to ecstasy. The toy was just a medium.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Haha, maybe hire a gigolo to be the bull
I know it's a porn game but if we really engage into the story and characters, I think that scene shows Seymour is an expert sugar daddy who knows how to have fun. It's the whole circumstances, the astrosphere, the dialogue, and the way he controlled the remote that drove Lena to ecstasy. The toy was just a medium.

Figured this argument would come up when I typed that reply. But lesbi honest. A good enough toy can make the right girl squirt, regardless of the quasi-sophisticated "I'm such an in-control, calculating daddy" Dos-Equis Man wanna-be sitting in the corner in his uber-played-up scotch-drinking pose. Your take is what Eva was going for in the scene, true. I'm just not sold on it with the Seymour she created.

Just like a fat, hairy grandma can get you off with the right porn and a well-lubed flesh-light if Eva wants to do an Ian version in the next update. Plus this grandma bakes cookies.... But with fucking walnuts, though. That bitch.

Sorry. In a random comment mood today.

 

[kartolas]

What I feel though Eva might do is sure Axel obviously is her physical match and Seymour is obviously her Mental/Fetish match but whether it's Holly or Ian I feel though Lena may have a line talking about the "sex is great but that all it is sex" which could be dependant on whether you tore up the photo or not and also dependant are you and Ian or Holly in a relationship there is something more there than just sex. Scene with Axel was hot but man this dude is a Pure Creep and just seems like a bitch.

Seymour though is more interesting he taking away all options from her and this dude is smart enough and powerful enough to make her his granted he is the antagonist so he has to be but I wonder what she will do for the route where you turn him down it leaves an ominous feeling to it so maybe more pressure and most likely will have to use will not to fall and maybe more scenes with Emma and Lena.

Also, I hope for part two after the time jump they add at least one male character besides Ian that doesn't feel like a creep or douchebag like Ian gets Emma, Cindy, Cherry, or Alison, and Lena gets Axel, Robert, Mike, and Seymour and maybe Stan who is a lesser evil type of creep like damn I get Lena is bad and you want some corruption but does everybody in her story just want her pussy and in Ian route, he gets to at least try to have a true connection with somebody. One of my biggest pet peeves about this amazing game along with can we please just get a normal black guy, not a rapper or player as a black guy I get it easy fetish but just give me one black man who is just normal.

I agree. Now that I saw all the girls names in line like that, I see that they all have some strong flaws in their characters, even more, Lena is actually the least bad of the bunch now that I think about it (IMO). The males are worst but still... The only options if you want to avoid corruption are Ian and Holly... About corruption, there are so many games Only about corruption and I played many, that now if I see one with Female protagonist that actually give a non corruption route, I jump on it right away. I make it my main playthrough and tend to explore other routes latter IF the game is good like this one is.